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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Deepu di 🤗

so we finally are getting an update after such a long time for this ss 😃

Awesome start deepu di !!

very well written indeed 👏

the ambiance and all the engagement ceremony ,etc were very well described .

the swayam and sharon coversation was really nice

the Pen name chosen by you is too good , I Likeee 😉

In all loved the update

will be waiting for the next part , update soon..

thanks for the PM.

P.S - thanks for the dedication di .

Love u loads ❤️

Edited by Tanuka_TanHa - 11 years ago

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Satnam

@Satluvsd3

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

woooww di it's a wonderful concept.it's unique n i am looking fwd to it!!😳
the way you described the meaning of love in terms of what the world knows n then ur concept of from the heart to the eyes,trusting those msgs,mails... wooowww this whole concept is penned down beautifully di...⭐️
each and every line was my fav one di!!😃
you will not leave this di,you have to keep it active just like ur other works!!!i am loving this concept!!😳 SwaRon in new shade once again!!!😃keep writing.

chap 1
i am sry 4 delaying the cmnt.😭 i know u were waiting for this one badly!!
OMG!!!di this SS is chumeshwari!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!brilliant start...
i mean wooowww...seriously!!di i mean whatever i reply to u 🤗 😳
n this update was a great start 2 a damn awesome SS.thanks 4 mentioning my name in ur list of buddies!😊
ok yes so coming to ur SS...
i loved the description of the scene ...and our gorgeous DIVA's description too 😳 then how she was not read 4 this forceful marriage...then entry of our swayam...
n i am loving the concept that they REALLY DONT KNOW EACH OTHER!!😳😳
when they came out .n they had a beautiful n simple convo.that convo was so interesting...unique..i enjoyed it di...
i am surprised that ur SS has a new twist ...1. they barely know each other.. 2. huh?sharon through sneha's 😕 now i want to know the suspense getting unfold soon...
gosh!!di i am telling u 4 a little time,you give a break to ur 2 FF's n plz update this soon!!!!!!!! 😳😆❤️
coz i am eagerly waiting 4 this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!love u di.you've done a great job...go di!!!⭐️🤗
Edited by Satluvsd3 - 11 years ago

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Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Deepsy!🤗

I know I promised for the long comment on this too.

But I will not for this one,I have my reasons for it.😕

Look,I can only comment on top top things this time..because it is just a very 1^st update..and I will surely comment LONG one on from 2^nd update.I hope you can understand..becaue I am getting confused on it,to how to comment long one because I don't want to comment fake thing.😊

Back to your update!

HAHAHAHAHAHA,I really really loved the swayam Sharon conversation in last of the update…😆

I am swayam by the way'strange'we just got engaged'..but didn't get a chance to interact with each other'properly'

Hahaha…swayam is funny here..they must be really feeling awkward..engagement ho gai aur they don't even know each others name properly…

I guess'we shall go back to the party'they will think we ran away'.she said'

With each other'strange'he grinned'

You are impossible'lets go inside'she said and got up from her place'

Hey I am possible'.he said and followed her towards the party hall..

I loved these dialogue…my favvvouriteee among all..

They are getting close to each other though..and our majnu I AM POSSIBLE line was aaawww so adorable..

When Sharon heard her parents talking that they made a business deal today..I felt really bad..how can any parents be like this..especially if they only have single child..

I really love it deepy..

Love,Tanya

Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 11 years ago

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Aruba

@sweetcherry95

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

finally yew updated

well well well the chap is just awesome

beautifully penned

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sky_fighter

@sky_fighter

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

COOL!! i love how it started and how it is going, i can guess where it is going but i wont say that as i would love to be surprised by u and u, i can say for sure, are not a typical writer, u like to bring twists and turns and this ss stared with a twist i wonder wht more awaits for us. the starting was fabulously written, i liked it how u gave SwaRon's introduction, then u even made them friend after the engagement it was cute. want to know what shaan and sneha are upto (totally love the idea of using there original names here)

when u updating next/?

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Res Babydoll 😳 (Maria)

unres

Deepu di *Hugging*,

Luvd the update...and ya I'm really confused about wat is happneing...I mean kya ho raha hai?

Yeh toh u will know...anyways like alwaays luv u di and obviously ur updates toh are on cloud9 😃.

P.S:Plz Plz Plz meri yeh 3 demands complete kariyo:

1)Update U & me back to US

2)Update the SS/OS ur writing wid Pratik

3)Unres ur comments on my works :)

With loads & tons of luv,

Karen (Maria)

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Wow nice start . Da way you started was awesome I know der will be lot of twists and turns will be because its deeps writing know . Iam excited for dis . Please do next update ASAP please do not be late 😃 😃

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618368

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

lovely start dips well written 👏👏

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

It was nice quite interesting yar.do continue and plz pm me.

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Aisha

@-.Spark.-

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#60

The first chapter was so awesum...

jus loved it

it was nice they feeling comfortable with each other

and if im nt wrong i guess shan is swayam only. would love to know what happens next.

plz update fast

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