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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#231

this was lovely...and it is over just like that...aww...but i loved the update and the ff of course...it was a beautiful read...and refreshing just lke darjiling tea...

loved lavanya, her advice on not giving up and asking the questions did defenetly do wonders...and the mighty ASR fell for it...

the most beautiful scene for me when she sees his deformity she doesnt even blink an eye but accepting him as he is and also mentioning it to him that she loves him for him as a whole...

what else does arnav need...he was scared of this...and this lad proved that he was wrong and there are beautiful souls out there...you explained it in a lovely way...i fell in love with these two characters again...they are just lovely and real...

the making up was sweet...and thank you for this beautiful piece...if you do write next please do let me know...would love to read them too...and make them as refreshing...

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#232

I am so glad this is 'Completed' . So no stalking and spamming required. I like that. After proclaiming loudly that I wouldn't read it, I sneaked up to the thread, but the 'Completed' was a welcome sight!

This was a very nice SS. Loved the setting (I am a tea fanatic 😉). Loved tea-man and tea-woman.

and the Darjeeling oolong eyes, in place of the usual hazel and Caramel 😛

The Scooty-ve romance was so hat-ke 😆 . Loved it.

Most of all, I liked the insecure Arnav and the confident Khushi . It was very well handled too.

Nice work.

And finally ... the most loved Aman Mathur is Khushi's assistant! That was an absolute first!!!! 👏

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#233

i jst read ur story...all chapters together...and its absolutely delightful...
u r a wonderfull writer... i was literally falling in love with each chapter , when u decided to end it... nevertheless i loved every single bit of it...
u brought a smile on my face throughout... simple and sweet,,, :)
i hope u write alot and lot of stories...

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Awesome end to the story. Sorry was out on vacation and hence the delay in reading this and posting my comment. I loved the way you have written this story and loved to read Arnav's acceptance of the love that Khushi has for him. This has been one of my favorites on Arnav-Khushi after IPK ended. Will be following you on your new story too. Thanks for your pms.

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#235

I've just read the full story and its true when they say that true beauty lies in simplicity! This simple story is so vivid in its imagery and alive in its emotions, and can be best described as beautiful and rich as the valleys of Darjeeling. Beautiful story, I hope we get an epilogue!

Manreet :)

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#236

Okay.. I was recommended this by shree10 and I just started and this is not my proper comment but I'm already in love with your story and I'm just on the third chapter and you should have seen me telling myself (when Lavanya appeared in the story) "she's the sister, she's the sister", I was chanting, more than anything and THEN the whoop of joy at the "Bhai!". If only you could have seen. *panting out of breath*

Man, am I happy!!

😆😆😆

Off to read more! I'll finish commenting properly soon. :)

Edited by maverickmartin - 12 years ago

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#237

lovely story..when shree10 recommended me this story and told me its a short one I never imagined it to be so beautifully written one...the setting of this story is so beautiful, as well as all the characters too...a different one, but a variety! enjoyed it!

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Of course. Arnav can't get over his insecurities in the blink of an eye. Good that Arnav has a bollywood inspired sister who as good as told Khushi 'ja ji ley apni zindagi'...

Arnav you won't fall in love with Khushi, you already have fallen for her. And why wouldn't you? She has accepted you completely, loves everything about you 😊

They should really serve chai as welcome drink in all their wedding functions 😆

I don't like chai but i loved this story.

No need for saying thanks re. I read what i like. So thank you for writing this story...

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jg12

@jg12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Hi, Beautiful story and hopefully you will write a sequel !

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Hi Anupama,

Read this SS over last few days, the story, the concept, the setting is as refreshing as freshly brewed "masala chai" which is my favorite.

I am new to the FF world and haven't read lot of stories but whatever exploring I did, haven't come across any story that shows Arnav with physical deformity. You brilliantly handled the Khushi's love to look beyond physical appearance and Arnav's insecurities that stopped him from professing his love.

Lavanya is such a sweet, cute and funny character - loved her.

Cheeku alias Aman was anything but cupid on the show so thank you for making him the cupid here. He is such a tease!!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this SS.👏👏👏