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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

teaser
nice...
now what confusion?
cont soon dear...


thanks dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ
confusion?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜• wait and watch oops read!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sri91

good teaser waiting for comp part... Love u dr...


thank u dear๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
complete part by tdy nyt๐Ÿ˜Š
โค๏ธ โค๏ธluv u tooo.โค๏ธ โค๏ธ
thanks fr ur support โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
 it was mainly bcos of u i strtd "LOVE OF MY LIFE"๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti555

Nice teaset

waiting for update


thanks dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: satana

ousum update dear...bring back tht geetu sooonnn...waiting fr it..contiii...soon๐Ÿ˜Š


thanks satana ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
sure you will get that geetu soon๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

nyc yet confusing trailer...

wonder wt wz in the file...


thanks dear๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
lemme also wonder wts gonna be der in the file
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ey frens am back ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.This is the part where we could see little of geet's emotions  so i was scared to ryt t and i hav given my best to write this up๐Ÿ˜ญ.For better continuity i have written a big update so giving that as two parts..Do leave ur likes and comments๐Ÿ‘..

                                                

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PART 8


Maan was too confused with that letter.He was about to read that letter when Daadi entered his rom.

"Maan beta haven't you slept yet?You said you got somemeeting tomorrow na?" questioned Daadi.

Maan for some odd reason unknown to himself hid the letter in the cupboard behind him.He doesn't want to trouble the old lady more.He felt that letter has something big to be relived.

"Ya Daadi .Doing the last minute details for tomorrow meeting only.Will sleep once the work gets over."

"Sleep soon Maan .Don't spoil your health do these works tomorrow in the office beta."

"Sure Daadima."

With that Daadi and Maan both retired to bed.Sleep was far from the eyes of Maan.Something is etching his heart unknown to himself.He felt the sudden urge to read the letter but he decided negatively and went to see his angel.

When Maan entered her room she was sleeping peacefully hugging her pillow.Maan atlast felt at rest seeing his angel sleeping calmly without any worries.He came back to his room with a determined look on his face.
He walked towards their family portrait were everyone face was filled with happiness.

"Ma I dono why this mansion is doomed with sadness.It must be due to the evil eyes that is casted upon our happiness.I just wish to see our mansion again with smile in everyone's face.if that should happen then my Angel should have her smile back.Whatever happens I promise you mamma I'll bring back the smile back into my Geetu's face within one week.This is your Chottu's vada ma."

With the promise he had made to his mom he resigned to his bed in the hope of getting some sleep.

In the morning everyone were gathered in the dinning table for their breakfast.They started to have bf.If any one could see them they would end up declaring that there is a national level competition  going on in staring the plate.

None of them now had any issues to talk about since the past two months.Their hobby in the Dinner table is to stare the plate.But occasionly unknown to others Geet and maan would look at each other.
Suddenly as if something has interrupted the competition of staring the plate, Daddima cleared the silence

"Geet, tomorrow we have arranged for a pooja in our home in the evening."

"Ok Daddima."

That was the end of the conversation.Daadi was upset with her reply.If she is my old Geet she would have killed me with her questions.
Everyone were again about to retire to the competition when Maan spoke up

"Geetu"

Everyone had felt that their angel had a streak of smile in her face and suddenly it changed back into the old emotionless face.

"Ji"

Maan was confused from when on she started to call me Ji.Geetu is gone crazy totally I must say.Coming out of the thinking process he again spoke up.

"Can you do me the favour of bringing the red file which I have kept in my cupboard drawer once you finish your breakfast?"

(Me wondering "He just asked her to bring the file.What does it hold to bring the smile in Geetu's face?")

Geet has a smile smile in her face and replied cheekily

"Sure Maan .ill get you"

With the above said statement she fled to Maan's room without even glancing back at the breakfast.

Everyone were surprised to see a bit of old geet back.She even left her breakfast mid way to get the file.

But only Geetu knows how little little matter or words from Maan could enlighten her day and make her happy.She would be happy with his small small gestures of Holding hand,giving her a am there for you look,fighting back with her, ruffling her hair.She terribly missed these things.

Maan's room:

Geet found the file and ran to her Babaji's photo.

"Babaji, do you know what had happened now?Maan asked me to get this file.What your looking at me like that?Don't you know when Maan will ask me to get a file?When he has to attend a important meeting I will get him his file because he feels that am his lucky charm.Am feeling so happy after a long time.Do you remember the first time he made me do this?

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Edited by Rami92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
                                                                        

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                                  PART 9

FLASHBACK:
"Maan beta reach office by 9'o' clk so that you could discuss this project with clients.It's your first project beta get blessings from your mumma and pappa"Mohinder informed Maan who was having his breakfast

"Ji pappa"

"Give me the file ill get it to office"

"Wo wo no need papa ill get it myself" he assured Mohinder that everything will go well.

Rano and Daadima gave him a teasing smile knowing the reason behind it.Mohinder started to office.Maan who had his breakfast went near his family portrait and prayed to his mom and dad.

He took blessings from Daadi and Rano.Rano had tears in her eyes to see her Chottu is now as a Businessman MSK.

Annie gave his bhai a tight hug and wished him best luck.

Everyone turn was over.Now its time to get wishes from His Angel.The most difficult and daring job.He wontedly kept the file on sofa and gone near Gee who was sitting in the other couch and was laughing at the drama.

"Will not you wish me best luck Cry baby?"๐Ÿ‘

"Maan you jerk๐Ÿ˜ก! How many times I need to say not to mention me as cry baby?Do you have any slightest idea that I have never mety any duffer like you.You are such a Dusht Dhanav"

Rano,Annie and Daadi's fav past time now a days is to see both fighting so they took a couch for themselves and started to watch their fav comedy movie.๐Ÿ‘

"Stop it cry baby and go and take that file from the couch and give it to me?"

"What did you say?Come Again"๐Ÿ˜ก

"I thought only you have got a big throat but see your babaji is so bad.You have got hearing problem too.Ill get you to the best ENT specialist but before that take and give me that file."

"Aelooo never in your dreams !!Do you know who am i?Princess of Handa.Am not going to such jobs for you.Got it Mr. my mumma's chottu?"

"Geetu now stop this overacting and get my file."๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Geet was about to pounce back on him.Sensing the strom Annie interrupted

"Chup bhai.Enough of fighting with my friend.Geet he wanted you to wish him luck and give him the file since you are his lucky charm.Haina Bhai?"

Maan was embarsed by his sister's comment.Geet's face reflected a red hue.She slightly looked up to see Maan who nodded in affirmative indicating Annie's statement to be true.

Geet slowly handed him the file and wished him luck.๐Ÿ˜ณ

Maan ran to car and Geet to her rrom unable to take the teasy glances of the other three  spectators.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Geet came out of her lala land ๐Ÿ˜ณand continued her chat with babaji.
I have been missing my old maan these days atlast after these many days he talked with me.Thank you Babaji.. Enough of my rambling now.You are going to bless my Maan and this file so that he is going to be successful in this project also.Do you get me Babaji? If not remember ill not talk with you."

With the little chat with her Babji she ran back downstairs to give Maan the file.

Mean while in the Dinning hall Daddi,Annie and Mann were happy to see their old geet back.

"Have you noticed that Bhai.My Geet is coming out of her shell. She smiled Bhai."

"Ya Annie.You are right.may be she will be normal soon" Maan replied back with a hope.

"I have a belief that after this pooja she will be back to her normal state beta.By the way when you come for lunch lets discuss about the list of people to be called."

"Daadi ma I'll not be coming to lunch today."
Annie excused herself in the pretext of making a call.

"Why Maan?Going out with any delegates for lunch?"

"Actually got to discuss something with Sameera so going to have lunch with her Daadi.I will come home late.So you decide it with Annie and make a call to the guests"

Maan  and Daadi turned around hearing a sound.Geet was standing there looking towards the fallen file.Both of them had noticed the shivering Geet standing there.They cannot understand the reaction of hers.

Geet looked from file to Maan to Daadi and ran to her room.

Maan and Daadi was shocked to see her completely in a mess.It was minutes before she was normal.They couldnot understand anything.
 
GEET'S POV:

What am I thimking?

Why am I being this way?

Why mumma and papa you left me?

Can this even happen?

Babaji why are you playing with me.My life has become a football ground for you.

"No way this is happening to me.No No No must be am taking everything in wrong way" screamed her heart.

"Geet after all the thing you are witnessing you think this all can be false " screamed her brain.

But what can I do.It all seems to be true.Just minutes ago I thought what I was thinking must be false.Now everything is crystal clear.This is not the place where I belongs to.

I must go away.That would be the best for Daadi,Maan and Annie.I cannot bare to stand here for more.Its better I leave this mansion.That would be the answer for this confusion.

Its better I leave the mansion as soon as possible.I cannot take anymore.I will break more if I happened to see what am thinking.I never thought my Maan would do this to me.

Precap:
She is right
"Maan loves her."๐Ÿ˜ญ


NOTE:Geet's emotions were a bit tough ๐Ÿคขto write but i have given my best.Critocisms are welcome.Do give ur comments and likes.it motivates me๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘



Edited by Rami92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updates both
waiting for more story to come out
want maaneet together soon
thanx for the pm dear
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one...
So sad of geet...
Make sure u bring bubbly geet very soon dr...
Waitin for it...
I hope mu btwn maneet ll soon b cleared
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Posted: 11 years ago
eager to know why geet wants to go from the mansion ?

while bringing the file she heard the name of sameeera is that the reason for going ?

get the glimpse of old geet but what will happen geet ?
many question running in my mind but will be answered in next part i think so ?

thanks for pm