Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01 - Page 43

Amazing update...
U r such a amazing writer

Aww Such a beautiful ending to a wonderful story... Thank u so much Avantika for penning down this wonderful piece of work🤗

Thats was lvly ending dr ,
amazing update

thank u so much avantika di🤗🤗 4 writing ADHOORI SI DUA it was such an beautiful story that i read on forum a millins of thanx ti u i just loved its each n every word of it form the bottom of my soul...loved ariya...now a lil bit sad ab to yeh bhi neh keh sekti ki update soon🥺

 

well aap ek epilouge kyu nahi likhate of ariyan ther princess n etf' life after this time plz try

Read all the 3 parts in one go and they were absolutely fantastic...

In first part ARIYA romantic moments were too good...and the little conversation between Riya,Shree,Chotu and Arjun was very cute(especially Arjun's comment on Shree for waiting for few more years😉).
And what to say about 2 part...it was super hawwtt😉while reading it,i was blushing like an idiot😆

Ending was very good...especially the last para...it was very touching...

Story was very beautifully written and narrated,hats off to you for that..👏👏
and i have a request,if possible please do write a epilogue,its one among my ADHOORI SI DUA😳😳

Thanks a lot for the story and PM!

Avantika I read this like three hours ago and I still haven't come up with a way to say how much I loved this update.

Thank god for all your warnings otherwise I would have had a silly grin on my face which would have made anyone sitting with me wonder about state of my mind.😆


Seriously my gal this was as perfect as it gets and as hot it can get. 

Above was for part 9B.

While I was making a comment on 9B I realized that you actually posted the last chapter also, so I stopped and read it.

Anyway the ending was superb of course and it was so sweet. I remembered when you started writing this, and I was one of the ones who begged you to continue it and I am so glad you granted us our request.

You are so right this is the most beautiful story about love, marriage and parenthood, the most beautiful part of any couples life and portrayed it so well.

Thank you for making me smile, grin, laugh, cry and blush. Perfect ending to a perfect story.

Thanks so much for the PM.

Wow di 😊
Just read all the three parts...
Thanks for giving us such a beautiful piece of your work...
🤗

Oh too hot .will miss it it was really good

Hey Avantika...thanks for the lovely chapter...couldn't be online because of exams...just read the last three subchapters...it's been such a pleasure reading this story...hope you write many, many more:)

rd it...its cmplt...n I wana rd da whol ff 1nc agn😊

andr fantstc drmyyy stry 4m u

seriously whr do u gt such rmntc ideas...n so welll presentsn of dem ...(as b4 sm hour I rd ur tjp its an awsm 1 n now asd) ur evryy stryy stord so much entrtnmnt 4 us👏

1^st of all ye stryy hay hi drmyyy(as ariya r marrd n riya preggyyy)drmyyy

Den da thrill of ds case...Its rockinggg avantika

Da hot alrt of rmnc wooo😳

It just melt me...arjun is so rmntc 😳😳

Da bathroom scn tk my breth...i realyyy wana b riya in ur stryyy😉

Whn riya clrd him n den he mk hr cln n der hotttnesss s brthtkng🤬

Riya werng his shirt n arjuns cmnt wooo...😳

Den bed scns...😳😳 der kiss😳😳 arjuns feelng 4 riya n his princess r sooo touchy

Den he md hr ,his pillow

U always mk me jlous of riya...😉😆

I love da way u gv us da glimpse of der mrrd life ...which hvnt lost da charm whdr odr mrd couples lost da charm bt our ariya hv alll

wht can I say...or demnd dat gv us ds type of awsm stryyss agn plzz...