JUST A STORY [A MOHARIKA FF] - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: varaali

Awesome.


Will 'he and 'she' become 'we'?


Actually even i dont know 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Jaya loving your thought process. The lead is very good. Looking forward to a fabulous writeup from u ahead. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Limraina

Jaya loving your thought process. The lead is very good. Looking forward to a fabulous writeup from u ahead. 👏


Thank you thank u ..
Will try and keep up with ur expectations 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
jaya i became fond of ur writing style..so different..and there is suspense hmm..he came in a palace of village..and remembering something..and she is crying..hmm there is some connection surely..update soon

and omg dimple?? love it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
😊Very beautiful poems on She and He. I love the both and want to read more. And your style of writing is very different from others which also make "Just A Story" different. Please do PM me whenever you update😊.
And a question actually two 1. why She is sad? and 2 why He is disturbed?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrmrfrevr

😊Very beautiful poems on She and He. I love the both and want to read more. And your style of writing is very different from others which also make "Just A Story" different. Please do PM me whenever you update😊.
And a question actually two 1. why She is sad? and 2 why He is disturbed?


hI dear thank u for checking out my story.
I have sent u a friends request.
Questions will be answered as the story progresses.
I have not done even namkaran also.
Hoping I am able to write as good as so many here.
Please do be critical 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice intro for 'him' you'll give ur CS or we can imagine our own??😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
I liked the beginning. It is going to be a trip down memory lane. I am looking forward. Please have the next update soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Niece piece please continue. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
wow...its awesome jaya!!! so intense...please continue jaldi!!

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