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Posted: 11 years ago

 

Introduction

 

Hi Friends,

 
Most of you know me as writer of sweet family oriented stories '

"Till Death Do Us Part"

And

"Vivah"

 

Well, as "Vivah" is nearing an end, I am here with a new story.

 

I am daring to write something new as this FF will be very different from my other two FFs. It is much more serious and emotional. Not a dark story but focusing on social evils and women empowerment. Also, Maan will be not be a knight in shining armor as focus is on Geet's strength. But he will be there every step of the way to guide her and enable her to fight her way out.

 

So in a sense it is similar to original GHSP but NOT the same.

 

Also, every part will have a song associated with it making it a musical. It may not fully fit the scenario but it will accompany the mood.

 

Let me know your thoughts and I will start the story soon if you like the introduction and prologue which is just in the post below.

 

Thanks,

Ritzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks to Shrute for the lovely banner
 
 
Prologue

 

 

As I walk with a bleeding heart and cut bruises on the path of pain

I wonder if there is an end to this road

I wonder if this pain will ever lessen and will my heart too soar

 

Why I was told that I am special because I hold a womb to give a new life

Why was I told that I was worth praying being the image of Durga the Might

 

Was it all a lie?

Are these my strengths or my weaknesses?

 

I wonder as I walk on this road, all alone

 

I wonder with silence in my heart, I just wonder

 

Will this snow melt and will this ice thaw

Will a Winter Sun shine upon my soul

Will I ever feel the warmth and love around

Will birds fly and bees buzz around

Will my entire self drench in that one voice singing out

My own Winter Sonata

 

A song so beautiful that it will fill me with light

No Storm will wither me and no sorrow will touch my sight

Do in my destiny, I have that song

Which will make me believe in all I was taught

 

I am shattered but still I hope

I am battered but still I long

I will rise from the pathos of my life

Like a phoenix just to hear

My own Winter Sonata

 

 

...

 

I saw you one day like dew on a deep red rose

You raised such passion that I was all but lost

 

You came as a fresh breath in my life

Till now I took breath but I wonder if I was alive

 

Used not by the world but by my own

Delusioned not by others but the relationships that I called my own

 

I know that just like me

You are broken and have seen the cruel face of this life

But what I admire is your determination

To keep yourself alive still in your life

 

Your smile and a heart as beautiful as winter cherry blossoms

Can heal any wound just the way you bloom after being encased in the ice of the winter

 

Your mere presence gives illumination to the darkness inside me

But still I wonder will you ever be mine?

 

I don't know what your answer will be

But I know I am there to stand by you

Through all the ups and down this life can throw at you

 

Wondering still somewhere in corner of my heart

Will you sing that song which will fill me with light

Make me strong so that no Storm will wither me

And no sorrow will touch my sight

 

Do in my destiny, I have that song

My own Winter Sonata

 

 

 

Reference '

 

Iced Cherries

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Blossoming Cherries

Edited by ritzy09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
WoW OMG!!! OMG!!  ๐Ÿ‘

I just visit Vivah.. And here you had created a new thread for your new brand story!! Wonderful dear. I haven't read any of your post for this story!! ๐Ÿ˜† 

Too excited... But Im very sure this would be a promising one. You know why, cos you are once of the finest and awesome write, that I would never get bored off. I love you so much...

Am going crazy here... Can't wait to hear more of your creation.. 

I shall go read your prologue first..๐Ÿ˜† Silly me


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Im done reading๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Winter Sonata. The title itself is so attractive. This was one of my favourite Korean drama. I love watching it. Makes me cry and emotional. Their soundtrack is awesome in this drama.

The prologue is superb. Both character's monologue was described very precisely. I loved it. So you are going to do something different, associating with musical. That a great one. Congrats my dear. All the best... Eager to read your creation. When do you plan to start? After Vivah end?? 

Out of curiosity, but why did you choose this title. Thou I loved it, very unique

Edited by ajenn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ajenn

WoW OMG!!! OMG!!  ๐Ÿ‘


I just visit Vivah.. And here you had created a new thread for your new brand story!! Wonderful dear. I haven't read any of your post for this story!! ๐Ÿ˜† 

Too excited... But Im very sure this would be a promising one. You know why, cos you are once of the finest and awesome write, that I would never get bored off. I love you so much...

Am going crazy here... Can't wait to hear more of your creation.. 

I shall go read your prologue first..๐Ÿ˜† Silly me


----------------

Im done reading๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Winter Sonata. The title itself is so attractive. This was one of my favourite Korean drama. I love watching it. Makes me cry and emotional. Their soundtrack is awesome in this drama.

The prologue is superb. Both character's monologue was described very precisely. I loved it. So you are going to do something different, associating with musical. That a great one. Congrats my dear. All the best... Eager to read your creation. When do you plan to start? After Vivah end?? 

Out of curiosity, but why did you choose this title. Thou I loved it, very unique

 
Thank you so much Jenn...you are the first to get a peek here as I just opened the thread and believe me your comments have filled me with so much enthusiasm...you know na how nervous I was before starting this...
 
I also feel under pressure and honored when you shower so much praise...I just hope I am able to keep up your expectations.
 
As to the name, actually it was suggested by Ash (Kawaii_geet). I wanted a name which expresses turbulant past but also hope. I was thinking on lines of "Winter Sun" when she suggested "Winter Sonata" which as you said is very unique and fit the FF story perfectly. So all kudos to Ash for finding a perfect name.
 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago

on "Winter Sonata"
Loved it โค๏ธ โญ๏ธ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats for the new story
its sounds different from ur usual stories and i know it will be a damn good one like the other
 
so eagerly wiating for this one tooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
Don't get nervous dear. Sometime we tend to overjoyed and make the writer nervous๐Ÿ˜† Its the basic quality of an reader ๐Ÿ˜†

Its an heavy subject. But Im very sure you will give the best among the best. We will support you throughout the journey, so don't worry. You can DO IT!!! 

@Ash (Kawaii_geet) Wonderful choice of FF name. Smart . 
Posted: 11 years ago
congo for d new FF..
loved d title...it was fab.intro was awesoome..
cont.soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
interesting concept n prologue...

loved it...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...