Geet ff:LOVE OF MY LIFE pg:83 LASt part up

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey hi!!!My first try on maaneet..Dono am i doing justice to maaneet but had an urge to write...Drop in ur comments which ll encourage mi to do further..Critisicms are welcomedBig smileBig smileN yup frgt to mention ignore grammar n spelling mistakesBig smile

                                                

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PROLOGUE
She is a person who lives for happiness.And happiness according to her is

1. Talking
2. Laughing so hard your face hurts. 
3.  Taking a drive on a pretty road. 
4. Hearing your favourite song on the radio. 
5. Lying in bed listening to the rain outside. 
6. Chocolate milkshake ... (or vanilla ... or strawberry!) 
7. Giggling. 
8.Crazy Photos. 
9. The beach
10.Knowing that somebody misses you
11. Getting a hug from her parents
12. To tie a rakki for her dear brother
13. Movie with Annie
14. Sleeping in Daadi's lap 
15.Having a fight with Maan.. 


He is a person who belives in LIFE.His life is none other than "HER"
 He is not perfect,he messes up,makes her cry,fight with her for silly things,but he loves her.Doesn't she deserves him?He do gives her gestures for which she falls for him.The gestures which means

- Holding Hands: We definitely like each other..
- Looking into each other's Eyes: I like you, for who you are.
- Playing with Hair: Let's fool around.
- Arms around the Waist: I like you too much to let go.
- Laughing while Kissing: I am completely comfortable with you.
 
 
 What happens in their life when her happiness is shattered and his life has lost its happiness?
 
TEASER


Maan took a deep breath..he was not able to talk on this
issue..his voice was choking.the gr8 MSK looking lost of words.but he need to
clear this out so he needs to explain the situation to doctor somehow.

Doc:Maan you hav 2
say wat is the current state of her mind otherwise I could not say anything.

Maan: you know her from childhood how she use to be
chirpy,talkative making the environment lively..but for the past 2 months
she has rarely spoken a word..even if we
talk with her she s replying n a word or two..dadima and annie are worried a
lot..i could not see her in state..it hs al happened with papa n mamma's that
is mohinder uncle n rano aunty's death'v expected her to cry a lot..but not
even a tear shed from her eyes..she s straing the wall for hours..she is acting
like a robot.doing wateve we say.i dont want her to feel like a patient dats why I didn't bring her here'say mi doc y
is she behaving this way..plz doc do something I want MY GEET back

SAME TIME IN Km:

Dadi annie n geet ws sitting n d living room ..
Dadimaa:geet beta aren't you feeling sleepy?u sems to be
drowsy?
geet:ya

Dadi:shal I take you to yur room?
Geet :no no.[/P]

Dadi:but you feel so sleepy
Geet:yes

Dadi:then come sleep!!

Geet.il sleep here'shal i??
She was pointing to her laps..daadi made her lie in her laps
n threading her hair.dadi heart had gone heavy ..the girl who use to drag her wherever she might be to sleep in her laps,now asking permission..Geet soon fell into sleep..annie had tears in her eyes..this s not their
geet..the one wo will not close her mouth is searching for words now a days..her
friend was long last..now a day she rarely talks to her..Khurana mansion was so
silent which once used to be full of laughter with their darling angel..

do u ppl think i should continue this???ShockedShockedShocked



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Edited by Rami92 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
Ooh! Congo dear for ur first ever try on Maneet, I know how special it is. Big smile
And about u continuing I would surely say a biig YES, I just loved ur style of writing.
And the Prologue itself made me hooked to it.
Eagerly wanting to know what happened to the bubbly Geet.Ouch
I guess Maaneet are together, if so then toh aur bhi acchaa.
Feeling bad for Geet, but i knw our mundaa will be her anchor like alwayss Wink
Continue sooonnn.
Me too eager Star


BTW Hi, am Anyaa, nd u? Embarrassed
Posted: 9 years ago
character sketch:


Maan Singh Khurana:23 years old handsome young man..loves his family very much..hard core business man..will go any extent to take revenge from ppl who messes with his family..completed mba.
Drashti Dhami as Geet

Geet Handa:21 years old..sweet,bubbly,cute girl..she is the darling angel for handa's and khurana's.the hard thing for her is to keep her mouth shut.close frend of annie..completed her b.arch.

Annie Singh Khurana:21 years old.sweet girl..sis of maan.loves her bro maan and frn geet very much..hav a eye on yash.completed b arch with geet..

Yash Chopra:23 years old.best buddy of maan.rakhi bhai of geet..and hav a eye for annie.completed mba .

Daadi:lovable lady..strong person..looves geet,maan and annie a lot.

Sonia and Sanjay Singh Khurana:mom and dad of Maan and Annie.
Rano and Mohinder Handa:mom and dad of Geet

                                   INDEX

Edited by Rami92 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
yes dear u shuld definetly continue dis 
amazing concept yaar me waiting for next part...Smile
Posted: 9 years ago
interesting start 

continue soon 

please pm me 
Posted: 9 years ago
prologue and CS
interesting...
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

post the link in this thread too when u update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by 16anyaa.gurti


Ooh! Congo dear for ur first ever try on Maneet, I know how special it is. Big smile
And about u continuing I would surely say a biig YES, I just loved ur style of writing.
And the Prologue itself made me hooked to it.
Eagerly wanting to know what happened to the bubbly Geet.Ouch
I guess Maaneet are together, if so then toh aur bhi acchaa.
Feeling bad for Geet, but i knw our mundaa will be her anchor like alwayss Wink
Continue sooonnn.
Me too eager Star


BTW Hi, am Anyaa, nd u? Embarrassed


thankk u!!1am so happieSmileSmileSmilekno my try s being listened by sum1 makes me go ooo!!!n by the way am rami...il surely keep writing the story.ur queries fr the stry will be reveled n my next updateBig smileBig smile.
Posted: 9 years ago
Originally posted by esheena


yes dear u shuld definetly continue dis 
amazing concept yaar me waiting for next part...Smile

thank u!!vll surely continue..SmileSmile

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