Virman OS Trust part 5(A)(pg 12)

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#91

this was maybe a short part but it wasso emotinal😭
viren couldnt belive it
manvi does as she is strong and this gives strength to vanishka ...cant even think abou her heartbroke..😔

thanks for pm

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_Shru_

@_Shru_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#92

wow nisha after a long tym😊

nd da updates were wonderful as usual!!!!

all der emotions were written so well...

nd da mother-son nd vv bros moment was so lovely...

plz cont soon nd thnx fr da pm

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Krupaa

@forever_young

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Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Both the updates were brilliant as always!

I could feel all the emotions, the pain...it was really touching!

The way you added the small detail really brought out their emotions.

The strength Maanvi Vanshika and everyone else has, it's commendable!

You wrote out the emotions so well!

The scene btwn VirMan was just perfect!

And the Scene btwn the Mother and Son was so touching!

The lines Viren said, not believing the truth was simply outstanding!

The way you portrayed the emotions...fantastic!

It Will Rain- Gosh, I Love that song! <3 It was just Perfect!

Maa- This song always brings tears to my eyes, totally apt for the update!

Fabtastic Girl! You write beautifully! xD

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missmystic

@missmystic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Both updates were great!
Part 4: awww it was so sweet... I loved how manvi was trying to stay strong for virat ad virat could just see the pain she was going through. She made me laugh when she said that she will marry any random stranger if virat didnt marry her hehe

Part 5a: the chapter was so emotional!!! I loved how vanshika was consoling him about it and the way she said that he is his strength and not weakness

Lovely updates, thanx for the pm :)

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#95

very emotional update ... Viren reactions as he has denial ... heartfelt

I really loved how Virat when to hug his mom ❤️

wonderful!! 👍🏼

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Its damn superb...very much emotional...loved the way manvi supports him...cont soon

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Awesome...~! Thanks for back to back updates...it is simply nice...chapter 5 was very emotional...evry 1 stood strong inorder he takes in evrything with strenght...little support at such tim ecan b saviour...Thanks for the PM Nisha...~!!

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Nisha you are back!! Thats great 😃.. I missed you and your updates very much 😳.. Thank you for the back to back updates..
Chapter 4:- Update was superb ⭐️⭐️.. Loved the way Manvi supported Virat and stood strong in front of him.. Both of them are scared but they are trying to hide their pain from each other.. True love ❤️.. Their emotions are very well portrayed 👍🏼.. Loved the psycho killer part 😆.. And then Virat carried her in his arms .. Loved it..

Chapter 5 (A):- Awesome update.. Emotional one.. Viren's reaction really touched my heart.. He was not ready to accept that his brother was suffering from cancer.. He loves him a lot.. Vanshikha is a strong woman.. She was scared and shocked but she decided to stay strong for her son.. "No silly. I will be your strength not your weakness. We will get through this okay?" - Loved these lines.. You have portrayed their emotions beautifully 👏👏👏.. Loved the songs.. Perfect for the updates 👍🏼..Will be waiting for the next part.. Thanks a lot for the pm.. Take care Nisha 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

superb os... the way u work with words nd emotions is damn awsm... continue soon...

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nida

@mystery75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#100

a very emotional update viren's reaction was truely heart touching n wow after seeing manvi's strength vanshika maa also become strong this is really something awsome and supperb 😊

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