MAANEET FF - INCOHERENT FLAMES Part18 pg61

HELLO PEOPLE!!!😃😉

I have always been a silent reader of maaneet ffs and wanted to try my hand at it...this is my very first attempt at it...hope i'll not disappoint you all😊

I have writtten some very small updates, will post them if you want to read...suddenly i lost interest in writing it further, hope you'll support me and motivate me to continue further

I have been reading various maaneet ffs since 1 and a 1/2 year so maybe you may find something similar to other ffs but I have tried my best to write something different so plz don't get offended if any such thing happens as it any such thing is totally unintentional

I am uploading the PROLOGUE...plz tell me if I should continue or not



THANK YOU EZA FOR THE BANNER🤗❤️

INDEX
Prologue- Scroll down
Part 1- pg6
Part 2- pg9
Part 3- pg13
Part 4- pg16
Part 5- pg18
Part 6- pg21
Part 7- pg23
Part 8- pg27
Part 9- pg29
Part 10- pg33
Part 11- pg37
Part 12- pg41
Part 13- pg43
Part 14- pg47
Part 15- pg50
Part 16- pg55
Part 17- pg57
Part 18- pg61


Edited by rashi_jain - 9 years ago

PROLOGUE

He was in his gym trying to get rid of his frustration, which had been haunting him continuously day and night, by doing tai-chi. Although his existence was no less than a mere struggle with himself every day, every hour, every second since last 3 years but it was one of the hardest day of his life. It was the day when she left him without any clue about her destination. It was the day when she left him without any clue about her returning back. And it was the day when she left him without any clue about his life!!!

Every moment he misses her, every moment he craves for her, every moment he dies for her and every moment he tries to find answers to his questions:

When will she return?

Will she ever return or not?

Will he ever be able to see her?

Will he ever be able to feel her?

Will he ever be able to tell her what is in his heart?

But he knew answers to none of these questions. He tried, tried and again tried but didn't find anything which could lead him back to his life. All this was maddening him. He had no way to contact her. The only way he could find out about her was her family in hoshiarpur but they were too untraceable since that unfateful day.

What happened that everyone from her family was missing?

How can one family just disappear from the face of earth like they never existed?

How can she leave him just like that?

The last communication he received from her was just a mail saying:

"Have some urgent work''.no need to worry''..will tell u everything on returning back, don't have time now''got to go''BYE"

And since then he had been waiting for her. Waiting for her to return, waiting to know that she is safe, waiting to tell her what he has gone through without her, waiting for her to tell him all of her problems so that he can solve them, waiting to get her back in his life to NEVER let her go again!!!

BUT WILL HIS WISH BE EVER FULFILLED???

Part 1- pg6

How is it? Plz tell me if I should continue or not!!!

Edited by rashi_jain - 11 years ago

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OMMMGGG Rashi first of all bada walaa congratuation and than uss sey bhi bada wala Welcome
Gal u here m so happy 😉 than thanks for such a wonderful prologue and lastly sorry for being late as usual in commenting lollz it seems I became used too of saying sorry for being late 😆

OKhh than coming to the prologue
Ummm Ummm



awesome start yaaar the pain of maan u depicted really well
I must say u should GO ahead with it

  us with Loads and loads of updates
   ur success and go ahead now eagerly waiting for the Part-1 and if possible than also CS  please add me in ur Pms and loveee yeahhh galll Edited by Eza_analyst - 11 years ago

Wow awesome prologue... I was so lost reading in it that i didnt realize wen it ended... Pls continue soon nd pm me ur nxt update

interesting ...plz continue

superb prolugue dear,m looking forward to read it update soon

interesting cont. soon...

& do pm me too...

The prologue was very interesting. Pls continue😊

awesome...

Thanx for liking it😃
If you want PMs den plz add me in ur buddy list...vil try my best not to disappoint you my writing😊