ToIPK writers& readers *DT note: P74* solution p94 - Page 5

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i agree with you dear...
mature content in a level is tolerable..
but in some stories...it is shown in such a brutal way...that it became unreadable staff...
n i read dark stories also...
but it doesn't mean to be a dark story the character have to be beast...
every character has its own meaning...
again every story should have a normal concept...
a girl can never forgive the person who raped her...
n the person who acted brutally...
i know ...as a reader we want a happy ending...
but it doesn't mean the victim has to forgive the culprit...

i agree with your point..

Totally agree with you
Yes we like reading dark but i seriously dont support khushi as a dumb and and as a monster (beast) i feel horrible when our own writers do that whome we love alot
I hope they get this

i think friend you have spoke straight 

Gosh, this was exactly what I think!

agree with all your points.
there are stories in which arnav raped khushi and khushi forgave him not to mention the name but that was illogical and top of that she married the same man.
yes they r fanfictions but no means no girl can accept her rapist as her hsband and love him.

and a commen things which i have came through is

wen arnav abuses khushi and rapes her comments are like this
"ohhh i hate arnav he is such a this this"
and wen he starts repenting and khushi dosent forgive him easily
"she should forgive him he is repenting yaar"


forgiveness is thete for the things which are forgivable not like rape or abuse.

i am also a writer who writes dark stories but i have never shown arnav has a rapist ir abuser have shown him cheating on khushi but that can be forgived.

and in most of the FF's we see arnav as a guy who only wants s*x s*x i mean we were never shown that arnav was a s*x lover in ipkknd
most of the FF's has arnav's character as a guy who use and throw girls but was tat ever shown in the show
NO it was not.

dont know who wrote arnav's character like this for first time but that person started this thing...

and some of fanfics make me hate arnav which i never want.
i always want to love arshi not to hate one of dem.


not against writer dark stories but the things like
arnav as rapist and abuser and a person who is like a devil please dont spoile the real AURA if arnav.


the writers should not be like
how ever wrong arnav does he will be forgiven in the name sake of a happy ending.
sad endings exist and they also get well with stories.
writers should also not be like this that how wrong arnav does he will not as for forgiveness coz he is The ASR.


tats all what i wanted to say.
kudos to Topic maker for making this topic.

I completely agree with you.. thanks a lot for making this post 😃

i remember a story where arnav had slapped and even held khushi's neck becouse of some lame reason which he thought khushi tried to hurt anjali but it was a MU
and khushi forgives him after his repentence.
some writers show arnav raping khushi or abusing her den in the name of repentence they show arnav feeling ashamed of himself and all and makr khushi forgive him but these kind of things are unforgivable.

you are absolutely right.  Dark stories are acceptable with some limits. Not totally out of character like beast, one who abuses women, domestic violent on women kind of things. 

Well, all I can say is that I am not one of those writers. My characters are very much human. and yes, I agree with what you said in the most.