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Iqra

@Iqraimran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#361

OMG, why this happened

first heart break ask me how it feel when your first crush walk away with any one else Ouch it hurts always you described khushi feeling so realistically and credibly. I catch last 4 chapters and OMG I hooked with story again ...all over again

I was on IF from last 2 /3 months but now I m here again for this :)

I really didn't feel arnav is a jerk he had life of his own but it hurts badly when he kissed lavanya

and I m happy in present khushi never give any bhaooo to arnav what if he was her first crush she's a strong girl ha na

but now arnav knows about his friend feeling for him

I wish khushi gives him a strong back answer her feelings for him never effect her life

just be positive

life ma ek heartbreak Tu Banta hai don't u think so agar heartbreak nhi hoga u never realize how much one relation had importance in ur life

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ambika94

@ambika94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

oh my heart is crying for khush poor gal

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: Sanaya.Barun
Haha thanks for mentioning my name! ;D not only your first Spammer, i'm spamming for the first time too 😆

Arnav is not a jerk. okay i agree. :D Its so complicated for the boy.. But i still blame him for not being able to see the hurt in Khushi's eyes!
And it broke my heart when he kissed La🥺
And Khushi saw that! :(

Awesome update! :)

Well then congratulations to us both! LOL! ;) :D

Arnav didnt see the hurt in Khushi's eyes, granted but did Khushi ever wait to wonder what her unexplained behaviour may be doing to him? Something to think about maybe...also I doubt your was the only heart that broke at the kiss...

Thanks for your feedback! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Sj236
UnRes
D way Arnav's turmoil was described was just fantastic.
Arnav actually had crush on Lavanya(i thought it may be like 'no strings attached' kinda relationship), dis may create complication :(
And khushi witnesses wat she isnt supposed to witness...
Great update. Thanx for d update.
Sorry for my muddled commnt, as i hav an xam in few hours and i came here for a distraction!
And u gave me an amazing distraction so dat i can go back to studies with peace.

Hasnt it created enough complication as it is? Lol.

And I mentioned it in the first flashback chapter that Arnav had been pursuing Lavanya for a few months before she agreed to give him a chance...now that could hardly be for a 'No strings attached' relationship, could it? :)

Best of Luck for your exams and thanks for the feedback! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: Arshi-Nikita123
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Damn ! It was fantastic..
So now Arnav knows about Khushi's feelings towards him..
I to be honest didn't very much want it to happen , but i'm sure there must be some reason why the story is proceeding this way.
I swear this update gave me goosebumps.
And , Arnav had strong feeling towards Lavanya is what i now understood..
Hmmm...it all looks quite complicated.
Really eager to know what happens next.
Update soon.
Thanks for the PM 😃

Thanks for the feedback and I hope you will like the story as it moves forward! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Amti4u
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LOL! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: moomin4455
Hmmm...ok I cannot blame Arnav here for not feeling for Khushi in that way at that particular moment. Khushi obviously interprets it as him ignoring his feelings for her. I can only guess what they both do next, but I'm going to assume it means Khushi shutting Arnav out of her life (to a certain extent) to protect her heart...
Great chapter!

Ah! The first person here who understands Arnav! :D

Thanks for your feedback! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: blueocean
This is sooo sad!!!

I rather have them fighting

You've written is so beautifully, the emotions touch my heart

Beautifully sad update

Thanks for your feedback! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: archana.mh17
Ok, 8A & B! You are one of the very few writers in this forum that write stories with a realistic essence in them! I love that! How many times have we or the people around us reacted, exactly the way Khushi did with Arnav in 8A! Its not fair to the person at the receiving end, but what the hell-it wasn't fair to Khushi, either, she hadn't asked for things to get complicated, either! Anyway, very close to teenage reality-that 8A!
Now, to 8B-I'm going to, really try to be objective, here, but I don't know why I'm so irrationally mad at Arnav! Its not his fault that he likes another girl so much, but what is so annoying is in 8A, its said that Arnav had ended up giving even the role of the best friend to Lavanya, although done, unintentionally-oh, the effects of that first crush & all! Understandable, perhaps,but I cannot help but feel that Khushi is, possibly more hurt by the loss of a friendship that was real than the non-existence of a love that she craved for! That is, partly her fault, too, but, clearly Arnav had been too wrapped up in his own little world with Lavanya to notice those changes in Khushi's behaviour! That means, ignorance was his biggest fault, perhaps! Let's see where the story goes from here! Nice writing in 8A & B, by the way!

Thanks so much for your feedback! :D

So first up you made me blush with your appreciation for my writing style and I am happy you find 'Gupta Home Designs - Your house, Our dream' close to reality and that you were able to resonate with Arnav and Khushi and their behaviour. That is for me the biggest compliment as I am trying to write this story as close as possible to how things happen all around us and how we ourselves react to it.

About feeling an irrational anger towards Arnav...you answered my apprehensions about the same in the very word you used - irrational. We feel an irritation towards him because we know he was being ignorant, we know that he let Khushi down but what we perhaps get a glimpse of here is that Khushi too has been ignorant of his feelings for Lavanya but more importantly about his confusion regarding her unexplained change in behaviour...what say? Yes, he got wrapped up in Lavanya but maybe he thought Khushi would understand being his best friend and not to forget he thought she was happy with Varun...?

Yes, Arnav has been ignorant but he has been so without meaning to be so while Khushi may have been deliberately shutting things out maybe?

Once again, thanks for your comment! :D

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FieryPhoenix

@FieryPhoenix

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: Rayolight
Fantastically written chapter...sigh...Arnav really likes Lavanya...hmmm...
Can't wait to see where it's gonna go from here...

So in waiting...
Rayolight

Thanks for your feedback! :D