Maan - 20
Geet – 14
Maan friend Adiitya and his wife pinky from defense both age 29 ( its amazing Maan and adi friendship the age gap not effect on it .
Geet mother Rano
Geet father Mohinder
Maan mother - Avanti she is single parentEdited by Mahimaan - 1 years ago
Maan visiting his friend house first time he recently pass out from NDA and now going to join Air force in after 3/4 month he come to meet adi with in his uniform itself ….he walking almost running to adi house which is on third floor he pass one foor and he almost trip and on someone rather something soft or say cubby things ….he somhow balance himself and stand and make stand that object from which he …….
There a girl may be 13/14 all cubby little bit overweight but cute …round shape face with big big eyes looking to him with those innocent eyes …she is looking like scare with sudden encounter just then her eyes land on herwardi and his grip on her shoulder before he say anything she make herself free from her grip and run to second floor inside on house and closed the door from inside ….
Maan give confused look like ye kya tha why she run like this like she saw some devil /rakshas ….
Just than he heard noise from closed door ….
Geet kya hua why u closed door like this and why u running ike this like u saw any rakshas kya hua a lady voice come out ….maan wait for while he know doorear is bad manners but he is curious about that girl ans …..whose name is Geet..
Ma wo someone come in Vardi …like police man wo main dar gai thi to thik se nahi dekha aur main bhaag aai usne muje yaha shouder main pakda tha Ma…..
Another voice - kya bol rahi hai Geet kisne pakda tume chalo kon khota hai jisne mere Geet ko pakda ….
Outside Maan get shock with talk where its going he feel angry ye ladki kya bo rahi hai ….
Geet - areee maa app to hamesha like this bandit queen unkone pakda means sambhala muje anhi to main step main gir jati and chot lagti muje …he save me ma …she answer in one breath …
Ma ok ok toacha banda tha fhir why u run like this …jaise koi bhoot hai ….
Geet - don’t know ma wo jab main unke eyes main dekha and main bhaag aai waha se ….dont know why u know I respect so much all person of police and defense ….
Ma anstu sach main jhalni hai chalo yaha aao kichen main help me….
Geet ma mera sholder dard ho raha hai …..unhone bahot jor se pakda tha she give excuse ….as usal …
Maa Geet drama band karo and come here …
Just than out side Maan mobile beep with massage tone and poor soul scold himself what is he doing …..hearing someone communication …he run to adi house like tuffan ….
Adi and pinky welcome him with big smie they alwyes like his prsense its make that house alive.
He start is bak bak like tuffan and narrow all incidence …with his descibinaton pinky mummer syaab wo Geet hogi …thodi jhalni hai kuch dil pe baat mat lena uski waise to wo sirft teen logo se aise nonstop baat karti hai uske parent and me…
Maan give surprised look and reply oh realy muje laga bahot talkative hogi …
Pinky -na na …never now we shifted here 6 month when u are in NDA …she still not talk to adi more than hu ha and acha ask him pinky pointed to adi…
Adi nodded as answer …..
Chalo chalo now I will make your fec dinner waise tumhara saman kaha hai….maan na di wo jana hoga …..but adi cut him what no way tumko yaha 8 days rehana hai without any argument its an order we make so much plan after posting of yours u cannot going to get .chutti so eary so cut this crap ok MR MSK…..
Maan - ok ok bas bas I get your point kitna drama karte ho app yaar….
Maan went to guest room to change and pinky went to kichen side along with adi because toady adi is mood is to make pakoda…..
Maan openher shirt button just than someone ring the bell nonstop like tuffan …Maan get relly irrited he march to door side with thought that he going to give good scold tothat person ye kya tarika hai ring bell karne ka …
Just than pinky also follow she very well know who is this person…..
Maan open the door and say with hard manner don’t u have any manner…..but his other words get stop when who is theperson there is she again with that fear full face ….just than pinky come there and open full door for Geet yes Geet she is come there to meet pinky its their time she don’t know guest in her pinky di house …she alwyes bell the ring like this …but ye raksha to yahi ha wo bhi adha nagu pangu ……aise button open karke kon door open karta hai she once look to babaji and to Maan nude chest ….
Pinky vwry well read Geet thougt and she lamsot pull Geet to her side and ask her to go to her bedroom she is coming …..
Maan give one look to pinky like ye kya hai ….pinky her shoulder with smile ….maan again went to her room ..he changes in other cloth and join to adi in kitchen still both girl in roomhe feel amze …
Adi -don’t know kya ho raha hai pichle kuch dino se she is sweet girl Maan thoda bachpana ahi but with pinky only baki society main kise ke ghar nahi jati wo….
Maan nodded and reapy ha thodi jada hi sweet hai he make action of fat…and both smile on Maan talk.
Maan and adi took all things to living room ….adi called pinky …..he put some pakoda in other dish ..when pinky come out he give that to pinky and pointedto Geet …pinky give it to Geet ….geet mummer thanks to adiand went from t here she not once look to Maan like he is invisible…..
Pinky - ok chalo what are waiting for shur karo …
Adi - pinky tum dono kya baate karti ho akle main
Pinky roll her eyes and say gossip about u ok now chalo finish this ….
Adi don’t ask furher and trio lost in talk
Edited by Mahimaan - 1 years ago
Last eight day its change Maan life and he get toknow about it when he return to his hometown kya badal gaya hai uski life main when that bigs eyes and cubby face start to hunt him in his dream …first he found her childish but now its impossible for him to be away from her like something left behind …. He ischarming hunk but never get attracted to girl like this ….this kid make her kid hi to hai around 13/14……he cried oh god what wrong with me yekoi attraction hai kya but how he is notsayco and uski nazare to uske chin ke nitche gai bhi nahi uski eyes so captative and that cubby redish cheek ….
He cried again Maan duffer only 24 hour hui hai uare not age of this not her …your carries her study ..what the hell wrong with u man…..he caressed his own hair in frustration ….
Next few days really turn hell for him his mind and heart have biggest fight his brain is not with though that love with kid and his heart is there only ,she is kid and what if herchoice get change when she grown up ,what is about his need did her control more 5/6 year till she get age…and this long distance relation what about that biggest question why on earth she will ready for this so critical….is she get deepness of his feeling she is already not comfortable around him ,his love decleration may be make her more withdraw than whatshall he do….so many question making his life hell in true manner.
he want to see her once that why hemake video call so he will get her little bit glimpse her zhalk but its useless its not haapen …he lost his sleep as well as his hunger …only exercise and heclosed himself in hisroom ….after one week its start to show on face when that black marks appear around his eyes …..
In today call pinky and adi noted that and ask reason with tense because his moter also ask them what happen to Maan …and say about his new rutin which is making her tense …
Pinky cannot control herself and ask inangry tone what is all this Maan ….apne apko ..apne kamre ko dekha har cheej bhikari hui hai u are soneat and clean person now look to youand your room …
Maan mummer nothing di wo bas aise hi mood kharab hai thoda ….app kaise ho sabkaise hai…he try to change the topic ….just than someone pass in front of camera and Maan mind alert him its her yes he is 200% sure its her wahi hai ….when he saw her he feel so sukun in his heart his eyes who ooing dead befoe some moment now shining like star an adroble smile appear on his lips ….
This is all small changes but pinky noted it …she though for is he in love with Geet ..she once look to her and try to closed his view but as reaction some tense appeare on his face……
Pinky skip herheart beat both are kid ….and Maan is sensitive andbold and Geet is kidand shy …how come ..is he attract to her….infatuation …but he looking so serious kya halat banai hai khood ki …she need good talk with Maan and that’s also in person not on phone….they talk for while ….pinky make Geet to say hi to Maan ..for which Maan thanks pinky in mind its like some medicin to his heart ..kuch chin sa mil gaya tha usko uski shy Hi main …that sound he feel like soft music …he gras it in his heart so kuch to chain mile uske bechian dil ko ..kuch to rahat mil jaye usko …
After while pinky cut the call and next day adi and pinky fly to Maan home town pinky explain all situation to Maan mother and adi…both get shock with face but they trust Maan they know its not some kind of physical attraction his heart truly in love with Geet …
Maan feel better with both arrival but he is still aloof …..
Pinky - waise aunty I come to took u bothto my house Maan almost jump on his place and ma give surprised look ….
Pinky -kya humari anniversary hai day after tomorrow ye adi a nd Maan is duffer ma …apko bulane ke jagah Maan ne home town aane ka fiasla kiya because both of them forget it …pinky pass clue to adi about forgetting their anniversary ..and adigot it andcarry with pinky drama …..
Maan not ready to trust his luck and his foolishness how he forget about it….after some hour they are in plane back to their house ….a smile is not going form Maan face ..and trio noted that ….
Now biggest problem is Geet and Geet mother what if they say no…they don’t want to imagine Maan halat …
Next day when Maan is in deep sleep itselfpinky and Maan mother pay visit to Geet house where Geet herself open the door now both ladies turn tense they expecting that may be she is in deep sleep….
Geet happy with pinky visit but Maan mother make her little uncomfortable , pinky ask her to get a special cookies from nearby bakeri it will be take more than half hour which so they can talk with her mother.
Geet went with getiing permission from her mother Maan mother already like Geet.
Pinky introduce Maanand Geet mother to each other just than Geet father joind them and pinky without bushing around start the talk about Maan situation …..Geet parent know Maan adi make them introduce and whatever they heard from adi pinky they know he is good boy with good carrer …and now talking with Maan mother they know that he belong to good family but biggest problem is Geet age …she is not mature enouf to go with this relation…
Geet parent turn silent with pinky talk Maan mother eyes fill with tear she know they are not going to sayyes but she come here with hopes …she hold rano hand and say I know its very difficult for so teen age girl parent ..u are worried for her age and maturity Maan commitment dono bahot alag age ke padav pe hai ek kid hai to dusra aise duniya main jane wala hai jaha bahot tarike ke attraction hoge ….agaer apke place pe main hoti to muje bhi decision lena easy nahi hota but…..one things I wantto say with u my Maan is like his father wo jo bhi ho jaye Geet se hamesha juda rehga now no one going to get that place ever ….
And if in future Geet start to like any other person ….maan mother voice turn heavy with emotions than I am the who give her all support ….mera Maan shadi hone tak koi boundry cross nahi karga ..he have only me that’s why mature bahot jaldi and bahot jada hua hai wo Geet ka bachpan khone nahi dega apne kishi bhi need ke liye I trust my child ….Ranoji ….she say with pride … I am not going to force u both ..with emotionally I knowyour no broke my Maan but main sambha lungi usko apko ya Geet ko koi takleef nahi hogi….i promise u…..abhi wo jo halat main hai…she took deep breath …she turn silent for while she cannot abe talk further ….she talk her heart in front of them.
Maan mother start to losse hopes with sience with rano and Mohinder she almost try towithdrow her hand from rano plam when next moment rano hug her bas bas aur nahi bhanji …I don’t know Maan but inthis few moment I knowhis mother and her morals…….and I am the one who going to behappiest person of earth if she will get ready because I knowshe will get veery good family u will treat her like own child.
But bhanji Geet ready nahi hui to I cannot …she don’t say next word ….
Maan mother ans her its ok ranoji hum uske ha ka intzaar karnge ……
Edited by Mahimaan - 1 years ago
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