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Gosh Shreya, wat have u done? 😲 n u say u arent happy with this one? 😛 Its the best update of this SS 😳 Detailed comments later.
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Shreya this is ur bestest best update 👏 U mad girl 😡 Stop stealing my lines 😆 They are patented 😛 Even when Pia was away from Abhay she couldn help thinking abt him 😉 It hurts her to realise that she is in love with a guy who is good to her just bcoz he is good to everybody 😕 True love could be a conundrum at times She loves him n she wants him to want her the same way she wants him I am glad she could finally see through his facade of cheery perfectness 😭 Gosh I so didn want Anisha to die Now both Abhiya will blame themselves eternally for her death though there was lil they could have done. If anyone could have helped Anisha then it was Anisha herself U can take a horse to the river but u cannot force it to drink water 😭 Pia's guilt is understandable bcoz she had gone through a rough patch herself n she could see traces of her former self in Anisha but neither does life nor death wait for anybody n thats the bitter truth of our existence Now we all got to know what had destroyed Abhay from within One moment he had a perfect father n a perfect mother making for a perfect happy family and then one bitter truth turns everything upside down When he was trying to get over the trauma of his mother's death he finds out the girl he loved was cheating on him with his own best friend This part actually reminded me of ZNMD. I hope someday he comes to terms with it n confront him rather than run away. He cannot live in the past forever He is a psychiatrist n he shd realise that Gaurav too would have not had a mature sane mind back then as most of our actions in those years of our lives are impulse driven I am not justifying what Gaurav did but still getting over it will help Abhay move on in life. He clearly has feelings for Pia but he cannot acknowledge them as he is still living in his past. He may be the one to solve others problems but he needs to understand that if anyone needs him now, thats his own self 😭 I just loved the way u wrote the moment when they first kissed. Donno y but I find it hard to believe tat u could be just 17 😲 Ur defo an old soul trapped in the body of a teen 😛 I somehow feel Abhay very well remembers what happened between them the previous night but he is denial 😡 n is evading Pia 😭 Pia is leaving n I dont blame her. That last para was written so beautifully 👏 Hats off to u 👏 I can never ever imagine writing something so beautiful n I mean it
FANTASTIC UPDATE 👏 This clearly deserves a standing ovation 👏
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