Kr-ss-BAATCUTTER Tumne Esa Socha Bhi Kaise(part8) - Page 2

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Hey guys... Thank you for All ur comments nd likes ... Ok here's the second part ...

2nd part

Rey: ( selftalk ) ab mein sach jaan kar hi rahoonga ...

After few minutes swayum reached der before shivam ...

Swayum : (tensed ) rey sab teek hai na ...??

Rey : haan haan swayum ... Bas aaj hume kuch sach patha chalnein wala hai ...

Swayum : kya sach...??? Kaunsa sach ...?? Aur kiska sach ..???

Rey: tumhare questions ka jawab koi aur dega ... Tum bas kahin jake chup jao ... Abhi ke abhi ... Jaldi jao ...!!

Swayum : par rey kyun ... ( cut by rey )

Rey : bas kuch mat puch ja kar chup ja ... Bas esa chupo ki tum hamari baat sun saktha hai ...!!

Swayum : humari ... Tum kiski baat kar rahe ho

Rey: tumhe pata chalega ... Aab jakar chupo ... Pls

Swayum: teek hai ...(in mind ) kya kar raha hai yeh ...!!!

Swayum went nd hide himself ... After few minutes a car came ... Shivam us car se uttar kar rey ke paas aya ...

Swayum :( selftalk silently ) shivam yeh yahan kya kar raha hai ... Aur rey ko isse kya baat karni ... Kahin yeh taani ke bare mein toh nahi ...?? Iski toh mein...

Shivam : rey tumne mujhe kyun bulaya ...

Rey : kyunki mujhe kuch sach janna hai ... Joh sirf tumhe patha hai :...

Shivam : SACH ...????? (in mind ) kahin rey koh mere aur taani ke bare mein toh nahi patha chala na ...!!!!

Rey : shivam tum kahan ko gaye ...???

Shivam : huh ... Ehhh ... Sach kau...nsa sach ...'??

Rey: joh sach tum sabse chupa rahe ho ...??

Shivam:( tensed) mein koi sach nahi chupa raha ... Tum bakwaas kar rahe ho ... Na mujhe tumhari bakwaas sunne mein koi interest hai ... So mein ja raha hoon ... !!

Shivam turns to leave ... Just den

Rey : ( shouts ) mein KRIYA ke sach ke bare mein baat kar raha hoon ...

Shivam just stood rooted to the place hell shocked ...

Hearing dis swayum waz dum strucked ... He was shocked ...!!

Swayum( selftalk ) k..k .. K... Ri..ya

Rey : kya hua shivam ...???

Shivam turned nd faced rey

Shivam : ( stammering) k... K... K .. Ri... Ya ...!!!

Rey : haan kriya ... Bolo abb ..

Shivam : ( stammering ) tu..u...m kya ... Kah ... Rah.. E ho muj...he kuch... samaj ...nahi aa raha ...

Rey : shivam aaj tumhe saach batana hoga pls i beg u ...

Shivam : rey i dont know wat u r talkin about ...

Rey : ( went nd held shivam shoulders on either side with his hands nd asked ) pls aaj tumhe aapni behan ka saach batana hoga shivam plsss

Shivam was shocked to the core hearing the word " behan "

On the other side ,
Swayum went numb hearing the same word ... He was shocked

swayum: ( selftalk ) behan ,,,!!

Shivam : behan ... Tum pagal hogaye ho rey ... Kriya meri behan kAisi ho sakthi hAi ... Mei jah raha hoon ...

Shivam turned to leave but again rey ...

Rey : mein ne aaj tumhe follow kiya tah shivam ...

At dis shivam turned shocked nd faced rey ...

Rey : aur mai ne sab dekha aur suna bhi ...

Shivam was now very shocked he dint know wat to react ...

Rey : pls aaj tumhe uska saach batNa hoga shivam ...

Shivam : t...um..ne mu...jhe follow kiya ...

Rey : haan ab pls batao uska saach aapni behen ke khatir ...

Shivam : ( came bak to his senses nd showed attitude ) koi saach nahi hAi rey ... Bas yahi sach hai ki kriya meri behan hai aur mei uska saga bhai ...bas ..!!!

Rey: nahi shivam aaj tumhe pura sach batana hoga ... Kriya tumhe avoid kyun kar rahi hai ...??? Tumhare wajah se usne apna DOSTI , DANCE AUR ... Koh diya ka matlab kya hai ...??? Bolo shivam plsss

Shivam : esa...kuch nahi hai rey ... Usne kuch nahi koya hai voh bahut kush hai ...!!!

Rey : pls shivam pls sach batao...

Shivam : are yeh kya baat hui agar koi sach hota toh mein batata ...

Rey : ( trying to show sum attitude) ahhh akhir mein kriya ne prove kar hi diya ki voh kiski behen hai... Ek back stabber ki behen hai ... Ehhh ... Woh bhi ek back stabber hi toh thi ...!!! Apni frends ko ese chod ke chali gayi... She is such a B**** ,... a selfish female aur ...(cut by shivam)

Shivam was boiling with anger ...

On the other hand ,

Swayum who was listening to every bit ... Got a call from sharon ( the mobile is in vibrating mode )

Swayum went to cut the call but by mistake he attends it ... He is not aware of it ...

Sharon: hello swayum tum kaha ho ...

Just den she hears shivam shouting from the other side of the phone ...

Shivam : bas rey bas ... (Holding rey's collar) u dare not say a word against her :...: tumhe hak nahi hai ...
He leaves rey 's collar nd says ...

Shivam : tum keh rahe te ki usne apni frends ko ditch kiya ... Tumhe patha bhi hai usne kya kiya hai ... U WANTED TO KNOW THE TRUTH RITE TOH SUNO ...

He den narrated the whole story ki woh kaise smriti koh call kiya aur kriya ke dance ke bare mein bataya .. Aur jis tarah kriya ki ma ne elimination mein dance karne ke liye do shartein raki ... Aur jis tarah usne rey ka dil toda jhut bol kar aur kaise usne apni pita aur bhai se mili... Aur kaise use patha laga ki yeh sab shivam ka kam hai :...

Shivam: aur us din ke baad nahi kriya ne mujhse teek tarah se baat ki ya usne kabhi muskuraya ... ( tears were rolling down his cheeks nd fell down on his knees )

Rey was just rooted to the place ... He was so shocked:.. Tears started rolling down his cheeks ...

Swayum was fully broken into pieces ...

Swayum :( selftalk) kriya ne humare liye ...he started crying

Sharon on the other hand who had heard everything was hell shocked nd she started crying too den she decided to go to college as she knew both of dem needed her ( rey nd swayum )




So guys here it is i know it was boring promise i'll make the next part interesting ,.,,,,

But pls comment ,,,, sab kuch allowed hey ...

Precap- swayum : u bas***d ... Another. Truth revealed...
Rey : baatcutter tumne esa socha bhi kaise ...???
... Kr moments


Hope u guys liked it ...
Edited by kriyaansh.reyam - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey
awesome ss...
cont soon
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
really gud update

but precap mein yeh kya hoga
swayam ko kyu ba***** bola????
aur kisne ab plzz nxt bhi jldi update krna warna mai to confusion se mar jaoongi


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i love it.. plzz pm me for next part.
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awesome update 
shivam told everything 
kuch toh kaam aaya

n precap :/
another truth :/

thnx 4 pm 
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awesome ss
thanks for the pm