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ghsp yaad agaya !:) freaklingly awesme! update sn

beautiful update with a beautiful song. dadi saved geet,,,,, sasha chudail started her game... loved geets confidence.

amazing update yar,loved it a lot.

Savitri devi helped her to get her to narmalcy…poor geet …found unconcious on the road…what must have happened in her past….glimpse of her past was really shocking…

Loved determined geet while talking to maan about her job…

Pinky came as her saviour and geet got a place to stay with her as PG…

Other things are same…even dev & nt…hope that there is no connection of dev-nt with geet…

Liked that you brought vicky in your story…I acually missed him in GHSP….it would have been more interesting if vicky's character was introduced…

I loved the scene of their first touch which reminded me of conference room scene ber maaneet when they stuck up in conference room

Precap kya ho sakta hai….mashallah…!!!

lovely update

beautiful update dii ❤️

its like pure bliss to read these beautiful moments of maaneet 😳
ye sasha n naintara ka kuch b nhi hosakte hy grrr 😡
ek geet ko resign karne ko bolti hy dusri dev ko kangaal krti hy 😕
both brings problems to maan :(
wese dadi owns hostel?
wow tho yaha dadi can play imp role bringing maaneet together 😉
loved it ❤️

Thanks Piya for the banner

Thank you friends for your lovely comments and pressing like. Some of you had asked me if Dev / NT has any connection with Geet's past. Answer is NO. Their basic characteristics are same – greedy and loose morals but they don't have any connection with Geet's past.

This special update is for chinni who will not be able to access IF for next 10 days. Here you go girl, on your special request I am updating a chapter for you to read before you go.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 5 - Mashallah

7:00PM Evening

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBvhu0vd7Ug&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PBvhu0vd7Ug

Masha allah, masha allah, masha allah

Gum sum chaandni ho naazni ho
Ya koi hoor ho
Dil nashin ho, dil kashin ho
Ya janat ka noor ho
Masha allah, masha allah, masha allah

Staff started leaving and Geet was in dilemma seeing Maan still busy in his work.

"Hey Babaji…this man is actually a robot. Now what should I do? Should I ask Adi sir. No..No Geet you are not a kid anymore. You have to grow up and moreover Adi sir has helped you so much already. Now you have to take your own decisions.

Maan sir was so angry at me because of the morning incident but he still gave me another chance. So now, I should work harder at what Babaji has given me. What if Maan sir needs my help? I should stay back and give my best…Haan."

She checked next day's calendar, printed the summary of appointments and then took out all the relevant files to keep them aside for easy access. She checked them once and that's when she found out papers were all mixed up (thanks to Sasha)

"Haye Haye Babaji…thank you for making me check it. These files are all wrong."

She spent next two hours straightening the files.

9:00 PM Night

"Dusht Daanav…Robot…does he not even get hungry? Babaji, I didn't have anything after my breakfast. I can only buy lunch when I get salary advance na. And look at him. He is so busy in work and I am so hungry. I wish I just reach hostel and get to eat my dinner."

10:00 PM Late Night

Maan finally stopped working when he got a call from Daadima scolding him for yet another long night. She complained of high BP and Maan sighed not knowing if she was telling truth or doing just another drama. Nevertheless, he got up to call it a day. As he walked outside, he was surprised to see light in adjoining cabin.

"Geet?"

Tum sabah ho, ya ghata ho
Khekasha ho saiba ho

Subha ki pehli kiran ke jaise
Bebak alhade pawan ke jaise
Khusbuein tum lootathi ho
Masti mein chur chur
Masha allah, masha allah, masha allah

Maan entered the room and got lost in the enchantment of his sleeping beauty. Geet was sitting on her chair, her eyes closed, her face soft with sleep and a hair strand fluttering on her forehead. Maan moved in a trance as his hands itched to stop that disturbing…annoying…smooth…black strand.

He leaned towards her and moved his hand forward but stopped short. He was frustrated with his own behavior and the unknown pull which Geet's innocence had on him. He straightened himself and called out to her waking her up. Geet opened her eyes, opening window to her soul as his dark brown eyes again got lost in her hazels.

Geet immediately stood up startled and flustered and that helped Maan in droning his professional avatar asking her to just leave. He walked back to his car, but still lost in her peaceful face as she slept and also fighting with himself "Yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi."

That's when he realized the time but then his professional side won and he stopped worrying about her. Though impressed by her sincerity, he just did not want to be affected by her anymore.

As the car crossed, he found her waiting at the bus stop. Some guys were staring at her, teasing and taunting her as people just walked by without bothering about the lone girl. Maan again felt the tug at his heart and his protectiveness empowered him. He stopped the driver and asked her to join him. Though initially Geet denied but she was getting scared of the dark by every passing moment. All her life she had stayed under the protection of her family. Though a cage, it was still a shelter and never in her life, she had been exposed to harsh realities of eve teasing and lewd men on the streets.

She quietly sat in the car and told her area name. She kept on looking outside or down not meeting Maan's eyes through out the ride. When they reached the locality, Maan asked for the exact address. Geet hesitated but then on Maan's insistence, said softly "Krishna Women's Charity Hostel"

Maan was startled hearing the name from her mouth. He just nodded to the driver and they reached hostel in few minutes.

Geet did not know what Maan thought of her. She was ashamed but it was a reality of her life that the girl who once stayed in a palace like Handa Haweli was now living on charity. That is why this job was very important to her.

Tum hayaa ho, tum ridha ho
Tum wafa ho, tum nasha ho

Khamosh nazarein, sadaein jaise
Tumhare baathein duwaoun jaise
Har nafas mein tum samayi ho
Phir bhi ho itni door
Masha allah, masha allah, masha allah

For the first time, Maan felt an emotion other than attraction for the girl sitting next to him…respect. Though he did not know what her problem was, but he was sure now that she must have suffered gravely. Her eyes had said it before too but now it was confirmed. And he respected her determination to fight the odds and her will to stand on her own. She had just turned 19 few months back…oh yes he had checked her bio-data. Now lack of surname also made some sense to him. He saw her downcast eyes and a little heat which had come to her cheeks at the thought of him knowing that she stayed in a charity hostel.

"I will be moving out soon now as I have a job."

Maan smiled slightly at her attempt to explain herself. She looked so exposed and helpless. "I respect you Geet for your attempt at independence and I promise I will do my best to ensure that you achieve your goal and always stay happy…no…what I mean as you boss, I will try to help you as much as I can."

Gum sum chaandni ho naazni ho
Ya koi hoor ho
Dil nashin ho, dil kashin ho
Ya janat ka noor ho
Masha allah, masha allah, masha allah

"You can go now. And yes, you don't need to stay later than 8:00 PM from now on unless I specifically ask you to."

Geet looked at the serious profile of his boss. She could just murmur thanks before running into the hostel.

Precap – Kuch Dil Ne Kaha