MG FF - Pyar Hua Chupke Se - Part 44 Pg 132 Sep 15

wow.... love when you are loosing yourself in the land of Maaneet

Congrats on the new FF!! 

fabulous title.

Captivating teaser ....

both are drawn and pulled towards each other

of cos this unlike them

but they cannot resist and get a slight glimpse of each other

however this is not enough....

and they are restless

already waiting for an update....

please post Part 1 today...........

can we have a character sketch! 

So so glad to see you returning back with a bang in the forum! Loved the prelude. Its almost like they felt each other even before seeing. Want to read more and know more..I can already start with a few guesses like may be Geet is dumb - can’t speak… or may be like it would be love at first sight for either or both of them! So eager.. pls update 

congrats for new story

very interesting

continue soon 

Interesting waiting

Congrats for new story..

Interesting..

Continue soon..