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Posted: 12 years ago
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I've posted this FF long ago.Most of d ppl have not read it.So i'm posting it again.Here d hero's name is Harshad,not Prem.so plz excuse me...

Plz read...





Ranveer who is a professional killer sees a lady coming to his mansion.She is a tall slim fair lady who has worn a simple saree.Her straight hair is shining.Her tiny lips are like a plum..
He is surprised as no other young lady has entered his place before.
R:Please sit Madam.
She sits with a smile.
She:Hi..I'm Heer.
R:Nice to meet you.Tell me...how can i help you?
H:I want you to kill someone.
He is shocked.
He thinks:For the first time a beautiful young lady is approaching me to kill someone.
R:Who?
H:Harshad.
Heer gives him Harshad's photo.
Ranveer looks at the photo.Harshad looks very innocent and cute.
R:Why do you want to kill him?
Heer's anger destroys the beauty of her face.

A scene comes into her mind.
Heer is sitting on the bed as a bride.Her husband Swayam enters the room and sits besides her.He looks at her with romantic eyes.Suddenly somebody knocks at the door.
Swayam gets irritated:Who has come to desturb us?
He opens the door.That was Harshad.Swayam and Heer are shocked.
S:Harshad?Why are you here?
Harshad beats him heavily.Heer cries loudly.Blood is hugging Swayam's body.

Present:
Heer's eyes get filled up with tears.
H:But Swayam did'nt die.But he got paralysed.Harshad killed my sister Meher also.
Ranveer is shocked.
R:Harshad looks so innocent.He does't look like a killer.
H:There is a devil hidden behind his innocent look.
R:Why did Harshad kill Meher?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow interesting!! Are going to continue!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sreyap92

Wow interesting!! Are going to continue!!

Thanks.I will continue if i get long comments😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi jasmine wow long time 🤗
Mystery / crime / thriller ? At least that's how I feel.
Great start yaar - would you continue ?
I clicked your link and saw the blog - saw the pics there too.
I would like to know more - this is just a sketch isn't it ?
All the best and Welcome Back - missed you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read the part.. and i would say awesome.. really interesting story..
heer want ranveer to kill harshad and i also wanna know why harshad did so...
And i so looking forward to it..
hope u will continue it..

take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start ...very interesting ..
waiting for the next update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
sorry i remember reading this story earlier.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: newt2007

nice start

sorry i remember reading this story earlier.

Yes,i know.U hav read this SS b4.That's y i did'nt pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Just read the part.. and i would say awesome.. really interesting story..
heer want ranveer to kill harshad and i also wanna know why harshad did so...
And i so looking forward to it..
hope u will continue it..

take care

Thanks 4 d long comment.I'll def continue if u all keep giving long comments😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AASUS

Hi jasmine wow long time 🤗
Mystery / crime / thriller ? At least that's how I feel.
Great start yaar - would you continue ?
I clicked your link and saw the blog - saw the pics there too.
I would like to know more - this is just a sketch isn't it ?
All the best and Welcome Back - missed you.

I did'nt know that u hav read my SS b4.Happy 2 know that u still remember me.I will def cont.Thx 4 commenting

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