ArHi SS- Brewing Up- *Completed*

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Beautifull,heartwarming SS.Enjoyed reading it.:)

The attraction Khushi felt for Arnav.He reserved,she open,bubbly girl.She dint try to hide her admiration for him,dreaming,thinking abt him.Like any girl in real having crush on guy.<3

Arnav trying to avoid any heartbreak ,the reason being his deformity.Love is beyond appearances,its connection betn. Souls encased in physical bein.Your story protrays it So beautifully.<3

La is sweet,smart,and Aman always eager but very good nautanki.;)I raise my tea cup to these two*cheers*they did play small significant part in brewing up the love.:D

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

That was a sweet and refreshing story - quite different from other stories. Read the whole thing at one go and loved it.

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Read this story in one go..its really beautiful & differend..it has a unique freshness that filled my heart with happiness..thanks for that..do continue writing

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

Looking forward to reading this...SS..

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Oh...such a amazing story...read it in one go...

So well..written...WOW!

Thx...so much, and would like to add...you write so emotionally and beautifully!

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HIPKKND

@HIPKKND

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Very beautifully written...the story line is different, yet you managed to capture the essence so well...thanks!

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

It was a pleasure reading this story.

A different concept, beautifully written.

Loved it.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Woo Hoo! Suuch a lovely SS. Totally diffrent.
Lovely Lavanya
khdoos prof. Jha
cheeku Aman
loving NK
no Anjali Di with Chotte
and The great Arnav and Khushi.
Loved the SS. Loved how Khushi proposed him and made him agree too and perfect ending.

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Coming with my comments in the morning :-)

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#250

Anupama, firstly apologies for reading such a brilliant story this late (I don't know why these days all my comments starts with an apology :( )

You have done such a fabulous and applaud worthy job by describing a place with so much vividness where you have never been to 👏 You left me thoroughly impressed!

I liked it that your Arnav was not perfect. Many a times we have read stories in which he is a Greek God but here in your story you have given it a realistic touch. Life is not perfect, people are not perfect 👍🏼

The story was slow, yet fast paced. It was slow in narration but fast in creating love between the couple.

There were many moments where I had this expression on my face

My favourite parts were the scooty ride and the kiss ❤️

You had a writer hidden within you all this while and now only you started to write!

I will be reading all your One Shots asap 😃