SWARON OS:THE WAIT - Page 4

Originally posted by: vaishu88

awesome update loved d way u showed sharon's feelings for swayam not being next to her during her b'day.. she dancing angrily.. n swaron convo was cute... loved d reaction she gave wen she saw swayam.. loved d way she acted without realizing gand n her dad behind her.. loved d part were u explained how sharon's dad love n accepted swayam as his son-in-law coz of his character was nice... lovely os...

Awesome update, I liked how Swayam guessed that she must be dancing, her joke that he can't be better than her, surprise, kiss demand and finding others around them 😲, Rey's comment 😆 and the last part slamming door on our faces was awesome I am still smiling.🤣. Great job 👏

Originally posted by: TaareynSwaron

Awesome update, I liked how Swayam guessed that she must be dancing, her joke that he can't be better than her, surprise, kiss demand and finding others around them 😲, Rey's comment 😆 and the last part slamming door on our faces was awesome I am still smiling.🤣. Great job 👏

"The wait" name itself defined sharon's mind state that how much she wanted swayam to be with her on her birthday!! i loved how sharon's dad aka swayam's would be father in law adored him!! and that surprise and sharon's demand😆 she should listen first and then speak!!😃 but it is fantastically written and thanks for pm!!

sooo cute  awesome os thanks for pm😊😊

Originally posted by: rinkubathija12

"The wait" name itself defined sharon's mind state that how much she wanted swayam to be with her on her birthday!! i loved how sharon's dad aka swayam's would be father in law adored him!! and that surprise and sharon's demand😆 she should listen first and then speak!!😃 but it is fantastically written and thanks for pm!!

Grt Os loved reading it 😛

 
THAT WAS FANTASTIC AND AWESOME OS... LOVED IT...

Originally posted by: Mihi4VruShan

Reserved.

Unres..

Wow wow wow.. you write so beautifully.. I hope you have written more for I would love to read more of your works..

Coming to the OS, it was beautifully penned...Loved the SwaRon convo and the way he surprised her.. 

I wish you could continue it..
Flawless and beautiful OS. 

Keep writing..😳