Ariya ff love by chance new part 30 apr pg 47 - Page 30

When will you update dear.
Or maine to tumhe thodi advice bhi de di abh to kardo.
Eagerly waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

@sri thnxx

@anju will update soon

@dsas / sissy  hey i loved ur new style of writing...long and broad and with new font style...so cool

will update soon and thnxx for long comment

Awesum wrk dear
lov it
u r an amazing writer..

zabardast.
Wow its really amazing.

Wow...loved both the fights
The DAMMIT Competition and the AKADU Competition !!!!

Keep it up 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

nice ff

😛

kya hua no updtes since a long time?

AMAZING😃

All the three updates r mind blowing.

U wrote Rathod's kidnapping part exceptionally well!!!!!

Loved the involvement of each n every member of ETF n also Shai in that whole act.

Wow Riya managed to calm down both Shai n Arjun n handled their heated argument pretty well.

The way Arjun supervised the whole operation was truly amazing!!!!!!

Yayyy Shai killed that Rehman. Ab yeh tou hona hi tha as he tried to harm her love.

Wht the!!!!! Rathod scolded her btwn all the firing around. Unbelievable!!!!!

OMG Shai was shot n coz of that Rathod went on silent mode.

Loved the convo btwn Arjun n Riya about Shai.

Arjun's POV about Riya was beautifully written.

Awww Arjun find her perfect. Hmmm... so that's the moment whn some unknown feelings started building up in his heart for Riya.

That ICU part whn Sam scolded Shai showed his immense love for her.

Wow Arjun tried to console her whn she was disturbed n crying after remembering her past.

Ariya moments were so intense!!!!!! They both felt attaracted towards eachother at that moment but were in denial mode.

Loved the way Riya n Shai broke into commissioner's office.

OMG they saved that girl but landed themselves in trouble.

Sam-Shai part whn Arjun bcme the refree was too good!!!!

Ariya nok-jhoks was fab. Enjoyed it a lot!!!!!!

Hats off to u dr!!!!!!!