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love_never_dies

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Its awesome Elena, loved it. U should continue it yaar. Thanx for the PM.

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ndp102
I haven't seen the serial this OS is suppose to be based off of but I must say the OS was fantastic!!! I really do hope you make a SS out of it!! Also just out of curiosity, I noticed all your work is based on VirMan but it seems like you do watch other shows other than EHMMBH...what was it about VirMan that inspired you to write fiction on them? You don't have to answer if you don't want to lol...I was just wondering 😊

Thanks for liking it. I'll be happy to answer it (: The only serials I used to watch were IPKKND and EHMMB and Humsafar- I used to love them and Virman seemed really 'real' and 'fun' to write as there were only friends and I could take their stories anywhere I liked- I could put them in Uni or have an arranged marriage (possibilites) and now I can't remember the last time I watched EHMMB- after the cancer track, it just went downhill for me so now I write the Virman I wanted to see- intensity, passion, romance, struggles and comedy.

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Hey Elena, 😊
Good to read your work after so long...
Its a really nice OS...⭐️ and if you are palnning to continue this I would love to read more
It will interesting to know Maanvi's reluctance towards love and how Viraat's love change it...
And what was that about bet or friendship? I didn't get it clearly...😳
Thanks for the PM
And please continue this if you can😊

Thankyouu! The 'bet or friendship' is taken from a scene in ZGH where Zaroon pretends to get closer to her- be friends with her so he can mock her later but she overhears the conversation and they have this big argument.

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: SongsOf_Silence

Yeahh I think adapting these two to a more VirMan version would help alot... Give them more of a VirMan touch in the way they talk and think about each other.. VirMan have their own style that way.. And yeah btw going by some of the dialogues.. you're making these two as a Muslim couple and not Hindu? And Maanvi's name is actually Manaal?

If i continue- I might try to adapt it better but have the same essence of the urdu dialogues and the way they talk but they will be far from the Virman that they are in the show. I will be changing their thinking and the way they interact. I like to re-create new Virman in this. Yes, they are a Muslim couple in this and Maanvi's name is Manal 'mannu'. (:

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avika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Now i am confused abt argument thng. .argumnt between whom? When u updatng next?

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: avika26
Now i am confused abt argument thng. .argumnt between whom? When u updatng next?

You need to watch the show to understand it. I don't know when or if I will be updating- I am still on a break from FFs.

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sreshta90

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Posted: 12 years ago

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loved it.. very well written.. u carried ur style of writing very well.. honestly i want to read more of it.. will u please make it ss... ??

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avika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ElenaElenor

You need to watch the show to understand it. I don't know when or if I will be updating- I am still on a break from FFs.

okay can't see as my net is super slow luk tortoise...hope u end this break soon...pls consider my humsafar request.pls

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Eleanor

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: avika26

okay can't see as my net is super slow luk tortoise...hope u end this break soon...pls consider my humsafar request.pls

Avika- as I have said before Humsafar has been taken down and there is not much I can do it about it- please try to understand where I am coming from- thanks.

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avika

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: ElenaElenor

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Avika- as I have said before Humsafar has been taken down and there is not much I can do it about it- please try tounderstand where I am coming from- thanks. </font>

okay, hope u continue soon dis