OS| The Very First Time - Page 4

Posted: 11 years ago
Aww that was so cute and romantic ... 
Finally someone wrote about our mad couple after sooo long ... 
Yes I think we all wondered ... What if Shyam did not do what he did ...
What would Arnav have done ... 
This was perfect ... 
Posted: 11 years ago
beautifully written...!!!!👍🏼
Posted: 11 years ago
Just one word : B E A U T I F U L !!! 👏
Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful... couldn't have been better 
Posted: 11 years ago
It was fantastic.
Simply beautiful!!!!!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
I love this OS. It's so good.
Posted: 11 years ago
You should go bat shit crazy much more often!! That was stupendous. To say I loved it just doesn't cut it.  
Posted: 11 years ago
This was f**king amazing. The way you described every colour, every sound, every movement and every feeling is BRILLIANT. These scenes of Payesh marriage are moving in my head and I can actually recollect everything and  add a lot more from your imagination if shyam fisco had not been incorporated in the show. Whenever I rewatch those scenes I am bound realize that Khushi's bangles are flame orange and gold and not red which I previously assumed. KHushi's kiss would appear more like a caress. The lingering of Arnav's kiss would be much more pronounced than previously. Khushi's blush would be stark and I would hear Arnav's throbbing heart and would feel the excitement and thrill going within his whole being. In short, whenever I would see those scenes again, they would remind me of this os.

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