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ARManVeerMriara

@ARManVeerMriara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#331

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

QueenShee......kya mast naam hain.......wah..wah..wah..😳...thankyou jaanu 😳😉..aur phoolao mereko😆😆

phoola nahi rahi hoon..sach keh rahi hoon!! U R a⭐️⭐️⭐️..aajse tum humaari QueenShee😉😉

Edited by obsesedbyammy - 13 years ago

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ARManVeerMriara

@ARManVeerMriara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan
Yaha koi I Luv U ka game ho raha hain kya??😆😆..Main bhi kehti hoon, i love you all!! specially humaari QueenShee...(Ashi bindaas naam hain yaar, aaj se main Circuit Bhai ko yahi bulaungi😆😉)...Luv U QueenShee😳⭐️😆😆

Bole toh thanks tuli😉..QueenShee rocks!!😉😃😆

Edited by obsesedbyammy - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: obsesedbyammy
Bole toh thanks tuli😉..QueenShee rocks!!😉😃😆

Edited by ARMaaneetAbhiya - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: Dae_drmer
for da 1st tym meine kisi ka SS ek hi tym mein bohat saare epi padha...it was superb👏..well writeen oyshee!!good job..
i lovd da bonding of Giriraj & manyata...although DEK mein kabhi aisa nah hua...
hayee tum saab ki SS & FF padh pahke i am missing DEK even more...😭
update soon...

Aww..Thanks Pari!!! Luv Ya...i miss DEK too😭😭. I'll update as soon as i'm done with part4😉

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: smiley12
🤗queenshee aka oyeshee urf my circuit bhai 😎tera intazaar khatam hua ye rha mere res wala comment 😆
ur
smiley😊
ria 😊
sisi☺️
paro😳
bandariya😈
chota chatri 😉
drugdealer⭐️
arre jo bolna hai bol lena ajj tuje apne comment se pakka do gi han nai touchal agge wala tu read kar 😉hmmm tune apne ss mein kia mast mast character add kiye hain haye☺️karan tacker as karan😎apun ka tu bhai jasa hai😆and shushant wah ye bhi apun ka bhai laghta hai😆mere 2 2 bhaioo ko apne ss mein add kia tune and raveena sukarti is cute 👍🏼apun ko drasti dhami itni achi nahi laghti but theek hai apni sisi ne kuch tu soch ke add kia hoga na😆just kidding😈apni tu madhubala bhabhi hai re rk dada ki wifey isse bhi add kar deti muskaan ka pati bana ke🤣rk is my dada 3😆 hahahahaha AK ko chor ke pure telly wood ke hero mere dada laghte hain🤣wo kia hai na DIL MERA AK KA ❤️🤣
chal ff pe ate hain
ye salla ghatia chaudry awww iss ki tou😡😆aryan🤢iss ke bare mein apun baat na hi kare tu hi acha hai iss ka tu mein vaarta bana ke 😈chal chor kis ko kiloo gi ye batane ki zaroorat nai samjh ja🤣or ye cikki behen ji or soni anti bhi tere ff mein a gayi behen ji's🤢or ye bloody akash,aryan🤢jo bhi hai jai ko blackmail kar rha tha😡m ne achi band bajji iss ki 👍🏼or j and m bonding is too good👍🏼haye or mere bro karan ka kia kehna jai ko meri bhabhi bana dia🤣👍🏼chale ga😛hame handle karna ata hai 🤣vijaybhai is cute yaar⭐️and m and uv flashbacks 😭ata hai parh ke 👏too good amazing work my oyesheeand unnati and m friendship phele se hi rocking thi ⭐️ but giri or m friendship hmmm good idea😆baap beti ki jodi achi hai👍🏼but susur ji kab bane ge hamri m ke 🤣ok raveena and rajeev scene is good 👍🏼like uday and unnati😎good work👏arre uday kab taak patient 101 bana rhe ga😭my poor uday😭chal isse jaldi se theek kar ab😆or ye kia ye muskaan chaada hai meri uv ki doc🤓dur rakhna isse uv se😆good job👏awesome awesome awesome work👏

or ab jaldi update karna warna agli baar bhi comment res kar ke bagh gao gi 🤣or iss se bhi zaida wait karwaoo gi😛🤣🤗do continue soon😳👍🏼⭐️ 🤗 🤗

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tuliluvsarmaan

@tuliluvsarmaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

THANKYOU ALL FOR LOVING ME SO MUCH, AND LOVING MY WORK
😳😳😳.
ITS JUST IMPOSSIBLE TO DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I ADORE ALL OF YOUR COMMENTS...I LOVE READING EACH AND EVERYONE OF THEM!!! LOVE U ALL!!!
⭐️

I'm posting the PM list here 😳😉😉. So here goes the list (in random order):

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

I'm really sorry if I've missed anyone by mistake...plzz pm me, or post here, with your name if I have, I'll add your name to the list😉😉.

---INDEX---
Prologue: Wait...(Page1)
PM List...(Page1)
Part - 1...(Page5)
Part - 1 continued...(Page8)
Part - 2...(Page14)
Part - 3...(Page 25)
Part - 3 continued...(Page 34)
⭐️⭐️

Abbey yeh kya?? PM list kitthe hain??😲😲

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#337

Originally posted by: tuliluvsarmaan
Abbey yeh kya?? PM list kitthe hain??😲😲

😲😲😲😲😲........yeh kaise ho gaya??..🤢🤢..Ahhh..musibbat!!....Tuli ruk ja, aaj hi theek karr dungi list
😲

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Riyu

@Devil.Gal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

😲........yeh kaise ho gaya??..🤢🤢..Ahhh..musibbat!!....Tuli ruk ja, aaj hi theek karr dungi list
😲

😲😲hein apun ka naam tu first pe tha phir list kaha gai?

Edited by smiley12 - 13 years ago

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oyshee

@..oishu..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: smiley12
😲😲hein apun ka naam tu first pe tha phir list kaha gai?

..list ho gaya gunshuda..🤢🤢.....abhi phirse harr post check karna padega..🤢..tu fikar mat karr meri choti chatri, tera naam top meich daal dunga😆😉

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ARManVeerMriara

@ARManVeerMriara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#340

Okay...so finally got the time to leisurelty comment. Abhi bore matt hona ha oyshee, coz main bohot zyada bollne waali hoon😉😆.

The whole update (all 3 combined) was absolutely⭐️⭐️⭐️. Thank you sooo much for such a long chapter...🤗..I know it takes long to write such big ones, and the wait was soo worth it...but will still request u to update soon, coz u make me desperate to read this SS😆😆..I love it!! One of my fav. Manveer fanfics!! Okay, so now I'm starting😉. First of all let me tell U the new characters are smashing!! Gr8 job⭐️👍🏼. I simple adore DD and KT..they are just..and with DD and SK, u just revived the good-old-DMG memories..hayy, I miss them I tell you😛. And DD in your SS also called Muski😆..arrey yaar Daddu ko bhi le aati na yaha...ramusk ko dekhe huye 3 saal ho gaye😭😭...miss Raooolll C.C.C...😆😆😆😉. And the CS was simply superb!! I feel like I understand them completely!!👏⭐️⭐️👍🏼 It must have taken quite a long time to think them out na?? And then arranging the pics. and selecting the right actors😛.

Okay so agree with Tuli here...felt like punching Aryanator😡😡...but thank you soo much for making him hate-able so brilliantly!!😳..I dont want to feel anything else for him except hatred😡..and thnks for making me hate him so effortlessly😉. Uff..that Chawdhry..but atleast he is smart enough to watch his steps in front of DS😆..A isnt that..bewakoof kahika😆..and the Verma's are back😲..and So is Chikki and Soni?😲😲..I hope they have a purpose, coz bearing them is like🤢.

Loved the way M came to J's rescue..and Oyshee, you r bang on when it comes to speaking through J's mind!! PERFECT!!! J sounded just like "J".😆😆

And Karan and Jai is tooo cute...loved the bickering..U know, Karan Tacker and J do make a nice looking pair!! Would love to read their love story..😃😃..Punjaab da munda aur Rajasthan di item😆😆..waiting for their story to unfold.

VB's too cute!! And hey..Manyata was losr just for a sec. na?? This line of K's affected her didnt it?

"Saari khuda ek taraf, biwi ka bhai ek taraf.."

Uday ne bhi toh engagement waale dinn VB se yahi kaha thaa😳😳..awww, M really does love him alot doesnt she?? This fact I'm loving immensely!⭐️

And the M and Giri bonding was fab!! All dancing with their partners and M and Giri dancing...love this father-daugther thing. More so coz their bond never was shown to develop in the show!!

And the FB no.1 was sooo Day Dreaming

☺️...Manyata and Uday are just meant to be together. They can be togher so efforlessly na..matlab just the she said "Being together.." its so simple for them...😳..just like breathing. And I love it just how you make us readers realise that even this simplicity is so sinsiter..every fb scene seems to have a meaning..seems to highlight their bond and love...yuo r just too good with these...Yahi ek reason hain that even though they make the updates long, I crave for these fbs😆😳. And Vb was too cute...loved this line:

"Ab tum humse aise baat mat karo! Tum jaanti ho agar tum hume aise request karogi toh hum mana nahi karr payenge ..."😳😳

Aur saare scenes ki vividity ki baat main shuru hi nahi karungi...khatam hi nahi hoga😉. Bas yahi kahungi that aisa lagta hain im not reading and watching it on tv...i can almost see them, their expressions, hear their tones..when i read⭐️⭐️..and i can feel what they feel when i read😳..

And then, the hospital senes on UV..was really a fun to read😆.

And Rajeev and Raveena are siblings😲😲😲...okay this, wasnt expected!!😆😆..A nice surprise..and loved their convo and bickering, just like UV and Unnati😉😉.

And then the last scene was sooo full of everthing!!😃😃emotinal..romantic..funny..

Loved hoe Giri noticed M's despair!! proves that he's really changed!! And this line:

"Kash hum aapko woh laake de paatte jo aapko iss waqt chahiye beta" matalb i was like...awww...😆😳

And then the fb...🤢🤢🤢..manveer ne toh maar hi daala!!!

This is got to be my fav. part of this update!!! Loved it to bits!! Simply amazing..I wouldnt talk particularly about this one cos each word..each line..each parah was just sooo perfect in every sense!! LOVED IT!!!

And then, lastly, the kiss...w.o.w...⭐️⭐️⭐️

I was all going

..simply⭐️⭐️..these lines:

"One moment, she felt his answering smile lit up her entire being and at the next, before she could make out what was happening, Manyata felt his lips crush hers.

And...it was simple as that. All pain dissipated, every guilt gone, all doubts cleared and the fears were put to rest. What she felt was not mere passion, but a bruising tenderness and a love so strong it made her shake inside.
Manyata felt the tender pressure of his lips on hers; she could hardly bear the sweetness of it and before she knew, her slender arms went around his neck, every part of her fitting to him as if she had never belonged anywhere else, and she was kissing him back with equal passion. He felt her tremble, and realized he had too- not just from emotion, from the intensity that was making him dizzy and drunk with happiness. They were drowning, both of them, in the joy they felt surjing through them. Uday's love bathed her, shone through her while hers lit every dark place in his soul like a sun. Manyata felt some of her heady joy spill over into tears. Her throat ached, but these were sweet tears, not the salty tears of pain, and she felt her lips smile as they moved in sync with his; she had never been so happy in her life."

just...A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. !!!!...I DONT HAVE WORDS LEFT!!⭐️⭐️..

Another bomb maara hain tune QueenShee is all i can say...now i cant wait at all ofr the nest part!! you've got me sooo gripped!!😆😆..even agar agla update sirf fbs ho and if u dont proceed anyway further, i still be glad coz each fb is just too meaningful!!

Now waiting desperately for part4...update SOON!!!

Edited by obsesedbyammy - 13 years ago