Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01 - Page 42

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Posted: 11 years ago
sooo
hottt
canttt
breathhh
blushinggg
like a 
stupid jerk in front of my laptop...
am i insane or its the magic of ur writing??????????
both...
update soon...aur yeh akhri hoga😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...!!!!!👏⭐️
lvd it...!!!!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read the last three parts. Saiyara and Sans I love this two songs a lot. When ever I heard this songs they always reminded me of Ariya. I wanted ki they play this songs in the background in some Ariya scenes. I really wanted to see Ariya's married life. Thnks a lot for fulfilling my wishes.
This ss was really beautiful and amazing. I love it a lot. Thnks for this lovely ss.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it.. . Perfect eway to wrap the story... Again, the song was fitting so very well in it... I am goin to make my boyfriend read this... Coz he is a little buddhe in romance... But then again, some of the things our arjun sir said were so muvh like my bf... So thanku, n also i was blushing throughout while reading... My mom got suspicious as to what i was doin.. Anyways, great update.. And also, abt the epilogue.. I don't think its necessary to write it.. As i feel that getting a ''happily ever after'' is not evrything... Even if u get the start of ur fairytale it enough... I hope u understand my sentiments... See ya... And Best of Luck..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
u r just awesome writer dear
love ur all ffs
u r master in writing emotions
just brilliant
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely updates avantika😃
sorry not being able much to use internet where i am, so i have been only liking your updates, but never managed to comment😳
but since this wasyour last update on this one😳
well needless to say that it was so romantic and mouth-watering😆
you made me blush so much with Ariya scenes😳
it's a pleasure reading your stories
please continue on your Lady in red now and Tujhko jo paaya😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
avantika di u couldnt have given us a better ending...in plain simple words it was BEAUTIFUL😃😃
i loved each n every part of it completely...it was so well written!
god itna romantic...i was blushing throughout😳😳...the washroom scene😳...OMG...i couldnt breathe after reading it😛
u know what arjun's character is so passionate i tell u...but alas we get to see this passion only in his work n when it comes to roshni's memories on screen... i alawys wanted to see a passionate lover,a passionate friend n a passionate husband in him but cvs to karne se rahe meri ye wish puri itni jaldi...but u fulfilled my wish in the most beautiful manner😃😃...this ss has been superb from the very 1st chapter till the last one👏👏
n avantika di please give us an epilogue before u finally end this work of yours...please😳
u know like  riya experiencing the labor  pain n arjun rushing her to the hospital😛😛...are kuch bhi chalega...aap jo bhi likhte ho that is superb...just treat us with one last epilogue!
P.S n all the very best for your future works...keep rocking as always😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
read the whole last chapters together!!
wow yaar!! it was too good.
will miss this SS a lot!!
come back again with a bang...
pls...
👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey avantika

loved each and every part of your writing
believe me i really liked it alot

thanks alot for this story

hope to read more of your work
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Posted: 11 years ago
avantika di..
i m speechless di...
outstanding
fab
amazing
superb
brilliant
excellent
marvellous
piece of works.!!...
i m touched by each update of dis...
dis is one of my fav reading!!.
a request di plz if possible put a epilogue plz...
awesumest work..
chumneshwari in ,terence style di...
congo fr becuming writer of d week di..
hats off di!!.
keep rocking di..!!
all d best fr ur future di...!!!
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loved dis ss...!
grt efforts di...!!

beautiful