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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anamika90



hey if my saran is magician in writing...then you too are a magician of comments...😉
vajram baby...we love you...😳
and these stars...hehehe...lol...i copied...😆
if we are sad...these comments get a smile on our face dear...😃
and yup...a boost...to give a better piece of work...to our sweet reader...😊
love you saran...vajram a tonnn...
❤️ ❤️




awe 😊
thanqqq baby😃
it means a lot to me😳😳
love you damnit❤️
Edited by vajram - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -saranya-



oh baby angel...loved it to the core...oh my goodness wht hav u done yaar!!! 🤣
im laughng like a mad grl here...

stolen frm vajram... 😆 😆 😆
all ur reactions...loved it...

i was laughng hard reading besharam...besharam... 🤣🤣

thnks a ton dear...lovely comment 🤗
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baby
you are free to use my stars
no need to say that you have stolen it

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Posted: 12 years ago
very well written ff...I read all parts in one go... i'm loving it... update soon...

send me the blog link too
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vajram

res😳😳

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unress😳😳

hey hi.,MAGICIAN
loved the update darling
of-course i was mesmerized by ur words
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she just winds me in blackmagic... scorpion... i wil never let her near me to sting me to pain yet another tym...nvr again...miss kushi gupta...never...

arnav 😡
she will not do any thing
u r the one
who will get lost in her beauty
so, please
it is better to stop all this blaming job
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hey magician one request yar
plz never again in the update
dont describe arnav charc yar
you know i was reading that part only
for more than 10 times
you know na we can't get out of him so easily
i mentally kicked myself to come out of his trance
to read the further update
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how could i?? damn i could i !!

i kissed her tat way...??
bcz u love her,
you can't stop ur mind
when it comes to khushi
"samji ya samjav"

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hw she was anxious...
hw she relaxed wen his lips touched her ...
hw she clutched hs shrt...
he unknwingly caressed tat place over his shrt wer she clutched then...
hw she was lost in his eyes...
hw dreamy her eyes looked...
hw confused those ques wer held out of her eyes...
hw perfect she was in his arms...
hw stunned world looked tat instant..
hw pure tat kiss was...
hw soft her puffy eyes felt...
hw cute she was...
hw vulnerable tat little thng was...
ASR rose up...
Hw deceivng looks cn be...
Hw innocent she luks aftr havng so much venom...
Hw cute she looks when she is a devil...
Hw soothing her silence seem when she tear apart me once she open her mouth...

i want to ask you one think saranya
Hw can you write like this..
Hw can you frame this type of sentences ...
Hw can you portrait the sentences so elegantly...
Hw can you write beautiful emotional sentences...
Hw can you make us mesmerize with ur words...
Hw can you make us soo addicted to ur works...
Hw can you play the magic of words...
hou can you saranya

HOW CAN YOU???

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I will tear u apart this tym...
I will make u go thru this...
I will teach u how is it to feel helpless...
I wil teach u hw is it to get humiliated...
I will make u pay ur deeds..

ARNAV
if u'll do any type of these activities with khushi
then, i am sure that
i am going to kill
"SORRY ANAMIKA BABY
HE IS NOT WORTH OF YOU MY DARLING"

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Yes..yes...yes this is it...
Damn hell this is all it is...
REVENGE...
Im not concerned for u...no...

i am damn sure that
u cannot take revenge on khushi
bcz u love her
ur mind can't work by seeing khushi
hehehe😆
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omg
arnav have kept a tight security on khushi
even he have tapped the phone
poor khushi
she is just like a bird in a cage
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khushi-Sanchana convo
is too touchy yar
by reading it
i am sure that
in the past ARSHI is soo close to each other
even her mom know him
but how??
"shravya wait for 8-chapter baby"
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arnav is a heart less person yar
how can he do like this with khushi
he have thrown her in the pool
poor khushi
soo much on her way now
i hope it should not cross the limits
if so
we can't see khushi's state
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i am going to read next chapter
to know what is coming on her way
bye
see you in the next comment
saranya darling





ufff... thnks a lot yaar... ☺️ blushing so much...
im so glad tat my wrds entertain u guys max...⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Found this FF while surfing the forum aimlessly. Loved the story line and the characterisation really well written.
Really looking forward to see how they will manage a greater understand and as ASR is so used to be with different girls will he just stick to Khushi even if he says whatever he is doing he is doing it in the name of revenge.
How will Khushi resist Arnav or ASRs charm and charisma as she was in love with him before.
What happens when the obvious misunderstanding gets eradicated.
I hope you add me to your Buddy list as I don't want to miss out on this wonderful story and send me the Blog link.
Thank you for taking time and writing this exciting FF.
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Posted: 12 years ago
as usual awesome update...
keep going... pm me the link
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the Link. I can't say much as the rules won't allow, it was very well written felt the sensation to the tips of my feet, was too hot to handle, loved it. I really love this FF still can't believe that you are writing for the first time. I love this dark Arnav. What happend 2 years ago? Can't wait to find out.
Thanks for the PM. Please update soon can't wait to know what happens next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful parts just read them in one go
really loved it
plz pm me next time
plz pm me the blog link plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi, I read three chapters in one go. Awesome😊

I'm really loving this story. Plz can I have the blog link, if you don't mind? Chapter 7 was sad, although he marked Khushi as his. I felt sorry for both Arnav & Khushi😭 The chapter was nicely written.

Thanks for the pms😊

Update soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago


mission unres going on huh..????
Vajram baby ...
When you gonna unres mine... 😳

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