SwaRon FF:Will love You.Forever.#2, Note pg-57

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lalita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

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di unres sirf exams ke baad 😭

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Sakshi Shah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Beautiful Update...
Thanks fr updating Di...
Sry fr the shrt commnt...m busy...but ya if i'll get tym...i'll give a long one...!!!!

Love u...
Sakshi

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Anu_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Awesome update & thanks for updating 😊 despite of your busy schedule.

Swayam & Sharon both are excited & extremely happy for their love sign.

But Swayam is still feeling guilty for cheating Sharon so it is very emotional for Swayam & hard for him to live with this guilt & move on.

Sharon ko to definitly pata chalna hai & i'm sure that mysterious girl will re-enter in this ff to cause trouble, old villain re-entry 😉

Update soon if possible by any chance😳

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Rabina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

This chapter is so heart-warming. So good to see both of them so happy. Just hope they remain happy forever. But I guess Swayam's secret is going to spoil their new found ray of hope and their shot at giving their relationship a second chance. Sharon does not know about Swayam's 'betrayal', we have got some idea about it but keeping my fingers crossed that even Swayam does not know the entire truth. I somehow can't come in terms with the fact that Swayam can be unfaithful to Sharon. Waiting for next updates.

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Sneha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Deepu di!!!😊

Amazing update!
I know i haven't commented in a loonnnggg time...sorry abt that. Didn't find the time to :(

You are an amazing writer...

Their pain, and happiness were simultaneously described beautifully. <3

Wanna see how they spend their lives from now on.

Update asap!

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Amazing update

So Swayam and Sharon are giving second chance, that is good.

They both had suffered a lot and now deserve to enjoy the happiness that God has given to them, their baby, their sign of eternal love.

Looking forward to how Swayam is going to protect her and their baby.

Thanks for the PM😊

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Neeraj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

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Awosm update

dem beautifull

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Sowmya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/77449516Unres my comment @

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Simren

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Dii 🤗

Comment is gonna be short cuz m speechless after reading this update so please bear with me 😳

Awesome update Dii, Loved the way you showed Swayam's state of mind, Swayam is feeling guilty and wants to confess but at the same time he can't risk it, the emotions were fantastically portrayed, Sharon felt contented after knowing that their sign of love is growing within but Swayam is still feeling guilty, the last part was beautifully penned down, it summarized the whole update.

Two hearts were beating in unison...one of them was finally content ...with the love of her life in her embrace ..and the sign of their love inside her...sole reasons behind her existence... the other one was still heavy with guilt...guilt of betraying his love was butchering his soul every moment...A faint set of heart beats were making their presence felt...their love bud was blossoming into a fully grown flower ….it was unfolding the petals of its existence...with every passing moment...it was making its presence felt in their STORY OF LOVE...

Overall Brilliant update, awesomely written...Looking forward to see Swaron as parents, Please update the next chapter soon Dii 😳 luv u..muahhzz ❤️

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prateek

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

I am here as a "most late commer"..becoz half months ago, i was completly unknown with u'r writing creations,u'r swaron stories,OS..all other stuffs.. but one day,i was started a new journey of reading with the "Sea" of magical and passionate swaron stories.. and i am so glad here to announce the real name of this "sea".."it is none other then "Deep Thoughts".. my one of the favorite writing index at IF.. Well,now i cant complete to read all the stories from deep thoughts..that why i am too late..but i just complete to read u'r swaron FF "Will love u forever"..
👏My whole analysis👏
introduction
Amazing concept,really interesting theme. becoz for me it is very interesting to see swaron in this condition.."condition of divorce"..i loved this concept... 👏

Chap 1
loved the character scatch..after that as update..i like the swaron married life..i was confused after reading part1 that why they are divorced after completing 12 years of married life.. its was amazing to read chap 1.. awesome update..

Chap 2
Awesome update as above..but it was painfull to read this update.. u just penned down the real essence of emotions behind divorce..loved their first meeting..and then u ended at big suspence which really bind us to read..

Chap 3
Amazing update becoz now swaron will have to live together for 6 months.. u's description words for swaron pain was nice..i like some lines..from update but cant able to write here, becoz post bada ho jayega.. at the end,i just loved this part..

Chap 4
Amazing update again..loved the fact that swaron are so deeply in love but sharon still trying to hide her feelings..mindblowing description of swaron childhood,teenage..all.. i was so happy to read swaron..swayam was so naughty..and sharon as usual.."attitude".. really penned down the emotion in simple words..great.. loved this update..

Chap 5
Awesome update..finally u break the suspence of their separation..beautifully penned.. and it was shocking that swayam..who broke her heart..really painfull update..

Chap 6
Well portrayed the pain of separation, which swaron was carrying..well written in the way of emotions,faith..loved the character of rey..as a good friend So i like this update.. but it was small to read...awesome once again..

Chap 7 and Chap 8
Awesome update..loved reyam scence,their convo,,and like the pain which rey was feeling for swaron..as a true friend.. here swayam was drunk..not good...then i liked the words,which u describe the intense moment of swaron..and then shivam entry.."i dont know that "har story me shivam bhaisaab kaha se aa jaate h,swaron ki life spoil karne ke liye". i.hate him
but in total..i just loved both updates..really interesting..

Chap 9
Amazing update again..well describe the feeling of swaron..feeling of sharon specially..their intense moment,their passionate kiss,sharon's frame of mind,her pov..all the facts..u describe so so well..i loved this update most..really mindblowing update..full of intensity..

Chap 10 and Chap 11
Awesome updates..loved the poetry explanations specially the description of sun rays...Words for swaron's feeling to patch up their differences was well written..it was really satisfying update..in part 11..well,it was the update of happiness..loved the way u describe swaron feelings for each other.. loved the confidence of swayam in front of doctor..loved this update..i like some lines..which is so beautifully written...

Chap 12
i like the banner of this update..beautifully written the inner convo of swayam to his inside pain.. the pain which swayam was carrying..and it was killing him inside..i loved some lines..specially swayam's pain description...but it was so happy to see that swaron is ready to give another chance or second chance..but swayam was in guilt... i loved the way u penned down the feelings of swayam...So,its awesome..i just loved it...looking forward to see the swaron in new characters..which is "parents"..how they will enjoy the new phase of their life..really interesting to see..cant wait...pls update asap
loved all the updates,specially deep thoughts..becoz "har story deep(like a sea) me hoti hain"..loved all the writing stuffs..u are outstanding writer and describer..specially in terms of emotions..great..

P.S i am really sorry for such a long post..becoz i have to analyse all the previous updates also.. it is my first comment on this FF..that why long post toh banta hain..and yes,sorry for my poor english..So,pls bare with that..
thanx a lot for pm

prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago