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Thanks Shruthe and Ash for the banner

Thanks a lot to new readers for trying this FF and all my regular readers for their continued support. Some you made me really emotional and also, I am glad most of you liked me giving name to the chapters.

Piya - Geet's past has no connection with Dev or NT. Just their basic nature and characteristics are the same as GHSP but otherwise there is no direct relationship and they have never met Geet before.

Chinni10 – Thanks for reading this story. Dear, I will try but I don't promise, to give translation of songs as well. It is very time consuming so if I find it online I will add. I hope you will understand. Though songs are mostly oldies but quite popular ones so hope you will not face the issue much.

Glassdoor – welcome to the FF dear. Seriously….you took my last line to the whole new level….And thanks for appreciating the poems. Yes I wrote them myself on a spur of the moment. I am glad they turned out well. Your description and understanding of the poems is spot on.

Yash21 – Past and Present is inspired by GHSP and some real life experiences. So don't worry. Can't say they won't be dark but this FF is about hope and fighting the situation.

Anu (tellyme) – Dear, as a matter of fact I had written all the dialogues in English only in the beginning but as I moved ahead, I needed Hindi to get authenticity. Let's continue like this for 3-4 chapters and then let me know how you feel.

VERY IMPORTANT: Please add ritzypm as buddy to gets PMs for this FF

Chapter 2 – Udaasi Bhare Din Kabhi toh Dhalenge

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gti5y0TTQys&feature=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gti5y0TTQys

kaha tak yeh mann ko andhere chhalenge

udasi bhare din kabhi toh dhalenge

Geet thanked her Babaji as her bus finally arrived. Though she loved rain but she was worried about her file which had her resume and certificates…her lifeline.

Somehow she got her footing even as people jostled her around and pushed her from everywhere. She closed her eyes to control her scared heart beats and that tear which threatened to expose her vulnerable state. She could feel men caressing her back and touching her elbow under the pretext of the rush. But she just steeled her heart and pulled her body inside. After a stop, she got a better place to stand next to a bunch of female house maids and she got lost in her own thoughts as bus chugged away.

"Geet!!!!"

"Please Veerji…sob…main toh sirf Channi hai na…sob…meri dost uske saath gayi thi. Uski Ma bahut bimar hai. Isliye bas shaher tak unki dawayi ke liye bus mein gayi thi."

[Please Veerji…sob…I just went with Channi…sob… my friend as her mother was very ill. I just took bus to the next town to get her medicine.]

"Besharam…teri himmat kaise hui mujhe ulta jawaab dene ki. Pehle toh bus mein gayi...bus..chi…na khandaan ki izzat ki fikar hai na hi humare rutbe ki aur ab bahane bana rahi hai. Kaise bhul gayi tu ki Handa parivaar ki ladkiyaan bina parivaar ke bahar nahi jaati, toh gair mardon se bhari bus mein jaane ki teri himmat kaise hui."

[How dare you answer me back? Shameless girl. First of all you sat in a bus…a bus….chi…didn't even think of our honor, status and now giving excuses. How did you forget that girls of Handa parivaar don't travel without a family member by their side, let alone in a bus full of strangers?]

She flinched in reality as she felt the cane of past hitting her palms. She tightened her fist and gulped down the bile. She got down from the bus, walking towards her destination.

kabhi sukh kabhi dukh yahi jindagi hai

yeh patjhad kaa mausam ghadi do ghadi hai

naye phul kal phir dagar me khilenge

udasi bahre din kabhi toh dhalenge

Khurana Construction

Maan's car stopped and the driver rushed to open the door of his car. He stepped out dressed in his black waist coat and white crisp shirt with formal shoes. He removed his shades as he progressed to the lift, punching the button to 7th floor removing his shades. A siren had already gone in the office alerting everyone of his presence. As lifts door stopped, he walked out to an immaculate office, fully aware of the hurricane which must have passed in just last few minutes, hinted further by sweaty foreheads and high panting of his office staff.

Sasha waited coolly but not before verifying from Tasha – her pawn as to how she was looking.

"Sasha…I mean mam…Maan Sir will not be able to take off his eyes from you."

Receptionist to the MD office – Pinky stood up wishing him good morning as he walked with attitude through the doors opened by his security. He did not even spare a glance at the polished oak exterior, decorated with tasteful paintings and cultured plants. He moved briskly, as everyone in his way stood to wish him. But he only responded to Sasha as she tried to impress him with her "Good Morning MK".

He somehow stifled the thought of telling her exactly how tacky her makeup and clothes were and settled for "Where is Adi?"

Just then Adi entered, fixing his tie and colliding with his hot hot boss, stammering "Goo..ood Morning Siiir….Soo..ooory Sir".

Sasha gave him a disdainful look whereas Pinky was in two minds. She put another chip in her mouth and pouted thinking - "Why is Adi sir always colliding with DD…my luck only is bad…neither DD spares me a look nor Adi Sir."

Maan just glared at the nervous man and thought bemusedly why even after working for so long in KC, Adi was so scared of him? Was he truly not aware of how much Maan relied on him and his honesty? Well, whatever but he absolutely loved terrorizing the guy.

He asked both Adi and Sasha to meet him immediately with new project files. Maan could easily read through Sasha mutterings that she had no clue what he was talking about and it was probably only Adi who had been working on it.

"Couldn't Munshiji had a child who was more like Adi rather than this Sasha?"

Maan just shook his head and walked into his cabin. Blinds at his window fluttered a little as he closed the door behind him. They were pristine white and reminded him of her white dupatta floating around brown eyes. As her flashes came in front of his eyes, he banged his hand hard on the table to get a grip on his thoughts and clear away the effect of those soft almond eyes as he waited for his team to join him

Wo kaun thi jo aise saamne aayi

Yu dil ko bekarar karke chali gayi...

Nazre uspe jaa ke hi ruk si gayi

Waqt ki ye baujhar jaise tham si gayi...

Uska wo chanchal roop dil me bas gaya

aayine ki tarah uski aankho me dekhna chaha...

Par dur chali jaa rahi thi mujhse wo

kadve mere atit ka fir khayal de gayi wo...

by Mishtiritu

Veerani zindagi mein,halki si thand ki dhoop ne dastak de di hai

By Anu (Hermoso)

"He is so hot…I mean I think he really likes you…you are so lucky" buttered Tasha and Sasha even without any reason, over confidently responded with "I know". But then the whole office, at least all the girls in office considered themselves lucky to just work with MK.

Along with project details, Adi and Sasha informed him about interviews for his secretary as he had fired the previous one last week.

"Hmmm"

Geet reached Khurana Constructions and asked her Babaji to help her in a new beginning.

"Babaji…aap toh sab jaante ho. Aaj apni bachi par apne haath rakhna Babaji. Pata nahi mein is naukri ke layak hoon bhi ya nahi. Par meri zaroorat kisi se kam nahi. I promise to give it my best bas aap humesha mere saath rehna."

[Babaji…you always know everything. Please keep your hand on me today Babji. I don't know if I am even right for this job or not but my need is no less than anyone else. I promise to give it my best, just you always be there with me.]

As she entered the company, she was awed by the interior and larger than life office building. She walked trying to find her way when she collided with a girl wearing a red short dress. Even as Geet chided her Babaji and asked him how someone can wear such short short clothes, girl asked her rudely – "Oh hello Miss Behanji…who are you and what are you doing here?"

"Madam I am here for the interview for the Secretary's post."

Sasha scoffed and gave her an eye over disdainfully.

"Tum…tum aur MD's secretary."

Geet inwardly thanked her Babaji profusely for the spectacled man standing next to her who calmed the barking hyena and appreciated her for coming early for the interview.

"Hi, My name Aditya. You are little early which is good. Please wait in front of the conference room for your name to be called."

Geet nodded and moved towards the indicated room. She was quite nervous and was almost panicking as she entered the interview room. But once again, Adi made her comfortable by giving her some water and then started the interview by asking her name.

"My name is Geet"

"He He he…only Geet…tell your full name"

Moments from her past flashed in front of her eyes as she remembered the time when she stood bleeding and in tattered state not only physically but mentally in front of her so called family and had self promised herself that from that day she was Geet…just Geet.

"Teri himmat kaise hui zaban ladane ki…tu kal hi apne ghar waapis jayegi…samjhi."

[How dare you answer back to me…you will go back to your house tomorrow itself…understood.]

Geet did not even feel the pain anymore as Daarji gave her another blow from the hunter at her back.

"Mein nahi jaaongi…nahi jaoongi."

[I won't go…I won't]

……

"Babaji…aaj se mein anath hoon Babaji. Koi parivaar nahi mera…koi apne nahi. Geet…sirf Geet hoon main. Bina kisi naam ke, bina kisi pehchaan ke. Lekin mein haar nahi manoongi. Mein apni pehchaan khud banoongi…khud."

[Babaji…I am an orphan from today. I have no family…no relation. Geet…I am only Geet. Without any surname, without any identity. But I will not accept defeat. I will make my own identity..myself.]

"Ji…My name is Geet…just Geet"

bhale tej kitna hawa kaa ho jhonka

magar apne mann me tu rakh yeh bharosa

jo bichhde safar me tujhe phir milenge

udasi bhare din kabhi toh dhalenge

Adi though was perplexed at her answer but smiled and asked her few more questions. Initially she was nervous knowing that she was only 12th pass, but once she started answering, there was no looking back and she answered confidently. Geet needed this job desperately and that reflected in her responses.

Sasha gave her a sample dictation to write which to her surprise Geet completed in record time. She typed the letter at the computer and there were no grammatical or spelling mistakes.

Adi asked her to sort out some files. Geet asked her first and last question of the interview "Sir, when a file is needed, do you refer by project number or project name."

Adi laughed as he liked her logical thought process.

"None…Usually sab jagah ke naam se and uske baad site name se file maangte hain. Jaise…Noida sector 18 ya Gurgaon flyover project."

(None…Usually all refer it by name of the place and then site name. For example… Noida sector 18 or Gurgaon flyover project.)

Geet nodded and quickly used city name to sort the files making another section for international projects.

Adi was more than impressed by her simplicity, confidence and most importantly her efforts and was very excited to have her onboard. But Sasha was not very keen as she felt Geet did not have the required qualifications and also looking at her attire, may not fit in the uber and chic environment of KC.

But Adi knew how to convince Sasha as he knew her weakness very well -

"Sasha, tumhein to khush hona chaiye. See a girl like Geet who seemed to need this job will concentrate only on her work and not throw herself at MK; especially like his last secretary Pari who belonged to a rich family. Her trial of getting closer to MK had what precisely led to her dismissal in just six days. So this time, chances of her getting fired are very less…aur tere natak ke bhi….he he he….and as to her style, she is just a little traditional and all the clients especially international ones are so enamored by Indian culture etc. They will be happy only to see blend of modernity and tradition…he he he"

(Sasha, you should be happy. See a girl like Geet who seemed to need this job will concentrate only on her work and not throw herself at MK; especially like his last secretary Pari who belonged to a rich family. Her trial of getting closer to MK had what precisely led to her dismissal in just six days. So this time, chances of her getting fired are very less…and of your play also…he he he…and as to her style, she is just a little traditional and all the clients especially international ones are so enamored by Indian culture etc. They will be happy only to see blend of modernity and tradition…he he he)

Sasha once again gave a thought and agreed that an unfashionable, outdated behnji was no challenge to her. Moreover, she had a larger fish to fry who she knew was Maan's pet and most trusted employee - Adi.

So she made a point of still showing her displeasure in front of Maan at this girl's appointment but not enough to dissuade him completely. Adi as expected pushed for her case and sighed in relief when Maan decided to give her a chance at his recommendation.

kahe koyi kuchh bhi magar sach yahi hai

lehar pyar ki jo kahi uth rahi hain

use ek din toh kinare milenge

udasi bhare din kabhi toh dhalenge

kaha tak yeh man ko andhere chhalenge

udasi bhare din kabhi toh dhalenge

Geet was excited to get her appointment letter and nodded happily as Adi explained her duties and asked her strictly to be in office by 9 o'clock. Geet thanked Adi sir profusely and then off course her Babaji for the new hope in her life.

Precap – Ek Ajnabee Haseena se

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Me first again 😃
Thanks for making it clear di that Dev and Nt are no where related to Geet's past me very happy abt it:)
Okay coming to the update hmm... it looks Geet's family didn't give her any freedom she was a golden bird whose wings were cut and she was forced to hide in a golden cage but somehow she managed to come out of that dangerous shield and now she is struggling to be independent
She wants a job desperately hmm... and as destiny had planned it she lands up at KC so the saga of Maaneet with bitter past and a promising future is going to begin from the next update
Waiting for it Di and yes the song in the precap is one of my fav Kisore Kumar songs 😳

love u always

Yours- Piggy (Piya)

Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
am soo happy today😃... and so many reasons too...first of all ofcourse to read ur update😊... secondly me second to comment and thirdly this is my 2500th post🥳 and am so happy that its on ur thread...yipee am dazzler now...

geet facing difficulties in the crowded bus was so true... i sometimes think will there be any gals who would have not faced it in their life??? with the glimpses of her past shown its obvious that her hardships in the past is becoz of her conservative, strict and male oriented family!!! already hate them... but i know there is more to come...

i loved the interview phase... her nervousness and then the way she confidently answered ... also making her dictate, type, arranging files which usually a sec is asked to do... loved it... i loved sasha too... namoonas hone chahiye na time pass ke liye😆

todays song was new to me... though i saw that film but i dont remember the song and as the net is slow am not able to watch it too... but should i say am so eager for the next part where there will be my fav song and maaneets encounter too...

will be waiting for the next...
Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Tumhare updates ka ab kya kehna...i simply loved it...

So the office thing is as usual from ghsp...sasha trying to pataofy maan and adi working very hard and being maan's confidant and maan in need of a new secretary... Geet is the person who came for the interview...hmm...the interview process you described was very realistic dear...they checked if geet was able to perform well in any work that a secretary performs and she excelled in all of them being a 12th passed out... So maan was thinking about the white dupatta girl with brown eyes...😉... Aur ab toh geet uski secretary bhi bangayi hain...dekhthe hain ki aage kya hota hain... Waiting for the next part...Update soon...
Edited by keerthi90 - 12 years ago
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Hey first of all thanku so much for ur reply. Dear, its all right no problem if i listen twice or thrice i will understand the lyrics 😃
well coming to the update its awesome, loved it very much.

"Couldn't Munshiji had a child who was more like Adi rather than this Sasha?"
i felt bad for maan after reading this line 😆😆 and the whole office scene is awesome. And after the reading the update i felt sad for geet, poor she. As usual her family and geet want to be independent. But worried about her past thinking why she took such a vast decision of leaving her house..
i think i am thinking too much, its just a start we will surely come to know in future parts..
and not to forget about the song i loved it
sasha yaar she never change.. again bossing on geet and calling her behenji 😡 but adi he is such a nice guy. geet is now maan's secretary and maan is thinking of that girl..
i always love independent geet, now i am so excited for precap..
continue soon dear, thanku so much for the pm..
and thanku so much for the reply once again..

Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Di osum update

well eagerly waiting for maaneet encounter
Edited by maaneet5 - 12 years ago
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beautiful
thanx for the pm
cont soon

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