MAANEET FF - INCOHERENT FLAMES Part18 pg61 - Page 16

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such a rocking update...I m loving it sorry for getting late :)
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PART 9

It was a Sunday after Maan's family had gone. Maan was doing some work in his study when Dadimaa came there complaining.

Dadimaa: Maan I am feeling very lonely, you never have time for me.

Maan: What do you mean Dadimaa'You had a housefull of people with you for a whole month and still you are complaining to me about being lonely!!!

Dadimaa(sadly): But that was a week ago, I am feeling bored now. Now did I complain you even a single day when all were here?

Maan(sighing): Dadimaa please tell me clearly what do you want?

Dadimaa(happily): Maan I want you to go shopping with me. It's been so long we went together for it and also we have to go to some functions next month so I wanted to buy some gifts too.

Maan shook his head'.again he has to go shopping with Dadimaa to help her select gifts.

Maan: Okay Dadimaa as you wish. Get ready and then we'll go in around 30 minutes. And don't forget to take your medicines before going.

Both smiled and Dadimaa kissed his forehead saying "Thank you beta" and went to get ready while Maan continued with his work for some time and then he too got ready.

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Maan and Dadimaa reached a Mall where Dadimaa got busy in selecting things to buy and Maan helped her decide whenever she got confused.

After sometime he suddenly started feeling restless. It was like he was missing on something but he shrugged off the feeling thinking it to be one more of his mind game which always left him desperately remembering her.

He didn't wanted to disturb his Dadimaa anymore by remembering his past in front of her as he knew his eyes always told her the pain he was going through so it was better to ignore it.

He again got busy helping Dadimaa when he heard someone speak very loudly.

Girl: Smile you are here and I have been searching you everywhere. Now hurry up else Monster will eat all the food that I ordered.

The girl was dragging someone with her, most probably a person named Smile. He didn't knew why, but he felt some connection with those people.Was there really something that he was being too much ignorant to or just a figment of his imagination?

But he could not recognize the voice. He never heard it. So there was no point to waste his time on such silly feelings.

He then mentally smacked his head to pay attention to the work at hand rather than letting his mind again and again wandering here and there. He then took a deep breath and tried concentrating on helping Dadimaa decide whether she should buy a crystal dolphin or a crystal orchid as a gift.


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Part 10- pg33


Edited by rashi_jain - 12 years ago
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nyc part hope in next maaneet mile
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nice part
maaneet feels the connection
hope they meet soon
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nice update...
hope maaneet jaldi mile...
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wish maaneet meet soon.lovely part.thanks to pm me
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nice update dear
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wow very lovely cute ff why i missed tis.. sorry dear.. very lovely interesting.. so my maan hide his identity and now were his geet why she left him.. is she yash ki smile ... i love te update so much
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nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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