An untold lie- Viren and Jeevika (updated 1/4pg10) - Page 2

wooow this is a different story, i like it plz continue and pm me.. xxx

I really like the plot, and found the characterisation very interesting. Lets see how the story moves and im pretty sure you'll keep us gripped :) please do update soon...
Love
Sarah

Originally posted by: Dhoxi

How can you say it was terrible???

It was just awesome ... I loved it so much... you have explained everything so perfectly❤️

And thanks for the pm😊

Your welcome for the pm. I think most of my writing is terrible. Apart from my first SS. I think I was more to do with concept than anything which I thought was bad. Thank you for your comment I'm glad that you liked it.

very well-written...amazing

Originally posted by: Neha.K.

the 1st thing which stopped me to read further was J in office🤣.. nd 2nd she was married b4..
sorry, chemical locha in my brain.. the problem is : for me J is housewife, Iklaute jiju ki iklauti wife aur mannu ki didi, iske alawa Nothing😆.. sorry cant help..
but still i read ahead, only for YOU...

LOL Mannu : "Where is he? I'll talk to him, straighten him out a bit. It's been a while since I slammed him," 🤣🤣

Jiju Talli😆

"Then why don't you leave! You left one husband right. Apparently things got hard and you left so..." SHOOO RUDEEE🥱

i read it but that was not my type🤔 u see, i am so honest☺️
i felt i am watching some Hollywood Movie which i do leave in between always...
but no doubt, ur writing is so amazing teacher ji... but my brainwa is Ghatiya🤣

Out of all the stories I have written and that you have not read, you go and read this one. One that will definitely not appeal to you on any level. I know how you perceive Jeevika and this did not fit that at all. I understand which is why I was hesitant in posting it up.

Jiju was rude but he was drunk and also he found out something he didn't know after so many years. He could be nice but not yet. Thanks for reading even though I know it's not your cup of tea.

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

superb update

Thank you, glad you liked this strange story.

are you going to continue seen as though you have let it on a cliffhanger

Originally posted by: Kays94

WOWOWOW THIS LEFT ME SPEECHLESS!!!!

please please please continue this asap!!! im sooo like shocked and entertained right now

superb piece!!!1

Don't know about ASAP but soonish. Thanks you reading it and being entertained with it. Shocked and speechless in a good way?

You got to give me this week to finish it. Weekend or beginning of next week.

Originally posted by: sonali.19281

I liked the convos.. very real.. esp btw JV in the end.. even the drunken outburst was bang on.. you brought out his hurt and concerns well..

I am hoping she has a SOLID CASE😆with her history.. else this lawyer may not suffice.. I generally dont read fictions on IF.. but your title intrigued me..

being a divorce lawyer is tough.. I have seen my bff and her hubby.. (he is a lawyer) and how he struggled with confidentiality when one in the family got in touch with him and he couldn't share with her.. similar common friends situations have cropped up.. But J was being an extreme airhead to confide in a common client.. unless thts how brash and non-prudent you see her in your story LOL.. the outlet of agression that you translated into passion was well expressed.. sometimes words do more harm when instinct put things into perspective..

lets see how u take it from here ... its definitely an interesting plot.. again m waiting on the case she had.. better be strong.. lolll coz man has a point.. once a quitter, always a quitter😆

Thanks for the comment sonali in glad you took the time to read this. It a different story to what I have written before and i normally hade an issue with the title. Glad you liked the convos between them and found them real. I wanted to try and bring his hurt out and show he's not happy with it.

You will find out the reason when I eventually write it but I do have but idea. Hopefully it plays out well. Otherwise like you said she plays into Viren's words, it easy to quit if you have once before. I was a tad worried about the anger to passion as I had to find that aggression in it but not to over do it. I think words had gotten to much but it had to work.

It would be hard to be a divorce lawyer especially if someone you know gets into touch and you cannot share due to attorney client privilege.

Originally posted by: amritaluvskryan

it wAs awesome

Thank you. Glad you liked it