VIRIKA FF-LOVE STORY part27-pg90 - Page 40

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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update 

Viren is seriously so naughty 

Viren why do you always want a kiss

Aaw they are so cute love them both

Loved how Jeevika cares for Viren and she was so worried about him aaw bless her

Thanks for the pm please continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update! Loved it ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome updates loved virika chemistry awww viren sitting on her lap
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Posted: 11 years ago
this was simplyyy awesome and a cuteee update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ณ

viren had a fever awww poor viren but how sweetly and lovingly jeevika was taking care of viren...

and the kiss part was lovely... viren wanted to have cherry...naughtyyyโ˜บ๏ธ

loved when viren wanted to watch the match but jeevika said no to him...but later on for viren's happiness she agreeed simplyyy sweet it was...๐Ÿ˜ณ

AWESOME UPDATE mehak...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
thanx for the pm...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
woow such a long update๐Ÿ˜Š
omg omg viren has high fever feel so sad
and jeevs was just perfect as a mother
 viren is too naughty he bit her hand๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
miku miku miku ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—  ๐Ÿค—
do you how much i missed this story of yours??? ๐Ÿ˜”
you took so so long to update...๐Ÿ˜ญ

was so glad after recieving your pm...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
i was literally dancing...

Coming to the update...๐Ÿ˜†
I really dont know where to start from...๐Ÿ˜•
after reading this...i have become absolutely speechless...
There are no words left with me to describe you and your updates...๐Ÿ˜ณ

the long wait was really worth it!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
it was so so long update...i m seriously so very much happy right now after reading this..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

jeevika was so scared when viren was not getting up...loved the way she hugged him..she is too cute...๐Ÿ˜Š

viren wiped her tears and hugged her.
viren-dekha meri to baat hi kuch aur h,thoda sa kuch hua nhi ki ladkia meri seva karne k liye ready hoti h.
jeevika chuckled and hit his arm-acha!bhot ho gya ab natak chalo ab so jao.

love how viren always suceeds in pacifing jeevs...๐Ÿ˜ณ

Kada scene was too good too...๐Ÿ˜†

viren-vaise princess...i did what u said.dont u think u should also fulfill my wish.i mean i drank d kada for u,u should also do whaqt i say.
jeevika was first confused but later she understood his intensions-hm i think u r right.
viren-hm...i wanted to taste cherry.
jeevika winked-srry viren but i cant bring u strawberry in dis season
viren-no u can give it to me in every season.u r having it right now too.
jeevika-kidhar.if u know where it is den i will bring it for u
viren touched her lips signaling d place of cherries.
jeevika-kya hua viren.mere lips pe kuch laga h kya.
viren a lil irritated-are nhi yaar.i want to taste d cherries now.
jeevika-y r u behaving like dis.i dont know how to bring cherries now.
viren irritated-i dont want u to bring cherries, i want a kiss from u.
jeevika giggled-u r so cute viren *she laughed again*
viren-so u were messing wid me right
"maybe"she said while getting up.but vireb pulled her back.
viren-dont try to b over smart miss choudhry.
jeevika- viren u should take rest.
viren-u r not letiing me to.u make me lose my senses.so what can i do...
jeevika blushed-shutup viren! let me go now
viren-first my kiss
jeevika-no
viren made a puppy face-plz
jeevika-fine but just one
viren-hm
jeevika approached  virens lips and kissed him.she broke d kiss quickly and ran.
viren-are jeevika!

loved this one the most...๐Ÿ˜ณ

the last part was too good to be described..
you are a hell amazing writer!! ๐Ÿ‘

miku you are seriously the best!!
Really love u loads...<3 ๐Ÿค—

Next update very soon...๐Ÿ˜‰

Aaliya โค๏ธ

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Awww viren had fever bt loved how jeevika cared n took care of him sooo sweet๐Ÿ˜›
lolz viren n his naughtynesssโ˜บ๏ธ awww d kiss๐Ÿ˜ณ
d last bit was sooo sweet n cute n jeevika admiring viren hayeiii๐Ÿ˜Š
continue soon n thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
My Dear Mehek...
Love you Sooo much!!!!
Awwie...such a sweet update!!!
Jeevs taking care of him! How cute!!!
tht was so adorable!!!
You knw... even i was scared whn he didnt open his eyes!! ๐Ÿ˜ญ
He had head ache...๐Ÿ˜ญ
But thn...she massaged his head! Awwie!!
The "sherni se panga" bit...lol!! ๐Ÿคฃ
The update was suuupppeeerrr awesome!!!!
Thnk u sooo much for the dedication!!!!
Please keep giving sooo awesome updates!! And that too super soon!!!
Loooveee You!!! โค๏ธ

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww
This is so adorable!
sorry for not commenting before!
this is so beautiful!
Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wowww
Read all the parts in one go all over again
This is an awesum ff 
I luv this love story
Waitin fr ur nxt update
Thnx fr the pms