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Hi everyone ... I'm writing a kriyaansh short story fr the first time... Hope you guys like it ... If sumone already hv written in a concept like this den i'm really sorry ... Bakwaas band karthi hoon aur likhti hoon ... So here it goes ...!!!
The story is the same , rey gettin jealous about TAANI and SHIVAM . He is totally confused about his mixed feelings about taani... ( remember here shivam is in a positive character)
One day Rey finds something fishy about shivam . He feels that he is planning to betray taani . So he decides to prove taani that shivam is not the right guy. So he plans to observe shivam .
That day after college Rey decides to follow Shivam where and all he goes . So shivam hugs taani and waves a goodbye and gets in the car . Rey starts following him...!!!
Rey: ( self talk) aaj dekhtein hai yeh saala shivam kartha kya hai ...!!!
So rey keeps on following shivam until they reach a huge mansion . Shivam's car goes in . Rey wonders ki ab kya kare ...!!?? He slowly climbs up the wall and goes in he then see that shivam asking a servant ...
Shivam : madam kahan hai ..???
Servant: garden mein hai sir ...!!!
Shivam : acha teek hai tum jao aur hamare liye coffee lekhar aao
Servant : ji sir
Shivam den leaves to the garden rey slowly follows him he hides behind a bush .
Shivam walks to a girl who is standing and watering the plants .
Shivam: aap kaise ho ...?
Girl: aap se matlab
Rey is stunned by the voice he heard ( the girl is still showing her back to rey and shivam )
Shivam: aap humse baath tho kijiye pls aap hume kab tak maaf nahi karenge ..??
Girl : aapko humne pehle bhi kaha tha ki aapko hum kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar payenge ...!!!
Shivam: KRIYA...!! hume pls maaf kar dijiye
At this rey was shocked to the core . He was praying tat it should not be his baatcutter .
By den kriya turned : rey went numb seeing her .
Kria : mAin apko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paongi shivam.. Kabhii bhi nahi ...!!!
Shivam : mujhe patha hai kriya maine badi galthi ki hai lekhin pls mujhe ek baar maaf kardo pls ...
Kriya: aapko maafi chahiye shivam ( tears started rolling down her cheeks ) aapko patha bhi hai aapne kya kiya hai , aapke wajah se humne apni DOSTI , DANCE aur aur ... ( she turns away )
Rey was listening to everything he was confused wat was going on nd shocked to see kriya ... He was goin through a mixed emotions right now ...
Shivam : hume patha hai kriya pls hum aaj , abhi isi waqt tayar hai sab ko sach batane ke liye ...
Kriya : kya sach yeh sach ki mein aapki behen hoon aur ek bhai apni behen ki zindagi barbad ki hai ...!!!
Rey went to a shock mode hearing the truth tat kriya was shivam's sister ...!!!
Shivam : kriya mei abhi tayar hoon kehne ke liye ki tum meri vajah se st . Louis ko chodke chali gayi aur rey ko tumne meri vajah se... ( he was cut by kriya )
Kriya : bas mein ne kaha bas ... ( kriya was angry now ) aur ek shabd sunna nahi chahti ... Nd she left from der nd went inside the house ...
Rey was confused now only the words of shivam tat - only because of him kriya ne rey ko ... He wanted to know wat it is about ... !!!
Shivam : mujhe maaf kardo kriya ( saying dis he falls on his knees and starts crying )
Rey stood der nd listened to everythin ...
Shivam : (self talk) kria us din jo hua ...
*Flashback*
At shivam 's house ( dobriyal 's house )
Shivam : dad kya bath hai aaj aap itni tensed kyun ho ...???
Shivam 's dad ( karan dobriyal ) : beta aaj maine aapki mA aur aapki behen dekhi ...
Shivam : ( shocked ) kya ma ... Aapne meri maa koh dekha kahan papa ..???
Karan : aapki ma mujhe dekh kar bhaag gayi lekhin meine aapki behen ki ek tasveer li. , yeh lijiye ( handing over his phone in which he had taken the photo )
Shivam seeing the picture hell shocked ...
http://www.google.co.in/search?hl=en&gl=in&biw=320&bih=378&tbm=isch&sa=1&q=shakthi+mohan&btnG=#p=2
Shivam : KRIYA ...kya yeh meri behan hai dad ...???
Karan : haan beta yahi aapki behen hai ... Kya aap inse pehle mil chuke hai ...???
Shivam : ji haan ... Dad chaliye mujhe patha hai ki woh log kahan rahte hai ...
They both reach kriya 's house
Kriya and smriti were packing their things as they were shifting back to dehradun
Kriya was in a very bad condition she had not eaten anything properly after tat nite ( pre valentine nite) she did not speak anything other than ..." ji maa ..." smriti was worried about her daughter just den the door bell rang
Smriti went nd opened the door and was shocked to see her husband ... Mr Karan Dobriyal ... Who had left her coz he wanted to make more money .
They had two child :... One was a elder boy nd the other was a girl . At the time of break up karan had taken the son who was shivam nd smriti had taken the girl who was kriya.
Smriti was not smriti ghai but she was Mrs Smriti Dobriyal
Nd kriya wasn't kriya ghai but she was Ms Kriya Dobriyal
After the break up between smriti nd karan . Smriti dint want to see karan 's face again . Karan realized his mistake nd searched for her but he never found her ... Smriti changed her name to smriti ghai ...
Karan : smriti tum kaise ho ..??
Smriti : tum tum yahan kya kar rahe ho , chale jAo yahan se ... ( she shouts)
Karan : par smriti meri baAt toh suno ...
By now kriya came out of her room hearing her mom shout
Kriya : ma yahan kya ho raha hai ...???
Smriti : kriya tum andhar jao
Karan : kriya beti ...
Snriti : voh tumhari beti nahi hai chale jao yahaan se ...
Kriya was confused now
Shivam entered ...
Shivam : maa , kya aap mujhse baT nahi karenge ...???
At dis smriti was shocked
Smriti : shivam tum mere bete ho ...???
Kriya was hell shocked now
Karan : haan smriti yeh tumhara beta hai ...
Shivam ran nd hugged smriti ...
Shivam : maa pls mujhe chodke maat jaiye pls aapne ghar vapas chaliye pls papa koh maaf kijiye ... Pls ma pls ma
Kriya : ma ...a...a ye...h sab ...kya ...ho ...raha hai ...??
Smriti : beta voh nd narrates the whole story ...
After hearing dis kriya ran and hugged karan ... Karan responded the hug with all luv nd care ...
Den kriya luked at shivam nd shivam ran nd hugged her she too responded ...
Smriti after sum time she agreed to go to their house
Shivam goes to kriya's room to help her out in packing but sees tat everything is already packed ... So he asks ...
Shivam : kriya tum pehle hi kahin ja rahi thi ...??
Kriya : ( started crying) and narrates everythin to him kaise uski ma ne use dance karne se roka aur phir do shartein rak kar dance karne di ... Phir pre - valentines night ke din jo rey ke saat hua usne sab kuch baataya ...!!
Shivam was now angry with himself ki usne aapni behen ko betray kiya aur joh b kriya ab guzar rahi hai yeh sab uski vajah se hai
Phir shivam decide kartha hai ki voh kriya koh saach bataye ga ...
Shivam : kriya ... Yeh ... Sa...b .. Me..ri vajah ...se ... Ho raha hai ...!!!
Kriya : matlab ..???
Shivam : voh ... Kr...i...ya meine ma ko tumhare dance ke bare mein bataya aur and he narrates the whole story ...
Kriya was angry now
Shivam : kriya mujhe maaf kardo voh mein ...( he was cut by kriya )
Kriya : bas shivam bas aapko andaza bhi hai apne kya kiya hai... Aapne hume apni DANCE AUR DOSTI AUR MERA DIL JOH REYAANSH HAI AAPNE UN SAB SE MUJHE DUR KIYA ...aapko mein kabhi maaf nahi karoongi...
She leaves the room in anger and tears rolling from her cheeks ...she sees her parents happy so she rubs her tears nd den plasters a fake smile on her face ... Dey den leave to the dobriyal 's mansion ... !!!
After then kriya avoids shivam and always stays in her room thinking about st. Louis
*flashback ends*
Shivam : ( still sittin on his knees nd crying ) mujhe maaf kardo kriya pls ... Pls bagwan mujhe meri behan wapas do ...!!!
Rey den rubs the tears rollin down his cheeks ... Nd decides tat he'll find out the truth at any cost ... Phir rey wahan se chale gaye aur aapni car mein bet kar unhone shivam ko call kiya ...
Shivam : ( selftalk ) rey rey mujhe kyun call kar raha hai ... (Picks up the call ) haan rey bolo ...
Rey : mujhe tumse abhi milna hai college ke bb court now ...
Shivam : par rey mujhe kuch kaam hai ... ( but rey cut in
Rey : mujhe kuch nahi sunna tum aarahe ho ... Nd he cut the call ...
Shivam:(selftalk ) rey ko kya hua ...
Phir rey ne swayam ko call kiya ...
Swayam : haan rey bol kya hua ...???
Rey : mujhe tumse abhi milna hai college ke bb court ...
Swayam: rey sab teek hai na ...???
Rey: haan dude tu bas yahaan jaldi aja ..
Swayam: teek hai mein aa raha hoon ...!!! Nd cuts the call
Rey :( self talk ) aab mein sach jaan kar hi rahoonga ...
To b continued ...
Precap - shivam ... Truth ... Rey and swayam shocked ... Another truth is also revealed ... Rey broken into pieces
Rey : baatcutter...tumne esa socha bhi kaise ...
Kaisa laga guys ...?? Pehli baar likh rahi hoon hope u guys like it ... Jhootas chapples all allowed galiyan bhi allowed hai ... Pls if u like it den hit the like button plzzz ...!!
Part3- pg 6
Part4-pg 9
Part 5- pg12
Part6 -pg 15
The story is the same , rey gettin jealous about TAANI and SHIVAM . He is totally confused about his mixed feelings about taani... ( remember here shivam is in a positive character)
One day Rey finds something fishy about shivam . He feels that he is planning to betray taani . So he decides to prove taani that shivam is not the right guy. So he plans to observe shivam .
That day after college Rey decides to follow Shivam where and all he goes . So shivam hugs taani and waves a goodbye and gets in the car . Rey starts following him...!!!
Rey: ( self talk) aaj dekhtein hai yeh saala shivam kartha kya hai ...!!!
So rey keeps on following shivam until they reach a huge mansion . Shivam's car goes in . Rey wonders ki ab kya kare ...!!?? He slowly climbs up the wall and goes in he then see that shivam asking a servant ...
Shivam : madam kahan hai ..???
Servant: garden mein hai sir ...!!!
Shivam : acha teek hai tum jao aur hamare liye coffee lekhar aao
Servant : ji sir
Shivam den leaves to the garden rey slowly follows him he hides behind a bush .
Shivam walks to a girl who is standing and watering the plants .
Shivam: aap kaise ho ...?
Girl: aap se matlab
Rey is stunned by the voice he heard ( the girl is still showing her back to rey and shivam )
Shivam: aap humse baath tho kijiye pls aap hume kab tak maaf nahi karenge ..??
Girl : aapko humne pehle bhi kaha tha ki aapko hum kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar payenge ...!!!
Shivam: KRIYA...!! hume pls maaf kar dijiye
At this rey was shocked to the core . He was praying tat it should not be his baatcutter .
By den kriya turned : rey went numb seeing her .
Kria : mAin apko kabhi bhi maaf nahi kar paongi shivam.. Kabhii bhi nahi ...!!!
Shivam : mujhe patha hai kriya maine badi galthi ki hai lekhin pls mujhe ek baar maaf kardo pls ...
Kriya: aapko maafi chahiye shivam ( tears started rolling down her cheeks ) aapko patha bhi hai aapne kya kiya hai , aapke wajah se humne apni DOSTI , DANCE aur aur ... ( she turns away )
Rey was listening to everything he was confused wat was going on nd shocked to see kriya ... He was goin through a mixed emotions right now ...
Shivam : hume patha hai kriya pls hum aaj , abhi isi waqt tayar hai sab ko sach batane ke liye ...
Kriya : kya sach yeh sach ki mein aapki behen hoon aur ek bhai apni behen ki zindagi barbad ki hai ...!!!
Rey went to a shock mode hearing the truth tat kriya was shivam's sister ...!!!
Shivam : kriya mei abhi tayar hoon kehne ke liye ki tum meri vajah se st . Louis ko chodke chali gayi aur rey ko tumne meri vajah se... ( he was cut by kriya )
Kriya : bas mein ne kaha bas ... ( kriya was angry now ) aur ek shabd sunna nahi chahti ... Nd she left from der nd went inside the house ...
Rey was confused now only the words of shivam tat - only because of him kriya ne rey ko ... He wanted to know wat it is about ... !!!
Shivam : mujhe maaf kardo kriya ( saying dis he falls on his knees and starts crying )
Rey stood der nd listened to everythin ...
Shivam : (self talk) kria us din jo hua ...
*Flashback*
At shivam 's house ( dobriyal 's house )
Shivam : dad kya bath hai aaj aap itni tensed kyun ho ...???
Shivam 's dad ( karan dobriyal ) : beta aaj maine aapki mA aur aapki behen dekhi ...
Shivam : ( shocked ) kya ma ... Aapne meri maa koh dekha kahan papa ..???
Karan : aapki ma mujhe dekh kar bhaag gayi lekhin meine aapki behen ki ek tasveer li. , yeh lijiye ( handing over his phone in which he had taken the photo )
Shivam seeing the picture hell shocked ...
http://www.google.co.in/search?hl=en&gl=in&biw=320&bih=378&tbm=isch&sa=1&q=shakthi+mohan&btnG=#p=2
Shivam : KRIYA ...kya yeh meri behan hai dad ...???
Karan : haan beta yahi aapki behen hai ... Kya aap inse pehle mil chuke hai ...???
Shivam : ji haan ... Dad chaliye mujhe patha hai ki woh log kahan rahte hai ...
They both reach kriya 's house
Kriya and smriti were packing their things as they were shifting back to dehradun
Kriya was in a very bad condition she had not eaten anything properly after tat nite ( pre valentine nite) she did not speak anything other than ..." ji maa ..." smriti was worried about her daughter just den the door bell rang
Smriti went nd opened the door and was shocked to see her husband ... Mr Karan Dobriyal ... Who had left her coz he wanted to make more money .
They had two child :... One was a elder boy nd the other was a girl . At the time of break up karan had taken the son who was shivam nd smriti had taken the girl who was kriya.
Smriti was not smriti ghai but she was Mrs Smriti Dobriyal
Nd kriya wasn't kriya ghai but she was Ms Kriya Dobriyal
After the break up between smriti nd karan . Smriti dint want to see karan 's face again . Karan realized his mistake nd searched for her but he never found her ... Smriti changed her name to smriti ghai ...
Karan : smriti tum kaise ho ..??
Smriti : tum tum yahan kya kar rahe ho , chale jAo yahan se ... ( she shouts)
Karan : par smriti meri baAt toh suno ...
By now kriya came out of her room hearing her mom shout
Kriya : ma yahan kya ho raha hai ...???
Smriti : kriya tum andhar jao
Karan : kriya beti ...
Snriti : voh tumhari beti nahi hai chale jao yahaan se ...
Kriya was confused now
Shivam entered ...
Shivam : maa , kya aap mujhse baT nahi karenge ...???
At dis smriti was shocked
Smriti : shivam tum mere bete ho ...???
Kriya was hell shocked now
Karan : haan smriti yeh tumhara beta hai ...
Shivam ran nd hugged smriti ...
Shivam : maa pls mujhe chodke maat jaiye pls aapne ghar vapas chaliye pls papa koh maaf kijiye ... Pls ma pls ma
Kriya : ma ...a...a ye...h sab ...kya ...ho ...raha hai ...??
Smriti : beta voh nd narrates the whole story ...
After hearing dis kriya ran and hugged karan ... Karan responded the hug with all luv nd care ...
Den kriya luked at shivam nd shivam ran nd hugged her she too responded ...
Smriti after sum time she agreed to go to their house
Shivam goes to kriya's room to help her out in packing but sees tat everything is already packed ... So he asks ...
Shivam : kriya tum pehle hi kahin ja rahi thi ...??
Kriya : ( started crying) and narrates everythin to him kaise uski ma ne use dance karne se roka aur phir do shartein rak kar dance karne di ... Phir pre - valentines night ke din jo rey ke saat hua usne sab kuch baataya ...!!
Shivam was now angry with himself ki usne aapni behen ko betray kiya aur joh b kriya ab guzar rahi hai yeh sab uski vajah se hai
Phir shivam decide kartha hai ki voh kriya koh saach bataye ga ...
Shivam : kriya ... Yeh ... Sa...b .. Me..ri vajah ...se ... Ho raha hai ...!!!
Kriya : matlab ..???
Shivam : voh ... Kr...i...ya meine ma ko tumhare dance ke bare mein bataya aur and he narrates the whole story ...
Kriya was angry now
Shivam : kriya mujhe maaf kardo voh mein ...( he was cut by kriya )
Kriya : bas shivam bas aapko andaza bhi hai apne kya kiya hai... Aapne hume apni DANCE AUR DOSTI AUR MERA DIL JOH REYAANSH HAI AAPNE UN SAB SE MUJHE DUR KIYA ...aapko mein kabhi maaf nahi karoongi...
She leaves the room in anger and tears rolling from her cheeks ...she sees her parents happy so she rubs her tears nd den plasters a fake smile on her face ... Dey den leave to the dobriyal 's mansion ... !!!
After then kriya avoids shivam and always stays in her room thinking about st. Louis
*flashback ends*
Shivam : ( still sittin on his knees nd crying ) mujhe maaf kardo kriya pls ... Pls bagwan mujhe meri behan wapas do ...!!!
Rey den rubs the tears rollin down his cheeks ... Nd decides tat he'll find out the truth at any cost ... Phir rey wahan se chale gaye aur aapni car mein bet kar unhone shivam ko call kiya ...
Shivam : ( selftalk ) rey rey mujhe kyun call kar raha hai ... (Picks up the call ) haan rey bolo ...
Rey : mujhe tumse abhi milna hai college ke bb court now ...
Shivam : par rey mujhe kuch kaam hai ... ( but rey cut in
Rey : mujhe kuch nahi sunna tum aarahe ho ... Nd he cut the call ...
Shivam:(selftalk ) rey ko kya hua ...
Phir rey ne swayam ko call kiya ...
Swayam : haan rey bol kya hua ...???
Rey : mujhe tumse abhi milna hai college ke bb court ...
Swayam: rey sab teek hai na ...???
Rey: haan dude tu bas yahaan jaldi aja ..
Swayam: teek hai mein aa raha hoon ...!!! Nd cuts the call
Rey :( self talk ) aab mein sach jaan kar hi rahoonga ...
To b continued ...
Precap - shivam ... Truth ... Rey and swayam shocked ... Another truth is also revealed ... Rey broken into pieces
Rey : baatcutter...tumne esa socha bhi kaise ...
Kaisa laga guys ...?? Pehli baar likh rahi hoon hope u guys like it ... Jhootas chapples all allowed galiyan bhi allowed hai ... Pls if u like it den hit the like button plzzz ...!!
index- part1 - pg 1
part 2-pg 3
Part3- pg 6
Part4-pg 9
Part 5- pg12
Part6 -pg 15
part7 -pg 18
part8-pg22
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