An untold lie- Viren and Jeevika (updated 1/4pg10) - Page 4

Originally posted by: laurenza.carson

OMG..

Such an awesome one..

Like.. you know... that was amasterpiece..

Cannot wait to read more...

And how could you call it terrible..?

That is so unfair..

Loved to see the love between them...

YOu know... i read it two times..

yeah...

And and and... you got to continue it soon...

Thank you for your comments. I'm glad you liked it but I wouldn't call it a masterpiece. I call most of my writing terrible.
It will continued in due course we will see what that entails.

Please update soon..

Originally posted by: romanticgurl070

awesome one

viren drunk n next morning he don't wanna talk, that was absolutely expected bcoz jeevs hid such a big truth from him

Glad you liked it and understood Viren in this. Yes he was drunk and said things he shouldn't, then both have into their inpulses but after waking up those feelings did not disappear. Yet one could have seen it as a way back in.

Loved it, it is mind blowing.
Jeevika being married before and a drunk Viren, it is great. Pls continue it.

Originally posted by: surbhi1994

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">too nice</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">continue soon</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">pm me</font>

Thank you glad to see you liked it. I will sure to on you.

Originally posted by: Sabapari

Its a great updates

Thank you 😉

Originally posted by: laurenza.carson

Please update soon..

BTW when you gonna update dear..?

Soonish let this week be over. Off for a week next week do at somepoint then.

Originally posted by: HappyDayDasies

Loved it, it is mind blowing.
Jeevika being married before and a drunk Viren, it is great. Pls continue it.

Thank you, I will soon continue it. Glad that you did like this strange tale of Viren and Jeevika.

Pooja will you be continuing this?

Originally posted by: ktloversera

Pooja will you be continuing this?

Yes I will be. It's not fully written yet. Last day of work tomorrow for a week so it will be updated soonish.