Ariya FF:'Deception,Intrigue...'#2 *Author's Note* Pg50 - Page 2

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Finally u updated! Hmm!
Thank u!

Congraculation for 2nd thread. Fantastic update Love it Shree wants forgot Riya by immersing himself in his work but it won't work . Love shree's concer for Arjun. M.K. Collect information about mr.gupta. M.K. Engaged the watchman of gupt's building and Riya and Tim went inside the apparmen . Tim find a secret drawer. And riya find a file and from the drawer and comes to know that Arjun's life is in danger. Riya's fellings were beautifully written after she comes to know that Arjun is in danger . Arjun was unable to belive that Riya hide something from them. Arjun's thought was beautifully described. Liza is in love with Shree they knows each other from kindergarden. Ayesha is upset because rathore shouted on her. Shree is so sweet he said sorry to ayesha. Is that undercover woman is Riya whom Ayesha meet? Overall beautiful update thanks for the pm Waiting for next parts.

Originally posted by: SilentSilver

Heyya girl!!

as for the comments its a reserve for now..

and for your challenge, I guess its the fact that Arjun was the lead at his school play Hamet..and in that play too the lead strives to take revenge from Claudius for murdering his father.
I am not too sure if i am right though!! But still wanted to be the first one to get the correct the answer and also to post something on this thread so that I dont loose it later :P

Awesome update...

Priya i vl kill you cnt u comment later abt the challenge arrgh

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Congraculation for 2nd thread. Fantastic update Love it Shree wants forgot Riya by immersing himself in his work but it won't work . Love shree's concer for Arjun. M.K. Collect information about mr.gupta. M.K. Engaged the watchman of gupt's building and Riya and Tim went inside the apparmen . Tim find a secret drawer. And riya find a file and from the drawer and comes to know that Arjun's life is in danger. Riya's fellings were beautifully written after she comes to know that Arjun is in danger . Arjun was unable to belive that Riya hide something from them. Arjun's thought was beautifully described. Liza is in love with Shree they knows each other from kindergarden. Ayesha is upset because rathore shouted on her. Shree is so sweet he said sorry to ayesha. Is that undercover woman is Riya whom Ayesha meet? Overall beautiful update thanks for the pm Waiting for next parts.

thanks for dedication dear
the update as usual was awesome
very well written

shree is concerned for arjun
arjun is really hurt becoz of riya
arjun life is in danger
waiting for next parts
update soon

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

thanks for dedication dear
the update as usual was awesome
very well written

shree is concerned for arjun
arjun is really hurt becoz of riya
arjun life is in danger
waiting for next parts
update soon

Commendable work dr.

The portrayal of their deep felt emotions was remarkably done.!!!!!!!

They all tried their best to divert their mind by keeping themselves busy but they failed miserably coz right now random thoughts about Riya ruled their minds which shows that how devasted they are from sudden relevation about her n also shows the depth of their relationship.

The way you anatomized the contrast in Arjun's behaviour through Shree's POV was fabulous.!!!!!!

In this part I saw a glimpse of silent but close bond that Choree share with their seniors.

OMG She opened the lock through her hairpin. She is way beyond my imagination.!!!!!!

Wht the!!!!!! Arjun's life is in danger. Wow Riya was almost broken after knowing the fact.

Loved the way Tim tried to pacified her n it shows that he knw about her equation with all of thm.

Now I m 100% sure that this Siddharth Gupta is handyman of none other then Sik. I mean who else it can be that wanted to kill Arjun.

Arjun couldn't concentrate on his work coz these sudden turn of events shaken him to the core.

OMG how much he had suffered since chilhood n still suffering. No wonder he's like this!!!!!

Why is love so complicated??????? Poor Arjun he is still in denial mode.

I hope that he realize his feelings soon n his anger doesn't overpower his love when thy meet.

He himself is confused. I mean he can't love her coz she lied to him or coz of the feeling of betrayal towards his wife or he simply want to run away this feeling of love.

Wow he also knw that Choree mimicked him n made fun of him behind his back.

Awww his heart calmed just by the memories of her smile.

Loved Liza's POV.

What is the scene between Shriza?????? Why they both are like this if thy knw echothr frm a longer time????? What happened btwn thm in college?????

I think Liza loved him but he never understood her. Is that the case or I m thinking way too much???????

Loved the way Shree apologized to Aisha. Wow Liza was pissed with Shree coz he ignored her. Loved both the girls POV in the end.

Loved it so so much!!!!!!!

Thanks for pm dr.

FIRST OF ALL CONGRATES FOR NEW THREAD