SwaRon FF:Will love You.Forever.#2, Note pg-57

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

res my angels

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#182

RES Mehga Di ... Afsan Di ...Tanya...

Afsan Di...

Hey My Li'l Angel!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww!!!!!!!!

Yes, this is exactly what U think... I'm AWESTRUCK right now...😵

First of all I won't thank U 'coz it'll make our relation formal... So I would like to thank GOD who gave U such strength and magic that U always strike the right cords of our hearts...❤️May he continue showering U with same blessing for UR whole LIFE... Amen...

Coming to ur post... In today's post the most important part which I loved to the core was the self conversation of Swayam with his inner consciousness .😆

The doctor already informed him about the major complications in her pregnancy...she told him to keep her happy and away from stress ….What if..something happens to HER...to their baby...his heart sank with the mere thought...

No...I can't stay away from her...She is my life..My life is meaningless without HER.....I want to give this relationship another chance...

But what about the betrayal...you have ruthlessly broken her trust...

His inner-voice spoke...

I ..I will tell her everything...we will start a fresh...even she wants the same...

He tried to defend his point..

She wants to give this relationship a chance... because she don't know about that night..when you mercilessly butchered her trust....his conscience said again...

I will...I will tell her everything...he said with tears in his eyes...tears of guilt...

Go ahead and tell her...she won't be able to take the truth in this condition..she will die...along with your child...his inner-voice showed him the mirror..the ugly consequences ….of the truth...the hidden truth...

No...No...I won't tell her anything...I can't lose her..I can't stay without her...he shouted on top of his voice...

The fight which he made with his consciousness was perfectly portrayed in the chapter... I was clearly visualizing what was going through his mind and heart...😒

The guilt of his misdeeds was still stabbing knifes on his heart ...his heart and soul wanted to rejoice that moment when she was finally in his embrace...But life was not so kind to them...The incident inside the Doctor's cabin few moments ago crossed his mind...His teary eyes became red...he started shading blood instead of tears...his hands became fists due to anger...he promised himself to protect his Love and the sign of their Love...to punish them who have caused so much pain ..to her ..

The stabbing was not only on Swayam's heart but also mine... In fact I realised the pain arising in my heart through the tear drops which rolled out of my eyes after reading these lines...😭😭😭

This side of Swayam was away from me but U introduced him to me... Love U a lot for that...❤️❤️❤️

At last what I could say is U R AMAZING...👏👏👏 U R THE ONE WHO CAN MAKE ME CRY EASILY WITH UR MAGIC OF WRITING...

My love for U keeps on increasing every moment and bonus point is U alwayz force me to love U more n more with ur wonderful work of art... ur writings...😊😃

Love U...❤️ Love U...❤️ Love U ❤️ infinite...

My Li'l Angel...

Lots of Love...❤️❤️❤️ Hugs...🤗🤗🤗 Kisses... Muuaaahhh... and Best Wishes...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

GOD bless U...

Love Afshan...❤️

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

finally. we get an update😛

loved d way swayam informs sharon abt deir sign of love taking breath in her..

He kept his finger on her lips ..to make her quite...she obeyed him...like a small kid...

He took her hand in his...where it fitted perfectly...as if they signified..they are designed to be together...destined to be together ..forever...

He took her hand and kept on her belly...she looked at him with eyes full of questions...

We are going to experience the divine feeling of parenthood Sharon...here...our sign of love is taking breath...inside you...

Slowly.. he bent towards her..and kissed her belly ….

the turmoil swayam is going through is beutifully written.. were he is guilt-ridden n wants to confess everthing n start a fresh while at the same time he cant risk life of his love n deirlove sign...

So Swayam and Sharon giving second chance to deir relationship..Waitg to c how r they going start deir new jouney which was once left incomplete..

Edited by lassipriya - 12 years ago

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Roger

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

Res
Unres
Lol I can't believe it,my comment at first page after soo long..:p
Coming to update
As I always said I loved the way how u penned down their feeling,each and every emotion.The description was really amazing.I can easily visualize each scene in front of my eyes.Thats the best part of your updates.
Lol swayam start thinking about their lil siren and her tantrums.
Nurse n swayam convo was really nice.He is a one lucky man.
Finally some happy moments in their life.Sharon's reaction after knowing that their sign of love is taking breath inside her was blissfull.
Swayam's mind vs heart fight confused me.He still feel guilty for whatever he did.I don't want sharon to know about swayam's change in behaviour n the reason behind their separation so soon.
Looking forward to next part.
Update soon.
Ps. Di u have to update U n me back to us,pen friends n ur one more ss which only have 4 parts :p.Just a reminder

Edited by sadiyaswaron - 12 years ago

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manasi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

lovely amazing awesome... aur kya kahu me deepu it was just fantastic loved it...

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zk456789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Deep what should I say u left me speechless love the update
Thnx for the pm

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nightlife1881

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

yayeee upgrade 🥳

u no u write awsomely well 👏

fallen 4 d way u write 😳

luved d upgrade 😊

ps thanx 4r d pm

Edited by dollydua - 12 years ago

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

Res...when i saw 3-4 res from u, I thought we will get multiple update ...my greediness😆

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Now a days I dont request for update , doesnt mean that I dont stalk the thread, I was so waiting for the update on this and UMBU 😛

Mind blowing update!! Beautifully written 👏

The turmoil swayam is going through is really tough ... Poor thing , cant be happy because his guilt is killing him from inside...

On the other hand Sharon, who without knowing the reason , had to go through pain, is skeptical to accept the new feeling and new happiness..

Finally Sharon takes a step forward and gives swaron a second chance and at the end she was happy.. Though Swayam is also ready to give them a second chance, but his guilty is still not allowing him to enjoy the happyness... Awesomely penned down ...

Looking forward to see the swaron journey towards parenthood and will Swayam's mistake will affect them. If yes, what will Sharon do ??

Please update ASAP😛

PS: Update the other FF too **Looking @ deepika with puppy eyes***

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago

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Sunil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

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Hey Deepika
it was nice update yaar

Swayam happiness has no bound after knowing sharon preganancy.
Swayam want to poured on her all his love on her nd don't want stress her too much.
Swayam want forgot all his pain nd pouring all his love on Sharon

Sharon knowing this news, she feel out of this world.
She want give second chance to her relationship with him nd he too want to.
He love her nd they bound to be each other
lovely update

Edited by Suni1986 - 12 years ago

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

*speechless*
i know u want long comments but u leave me speechless every time
the emotional conflict that swayam is facing was explained beutifully here each and every emotion was depicted so amazingly that it just made my heart melt love u
keep writing and who says ur writing quality has decreased i think u are getting better and better cuz everytime i think it cant get any better than this u prove me wrong hats off
ps: i am harshita if ur wondering