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Posted: 10 years ago
nice      
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Please don't let Geet get hurt so soon, they have just come close..
Please give a twist but nit awful one...
Good update...
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Very good update..please no breaking Geets heart...
Love the way they are coming close to each other...
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
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part 27
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amezing part 
finally maaneet becme one after long 
precap is scary maan geet ka dil kaise todega .plz update soon cant wait for twist
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part 27

lovedit..superb

maaneet scene were lovely

precap seems scary

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sorry guys became quite busy with other personal things,  an way back again to day is tues day going update  the story
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PART-28

 

He remembered  their intense love making ….. , with left hand he took the hairs strand which are falling on her face, he kissed her on her forehead….he felt very happy  seeing geet like this……his hands automatically went around her waist…..hugging her tightly ,, she is deep sleep… may do now how many days she did not sleep….  now geet has become his….in every nature,  he will guard her  from every  difficulties ….

 

HIS TRAIL OF TOUGHtS  WERE AGAIN DISTURBED BY THE CELL PHONE RING, HEARING THOSE RINGS GEET WAS MOVING,

Seeing this he immediately took the cell

Where are you I was trying from the last 1 week please come back.. vicky is crying for you,,, I cannot handle… he is having slight  fever….

At once maan shocked hearing those words ……

He got irritated with this

Wrong number saying that he cut the phone….\

What is itni subha subha pura mood  kharaba kardiya is wrong number,.. saying that he again started to pat on the geet   head who slight waking up with the phone sound….he tried to make her sleep

At the same time again the phone rang….

Hearing those rings… maan immediately took it and went inside the balcony… he do not want to disturb geet sleep …

geet what happened to  your voice… you are not coming here .. from last 1 week .. vicky was crying for you… yesterday he got fever also…. He is asking your name please come back…

what happened geet you are not talking any thing.. are you okay

okay  try to come here soon, saying she  cut the call….

Hearing those words… maan understood that the previous call was alo made by her. and it is not a wrong number… he could find out that who is this vicky, why this lady so much worried about this vicky ..

 

at once second.. he could not understand what he should do …. He immediately called the  detective and gave geet no and told him to trace the no

After 10 min his phone rang…, he immediately took the call a if he was waiting for that …

The call  location came from a gokul orphanage center……..

Is this correct address …yes….

IT WAS ALMOST 20 KM  FROM THE CITY..  WHEN CAR STOPPED THE AT THE PLACE …

MAAN GOT DOWN FROM THE CAR AND WAS CHECKING THE ADRESS…..

GOKUL.. HE SAW THE NAME  OF THE ORPHANAGE… CENTER

His steps… stopped, in dilemma whether to go inside or not.. at the same time

Beta andar nahi avogye …

He saw the elderly person asking him to come inside

When he entered the premises,  the whole atmosphere has changed, there was quite peaceful .. fresh air is coming because of the big landscape garden he saw, there is a small play zone.. there..  kids playing  slides, sea saw….

..one boy caught his attention.. the same blue color eyes…., same hair style,..  the way he kept his hands on his small waist, and  fighting with the older kids , same like him…

His legs automatically went there… he wants to see that kid…., at the same time some one called him and the kid  ran inside, maan too walked fast to catch the glimpse  of the kid…

App… koun hai…

At one second he do not know what to answer,

Oh… he remembered  that he came here to meet mayuri who has called geet

Oh I want to meet mayuri

Oh.. for what ..

He is getting irritation for this questions answers section…

  Why ,I cannot see her now..he said in slightly irritated tone

Seeing his behavior, immediately the lady tried to be calm.. vo actually she went how… she will come in 10 min  you wait in her cabin, saying that she made him to sit  in  mayuri cabin

 

Masi …masi...maan heard a shrill voice of kid  who was running into the cabin..

Masi.. app adi  ko  scold karo… vo muje  ..teasu karahahai…

The kids was about fall .. maan immediately tried to catch him before  he was about to fall

Thanku.. maan came from his thoughts with the kids words..

App ka nam kya hai beta …

.. first you…

Maan was lost in his blue eyes

 

There are lot resembles.. of dev in him , if any one would see dev childhood photos, at one  second everyone think about dev

Keeping his hands on his tiny waist he is just behaving just like dev.. the same attitude …

Iam maan singh khurnana…

Khulana… even my name is Khulna hia..

I told my name you tell me your name..

My name.. vicky khulna…

Hearing the name vicky at one second.. maan was shocked ..

Getting  from the shock…he asked apka mumy ka naam..

 

Geet khulana

..hearing those names, he  will felt down at any moment…

 

At the same  time he heard some foot  steps.. she saw one lady coming inside

Seeing her the kid immediately hugged her…

Vicky why you are running here and there, see, you are having fever, if your run like this…your fever will increase….

But masi..  see app.. adi ko scold  karo.. vo  muje .. tesasuuu kara rahi hai…….ha…

Masi you told mama  come….when come…..

See vicky you are good boy no.. mumy is having some office work, she went out side .. she will come tomorrow..

Prmochiee….

Ha baba promise …see now take your medicine.. and take rest other wise your fever will increase….

But adi.. ko dato..

Ha baba I will now take this medicine…

App..

She saw maan standing there, she was so lost in vicky that she did not see him

 

The past came before maan

The way geet and dev wants to marry in hurry…when dev told not even to tell to dadima.. and how geet was behaving that day, as if she is not at all interested in this marriage ..aur dev he was maintain g so secrecy, and that why dev has given shares to geet who is mother of his kid, who is having every right on dev and dev  property , and before dying  he did not understand.. dev uttered about vicky , at that time he did not understand,

At the same time mayuri saw maan

App

I want to meet mayuri

Iam mayuri.. care taker of this orphanage

…..iam maan singh khurnana…

Hearing those words.. mayuri…was shocked …..

Seeing her expression.. maan could guess that she knows about him…

 

App idhar….kaise.

Who is vicky..

Vo…is he geet  and dev son……

He is dev son…….

.you are telling as if he is not geet son

Please listen to my words….

What is there to listen miss mayuri , now you  and geet has done enough damages, now I do not want my brother son living in this orphanage… as if he is not having any one …

He went near vicky… vicky do you  want to come with me..

Where..

Your house..

Kya v..maa is there ..

He lost in his cute talks…

he hugged vicky … ha a slight tear escaped from his eyes

 


precape:  maan  reaction towards geet