Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel2001

This was beautifully written. I have no words to say. Which is why now I'm just going to wait for the next update :)

I really don't know what to say to this one.. Sorry.. Kaan pakadke :)
Speechless kar diya mujhe!



Awww... then I think my story is living up to its title...
KHAMOSHIYAN!! πŸ˜‰

Enjoy reading!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SPraba

OMG MINTS THAT WAS SO EMOTIONAL. HIS APOLOGY WAS FROM THE HEART AND IT WAS SO SAD TO SEE HIM IN THAT STATE BUT HE DID NOT PROFUSE HIS FEELINGS TO HER YET. AND POOR KHUSHI SHE FORGAVE HIM AND IS THINKING OF LEAVING HIM. GOSH CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE. VERY WELL WRITTEN THANKS FOR THE PM


Thanks Praba... I am glad you enjoyed the update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shree10

Mints, Finally caught up with all 3 chapter. Yet to get over the laugh riot of Didi Ki Saut!

About this SS, how many times we have read redemption stories , it's never enough! I think mainly bcos we never got to see any redemption on show inspite of atrocities ASR piled up on Khushi.

I really liked this SS. Eagerly looking forward to how ASR earns Khushi's love.


Hey Shree... I agree, the redemption track is like a dream for IPK lovers...
This is just my version of how I would have loved IPK to be...
How I wanted Arnav to ask for forgiveness and Khushi to stand up keeping her self-respect intact.
And yes at the end our lover boy... has to woo his lady right back!! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thnks for d pm 
updated my cmnt on page 22
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

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Unres 
I really think how u describe dis story is just awesum πŸ‘
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I mean hats off d way u describe d feeling of both i cnt imagine anyone could d justice to dis πŸ˜Š  

Were frm u get dis feeling dat u describe dem so perfectly πŸ˜³

U literally made me cry wid arnav talk β˜ΊοΈ
D way he opened up infrnt of khushi was just spellbound for me
How he brokedown lyk i thought dis is happening in real😭

Khushi finaly gave arnav a chance to speak

So nw khushi also felt happy aftr arnav hearty explanation⭐️

I m soo happy c forgave him 
bt y d hell arnav didnt speak of his contract marriage wich khushi mu and nw arnav have to somethng to save his love life 

I m really looking forward for d next part nw



Hey thank you so much for your lovely comment...
I am glad you are enjoying the story...
And the hero has to patao his heroine... nahi toh story kaise khatam hogi??
Its time to get into some action for ASR!!
Keep reading!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23



Hey thank you so much for your lovely comment...
I am glad you are enjoying the story...
And the hero has to patao his heroine... nahi toh story kaise khatam hogi??
Its time to get into some action for ASR!!
Keep reading!!
😊



I guess u dnt knw my name soo i m telling it Pooja u cn call me ..😊

I am waiting for d hero to patao the heroine jaldi πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Asr in action mode wowww getting excited 
Yaa i will keep reading i cnt miss it nw β­οΈ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chetna19

Waiting


he expressed each nd everything to khushi...
from starting...feeling guilty for his deeds...he is too short in his words..but he sorry fr all his deeds...
awesome part mints di...
i understand khushi condition...she loves him alot ..how can she forget everything ...
emotional nd beautiful update..D bond of arnav khushi ws beautiful...
cant wait for next dii...eagerly waiting...plzz update soon...



Thank you Chetna... will update soonish!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was a very emotional chapter and so beautifully written. I just hope Arnav doesn't waste any more time now
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Posted: 10 years ago
i just read part 2 and 3.
awesome, arnav speech of apology was way to heart touching.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Amiarisme

i just read part 2 and 3.

awesome, arnav speech of apology was way to heart touching.


Thank you... πŸ˜Š