SWARON OS:THE WAIT - Page 2

Wow it was amazing dear I loved it

that was amazing 👏  

soo cute ...it ws lovelyy😳

It was nice os

sharon longiness for swayam was beautifully portrayed
she carving for him while dancing her heart out.

Swayam call her nd both of them know each other very well.
Swayam came back on her bday as her gift nd she belated happy

Sharons dad surprised her as her gift being swayam.
Gang teasing her nd her dad smirking at her

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Goshhh...Medha...that is so not fair...
To write so so well...
It was beautiful...
the way you portray their emotions and the characters seem so real...
Her Wait...her longing...for him...
I loved the way you showed Mr Raiprakash's POV...
Who won't adore a Son-in-law like Swayam...
Awww...loved the moment she opened the door and was pleading for kiss..
Diva sharon...lover boy Swayam...so perfect together...
Loved her father's gift to her...SWAYAM..
Just that he didnt wrapped her gift in a box ...😆
U can make ur reader smile and cry with ur write ups...
They are simply PERFECT...
Ur write ups are like poetry in motion...
So beautiful...
I am officially ur fan now😳

Luv
Deep

edited comment on page 1.😳

would be son in law...

Aww it was such a cute and adorable os
Loved it

Originally posted by: spongy

would be son in law...

my god aaj toh tumne mujhe khush kar diya... 😊😊😊

mr.raiprakash swayam se full impressed...

aur kyun na ho swayam is just perfect...

*touchwood*

story was beautiful

well written os 👏👏👏

loved the feeling.. wether i was anger or love... 😊😊

in all it was a really cute os.. 😳😳😳

thnk u for the pm... 😊😊

So cute n adorable