In The Dance Camp (A taarey ff) part6 pg15 19jan - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Its reali grea pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awesomeee!! Taarey hugg serial me nahi mil raha.. kam se kam isme toh hai.. thanks a lott for pming me.. promise me that u'll pm me when u update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Hey shivangi i promise ill pm.u ...thnx every 1 fr liking n commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start.
thanks for the pm and continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi guyz...i hope any taarey haters r not here...if any denu r nt needed so pls leave

so guys here is part 2. of the story hope ull enjoy...


Part 2


recap- shivam misbehaves wid taani ...taani hugs rey n says sry ...

(still in his arms)
R-taani, baat kya hai...aur ye sry kis liye? Kuch hua hai kya???? Tum mujhe bata sakti ho itna to tum mujhe trust kar sakti ho right...ya phir tum mujhe trust nahi karti????
T- trust ...rey wo insaan jise main sabs jyada trust karti hu vo aap aur bhai hai...
R- phir batao na taani (he said carresing her hair with care n love.)
(he den breaks d hug cups her face n wipes her tears)...batao taani kya ha???? Sry kyun bol rahi ho...aur ye ansu y taani?(taani holds reys hands wich were on her face)
T-rey aap humesha mujhse kehte the ki main shivam se duur raho par maine aapki baat kabhi nahi maani...im sry rey
(rey removes his hands from her face places it on her shoulders)
R-(angry) taani kya kiya usne????jst tell me
(taani tells him how shivam misbehaves wid het)
R- uss shivam ki toh main...(n tries to go)
T-nahi rey rukiye...(holds his hand)
R-taani kuch nahi hoga...


(shivam cums der n c'taani crying he is drunk)

S- kya rey...tumne meri taani ko rula diya haan...manners kaha hai tumhare...(shivam tries to touch taanis cheeks to wipe d tears still flowing frm her eyes)
(rey stops his hand,pushes him away frm taani n holds his collar)
R- dont u dare touch her...
S-x cuse me vo meri gf hai meri do u gt dat meri gf...i have d right to touch her
(saying so he takes her hand in his twisting hr hand...)
T-ouch ...shivam chodo its hurting
(rey who hs totally transformed in to an angry young man gives a hard punch on his face) R-kaha na stay away frm her...agar aur ek baar use touch kiya na to...
S-toh kya haan kya karoge...wo meri gf hai...
R-wo...(he ws ct by taani)
T-nahi hu mai tumhari gf...jst stay away frm me...
S-taani kya kaha tuumne...
(ct by rey)
R- sunayi nahi diya usne kya kaha she is no more ur gf...ek punch se hearing capacity kum ho gaye...toh socho ki aur do charse tumhara kya haal hoga...so im warning u stay away frm her...uske aas paas bhi dikhayi diye na...toh kisiko khud ka muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahoge...(rey pushes shivam so hard dat he falls on d ground ,rey is bout to beat shivam more wen taani cums in betn n holds reys. Hand)
She catches it wid both her hands
T-rey chaliye yahan se
(n rey he also starts moving behind taani ready to go wid her any where she takes him...his mind is nw olny under taanis control...)Edited by Veereyi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
hey it was awesome😃 cont. soon and pm me😳 well punches were good😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guyz so heres part 2 hope u all like it...pls comment...do u want me to.continuee???????
Cn i.convert it into an ff????????

Pls tell meEdited by Veereyi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nic update ,,,,pm me ur next update...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U did a wonderful job, shivam deserve that punch and so much more. And I like how Taani told him she no longer his gf lol and Rey under Taani spell hmm. Cant wait to see what happen next
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
its awesome... loved TR n how Rey punched shivam... cont. soon n pm me...