MAANEET FF - INCOHERENT FLAMES Part18 pg61 - Page 24

Created

Last reply

Replies

350

Views

83.1k

Users

76

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

Ash1991 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
poor maan so confused...
Sonia.KN thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
such a lovely update dear...simply super..loving it as always
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
part 12
nice part...
cont soon dear...
rashi_jain thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

PART 13

Maan was in his gym area, throwing furious punches and kicks in the air. He was in a turnmoil and what could be better than this to set his thoughts aside, which meant tiring his body to an extent that it's not even capable to move, let alone thinking.


He was trying hard to block his past from his brain but the memories didn't seem to subside but came back with full force.


FLASHBACK


Wanted to add a video but wasn't able to😒...plz go to the link and play it for the feel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6D3W0Bc4_cI


The company had successfully completed one of the biggest project they had bagged till date so a party was organised in a disc. It was Saturday. No tension of work, just living in the present. All were too much excited, especially Geet as she was going for the first time.


They were having a great time there and gradually as the party picked up pace, they were enjoying dancing with each other. Jumping in the air, letting their body loose. Drowning into the moment.


The atmosphere was creating a magic and their hearts started ruling their actions.


They started dancing really close. Geet twirling whereas Maan's arms held her near him posssessively. The emotions they never felt or never wanted to believe, that were bound in some corners of their hearts, started to breakfree.


Slowly their dance turned passionate. They tried to control their actions and started dancing separately. But as it is said, how can one stop themselves from doing what is written in their destiny,after some time they again found themselves in each other's arms.




The drinks were taking a toll on them. Their touch was making them oblivious of the world. What was right, what was wrong. Nothing mattered at that moment, just the two of them. Every thing else seemed to blur.


Slowly their lips met and they kissed for the first time ever. The kiss was a short one as both were trying to control themselves. But still they couldn't stop themselves from the deed.


Soon afterwards the party came to an end and everyone left for their homes. The drinks didn't let them remember about the moments they shared. The memories were stored in their sub-conscious mind, but they couldn't clearly remember anything.


When Maan reached office on Monday, Geet went missing since then. The mail made him little relaxed that she was out for some work but how could he stop himself from worrying for her since his heart knew about his feelings that his mind was not giving away.


END OF FLASHBACK


Each and everything about her was leading to another set of questions. The girl he saw today in his office making all the things worse.


Wasn't she Geet?

Then could she look so much alike her?

Isn't it impossible to look exactly alike even to your twin?

And if she was Geet then why act like this?

How could she ignore what they meant to each other?

How could she erase their last moments together?

Was it her way of refusing him?

Did she considered all that a mistake?

Why couldn't she tell him her problem rather than confusing him?

Didn't she felt anything for him?

Even if she didn't, why behave so rudely?

Why can't she come out clear?

Part 14- pg47


HOPE THIS PART IS GOOD ENOUGH

DONT FORGET TO PRESS LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT😳


Edited by rashi_jain - 11 years ago
rashi_jain thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6D3W0Bc4_cI[/YOUTUBE]



thanx dear...i tried many times d same format bt it didn't worked😊

even posting d same thing copied from ur post is nt showing
Edited by rashi_jain - 12 years ago
sweetsampa39 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 update.

But the confusion is killing yaar.

Yet loved d dance and kiss.

Help Maan to solve the mystery.
preethia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
full of past
along with maan v r also waiting for geet to clear the doubts
Desigirls12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update.. why so short update dear...
nehakapoor7 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update.. hope Geet could answer all these questions.. of Maan & ours too😊

thnx for pm.. do cont. soon
_SnowFlakes_ thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
Simply amazing update ...
continue soon ...

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: NilzStorywriter

1 years ago

Something About You- MG || (Part 92|Page 111)- Last Part

Something About You Hi all Lovelies, I am starting to post a new wonderful story called 'Something About Love'. The credit for writing concept...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pumpkinseed

5 months ago

Maaneet Stories Updates~ New Part Updated~pg 45~02.08.25

You can stay updated with all the latest updates in my stories right here in this thread. I will be updating the stories almost every day. Feel...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24 Dolent - Maaneet FF - Chapter 17 page 25 - 31/12/24

Hi, as the title suggests this story is going to be full of sorrow, but because it's my FF there will be unconditional love as well Whoever...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: SillySoni

1 years ago

Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24 Ineffable - Maaneet FF - Chapter 22 page 28 - 9/12/24

Hi, so I'm bringing you all a new story because Bekhudi is nearing its end. Thank you my loyal readers for giving love to my previous ffs. I...

Expand â–¼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar My First Crush * Maaneet TS * 🔺🔺UPDATED @ Page 6 || 28th Mar

M y First Crus h INDEX ~ A Maaneet Tale ~ CONTENTS : SHOT 1 - PART 1 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down PART 2 Page 1 ~ Scroll Down SHOT 2 : Scarlet Flames -...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".