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Posted: 11 years ago
ok dear
its my little try for your ff
hope you like it
and i m able to do justice with my thoughts
and as it is coming after so much part
so starting main sorry
it going to be long


yeh duniya 
kya khel hai uss khuda ka
har pal yaha
har din yaha
sab kuch hai badal raha
jo baandhe the khuda ne,
woh dhaage tut gaye

aur kuch rishte nanhe haatho ke
har jung jeet gaye

                      woh dono
                      chale jaa rahe the
                      zindagi ki raah par ,
                      the ruth gaye khud se ,
                      jaane kis mod par !
                      khush the ,
                      par khud ke liye nahi ,
                      unke liye ,jo ban gaye the maksad
                      jeene ka unke ,
                      is zindagi ki doud par !

geet :     jee rahi thi main ,apni yeh zindagi
               uske liye  jisse ,
               diya to tha janam maine ,
               par woh  ban gayi 
               meri zindagi !

                jo rishte khuda ne likhe
                apno ne joode ,
                jab woh hi dagaa de gaye !
                to ab , kyu yeh dil mera
                kah raha hai ,karle yaki isspe
                jise ,
                meri zindagi ki dor hi  ,
                ab mujh se joode !

                 kyu hai yaki is dil ko ,
                 yeh hum saaya hai mera !
                  rakhe ga yeh yu sambhal ke meri khushiyo ko ,
                   jaise woh  ,khuda ka barsaya 
                  karam ho uss par !

                par kya
                  yeh sahi hai , ke du main inhe woh gum bhi
                   jo hum saaya hai mere !
                  khushiya mujhe haasil nahi
                 au inhe gum de saku ,
                 itna main qaabil nahi !
                  to dur jaana hi unse , bahta hoga
                  kuch na haasil unhe ,mere saath chalne  se hoga

maan :            kis mod par ,
                       zindagi badal gayi ,
                       aisa nahi tha , ke woh abhi aayi thi
                       jo ab mujh par sarur ban kar chaayi hai
                       shaamil to woh  ,meri zindagi main kab se thi
                       bas ab  kissi nanhi pari ke aane se ,
                   woh abhi mujhe nazar aayi hai
 


sorry dear its done in speed

one more due

pakka promise
that will come soon

hope you like this one
please reply
me waiting.

                              
Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

ok dear

its my little try for your ff
hope you like it
and i m able to do justice with my thoughts
and as it is coming after so much part
so starting main sorry
it going to be long


yeh duniya 
kya khel hai uss khuda ka
har pal yaha
har din yaha
sab kuch hai badal raha
jo baandhe the khuda ne,
woh dhaage tut gaye

aur kuch rishte nanhe haatho ke
har jung jeet gaye

                      woh dono
                      chale jaa rahe the
                      zindagi ki raah par

still more...

                              


         Beautiful ...👍🏼
     Plzzz .. complete it...
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O GOD TWIST YE KULDEEP TO NAHI AA RAHA YAHA... I HOPE MAAN GEET KO APNEY DIL KE BAAT BATA PAYEE...JALDI
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Waiting... Waiting... Waiting...

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Basanti... haath thode jaldi chalo... *winks*
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Waiting... jaldi de do...