Arhi FF : Peek-a-boo #1 [ Completed ]

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#401

Originally posted by: 1chilly
V, yeh kya baat hui! Sumer is such a flirt and you don't know! 😊

I love this story, Mints. Just my kind of light hearted story.

I love Sumer, the chhotawala and the badawala.

Payal seems to be under his spell though she is in denial mode.

Arnav and Khushi have such chemistry we readers can feel it.

That is the power of your writing.

Loved the update.

Charu Masi zlso thanks you from Sumer's side..

Charu, Sumer thanks Charu Masi too..and don't remind me...flirting and girls will soon happen in real life too!,

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Res!

Will Unres not before saturday😛

Edited!

Iss update ko kya naam doon?

I loved this khushi, who no matter how hard tried couldn't help but just dream about those caramel orbs.

Also, arnav ji is suffering from the same thing. Not able to pry his thoughts away from his 'angel'

I wonder how much happy they would've been to see each other in the place they least expected too.

This quote for arnav '

Love is the most unexpected amnesia. It lets you forget about more than 6 billion other people in this world.'

I am glad Sumer understood his bestie's condition & left them alone.

A question popping in my head -What's up with this sumer-payal history?😛

P.S. Maaf karna, not much detailed comment! But my comments will be like this only😭

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

by reading this update...i could just smell a romance brewing in the air...just want to read on and on please update soon...loving the story

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Awesome

They met

Thank god Sumer went away and payal had to follow him
I hope they talk a lot

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

Wow ! This is was an awesome update! I really liked the way they were noticing each other...ooo...*winks and whistles*

i understand the effort u put behing every update dear, and i feel i dont do justice to it by complimenting thru my comments...

I somuch wish to post longer comments but my studies are takin a toll on me..!

thanx for the happy reading moment and the pm!

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Shazeia

@shaz007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

Wow a wonderful update so since Payal is gone wonder if Arnav would really say a word to his angel or as it seems just pass the moment in silence. Do update soon...

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SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

HEY MINTS THAT WAS AN AWESOME UPDATE. SO HAPPY THEY MET. WAS SO EXCITED AND I HOPE HE TALKS TO HER SINCE PAYAL AND SUMER HAVE GONE OFF. OMG CANT WAIT TO READ MORE.PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND THANKS FOR THE PM DEAR.

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

Beautiful update! Wonder what they will talk about!!! Thanks for the pm.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

good story...eagerly looking forward to their sizzling chem to sizzle more

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

Mints...brilliant chapter once again.

I loved the whole Sumer - Payal angle that you have brought into this story as well. 😉

Loved the whole fashion show scene where Mr. I am lost Raizada could not see anything beyond Khushi. 😆 And khushi being khushi was at her usual happy best without a care in the world.

And well now they are left alone by their friends but since this story is called Peekaboo i am sure some 'Aman' will disturb them and the meeting will be adhoora till the next time fate and destiny throws them together. 😉

Some more Peekaboo till they find Hamesha wala love. 😳

OK now let Liza massi also join Charu massi in wishing Sumer bitwa a Happy wala b'day and great party on Saturday.

Thanks for the PM

P.S: I have left a note for you on your OS thread too. I want to see an index now. BAS.

You have written so much that ek Index toh banta hai aab.

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago