Asya OS: Prequel to 'Dil, Bhaang and More' - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
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The 2nd part...I mean the next divison for me..
Manofying Daadi...who was already ready... Zoya's Monologues were hilarious.. 😆
Ayaan is also learning the hardship of Marriage life...like his Bhaijaan...and the irony its her Bhabhi's sister only...who is dhaying Zulm on her... 😆
But I liked Daddi's words also ki these young generation have only created this happy world from their own hands..so who are they to stop them...and it will be a start of new rasm...altogther...for them..hahaha..
Again a new info...about sephoia trees...i didn't got the thing properly... they are tallest becauuse they were affected by a fire accident...or what..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well I read the last few parts and they were absolutely amazing! Now aaya finally have doctors permission to have intercourse! So they'll be very active at if. And I love the shireen n asad part mkst here! That's genuine issue which is possible in real life too. So I guess that was the highlight!❤️ rest comments will come later on. Sorry yar exams lined up and still not much study!!😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Here comes the Godh bharai part...
The function seem very interesting...similar to how Hindu culture also follows...with some little things here and their..
The Jewellery thing...between Zoya and Razia & Gaffur was very good part...but I wonder...Zoya likes Indian wears na..but no jewellery...but nevertheless she knows better...her own taste of choice...
The photos and GiF's here used on AsYa pic..and GaZia's pic with Zoya..was M.A..truly fitted the bill...
The games were very funny...( Thanks Iansomer and your other friends fo that.)
The Nappy wala was funny...all the experience and training..had made Gaffy well equipped as of now...and then it reminds me of that part where he prommised that he will change his Grandchild's nappy's when Zoya confronted him in the hospt after ' THAT ' incident..
But again...Ayaan was as careless as ever...Humeiroo ko bahut training deni hai abhi issey..
Asad's was the most...cutest in this all...he will teach his baby all the angles..while changing his / her nappy only...but that part was very cute and adorable...and Zoya taking Asad's side...infront of Dilshaad...
And then that eyelock...just the time when the descended down the stage...with the nappied baby and those emotions were wonderful...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Then Dilshaad's POV...was perfect...like the way you presented her POV when AsYa united after 'THAT' incident...on the breakfast table..where she was reading some newspaper...and remincising those days..and then feeling content about the today.
How accurately she defined all AsYa* antics , their Aankh maicholis'..,their Eyelocks..and tugging and all...how much she observe them...it like she is reading them...
And she has to play the Cop here...as in from the starting only...when Asad has become soo Behaya'...infront of her..all thanks to her laadli Bahu*..but it is good..Asad needed that lightness in his life..
Then also her observation about Rashid was also very emotional part...
Asad's part with the baby was also very adorable and good...
You also didn't forget to remind us of those they ( AsYa ) write on eachother..
Asad's monologue...was very mature..and very thoughtfull also..
And Zoya's fears about baby's head...are just hilarious...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heeere comes the last part of my InFamous Rants...
Well I guess you like giving proper footage to all couples...like here also AyRa..also got a very cute scene...
Well I guess.Now Ayaan..is truly in his Bhaijaan"s shoes now...because he is getting jealous of Asad because his own wife was not cheering for him...
He got the taste of his own unintentional medicine or thing which he did during Ajmer track...
Even that Monkey's kick...which you discussed here ...was also a funny part...
Well I have a OS which shows the exact same Ayaan's and Asad's fear...of giving Ayaan to hold the baby..but he turns out to be a better baby sitter..
That monkey thing reminded me that how long we have come Dixiej...you as a writer and I as a reader...Pretty Nostalgic..
Brilliant writing as always...
Loved reading it...Continue soonish..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3765216#p93585962

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3751874

These are the links...if you feel like doo check them.
These are about Ayaan's and AsYa's baby...but worth a read..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Dee... 😃

Thanx for the PM...😊
Well first of all Before I😳 start of my Rant..😆 I would like to say this ki I know the time difference is their...and even the show never followed the diff...but at that time also during Dilshaad's 10 day challange...it took them 1 1/2 months...to show the wedding...but then again the Eid spl epi was on time...so As J.D said..maybe...Writers liberty at bay...aNd Now I accept that.. 😊
Your Post answered and cleared all the things J.D. ⭐️
And yesh...like you I also need more...till the time you feel...you continue...I will be their for it... 😃
Now I will start...ranting. 😉



Aw thanks Mayurchan! Haha, I remember the 10-day challenge that took 40-50 days on the show! Gosh, I hope I'm not that bad! But at least I don't resort to gimmicks like chicken blood and acid in mehendi! I can prolong her pregnancy to 15 months but hopefully I made the story a little more realistic! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well the first part...started of With AsYa still discussing over that Trust fund..
Hmm...waise Shireen's idea was very good and thought full...but Zoya's time fo this Idea is very tricky...uske Hormones...they will always keep her skeptical about this..fund I guess..
The Idea about apps for women...and then the money used for them...was very good...
And the thought process again...is very very good and deserves applauds... 👏
I also feel confused with the terms you used...and then Zoya's Tech'Verse...like that ' SitRep ' thing..Ha.Ha.Haa...
Bechara Asadd...
And again I got to know a piece of history..which was never discussed before I guess...the strikes...like Asad said...how do you know all these...pata hai you read...bt phir bhi kaiseee...
The past memories...again revisited...and now this time..they are healing each other of every bad and worse past..memories..with newer one...and this is very very touching too see and read ..




I read articles about the Nobel peace prize winner. They got 1000s of women in the country to go on sex strikes. This is a powerful thing because in that region there is a lot of violence against women and this was immensely hard. Only then did the men take a stand against the civil war.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

The 2nd part...I mean the next divison for me..
Manofying Daadi...who was already ready... Zoya's Monologues were hilarious.. 😆
Ayaan is also learning the hardship of Marriage life...like his Bhaijaan...and the irony its her Bhabhi's sister only...who is dhaying Zulm on her... 😆
But I liked Daddi's words also ki these young generation have only created this happy world from their own hands..so who are they to stop them...and it will be a start of new rasm...altogther...for them..hahaha..
Again a new info...about sephoia trees...i didn't got the thing properly... they are tallest becauuse they were affected by a fire accident...or what..?




I always imagined that Dadi would be a great ally to the younger generation but the show squandered it. Sequoia trees are the oldest living thing on the planet and the tallest tree.



Look how huge they are! Their seeds are unique because they don't germinate automatically by falling to the ground. They are hidden inside a hard cone and that cone can be opened only by a fire or a special squirrel. These seeds remain dormant for years! Isn't that cool!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

Well I read the last few parts and they were absolutely amazing! Now aaya finally have doctors permission to have intercourse! So they'll be very active at if. And I love the shireen n asad part mkst here! That's genuine issue which is possible in real life too. So I guess that was the highlight!❤️ rest comments will come later on. Sorry yar exams lined up and still not much study!!😔




Hi A.Kh_20! Thanks so much for leaving a comment even though I know you must be busy with exams! Good luck and hope to hear from you whenever you have the time. Take care and best wishes for acing the exams!

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