SWARON OS:THE WAIT - Page 3

Aww such a sweets os 

how cute!!!poor sharon was in such a bad mood!!really luved how you described how much she she missed Swayam!!You did a really good job describing her pain!!!i luved the ending poor sharon didn't even let swayam finish in excitement!!!that was a cute swaron moment!!!!REALLY REALLY good job!!

Shooo...cute OS
n especially wat was dat at endng...dey went upstairs while slamming door on our face...hahaha...dis makes os more cute...

Wow...such a cuteee n adorable update...luved it ❤️ ❤️

Originally posted by: Vishaka45

Shooo...cute OS
n especially wat was dat at endng...dey went upstairs while slamming door on our face...hahaha...dis makes os more cute...

Wonderful os...it was flawless and beautiful..keep writing such amazing os and plzzz pm me when u write anything..

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Originally posted by: swaron_pk

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wow !!it was another mind blowing OS from u 😊 i always love ur style of writing :)

sharons wait was beautifully penned down , i loved swaron convo on the phone and especially that email scene i loved it😳

i liked sharon's dad ,especially when he said that they should have wrapped swayam as a gift😆

sharon's demand and gang teasing was amazing 😳

i totally loved the OS,it was sweet 😃

 

Very sweet OS. You write very well. Thanks for the PM :)

awesome update loved d way u showed sharon's feelings for swayam not being next to her during her b'day.. she dancing angrily.. n swaron convo was cute... loved d reaction she gave wen she saw swayam.. loved d way she acted without realizing gand n her dad behind her.. loved d part were u explained how sharon's dad love n accepted swayam as his son-in-law coz of his character was nice... lovely os...