you write an update like this with notes and cooments on top...
loved the update, thier restlessness at goign apart and faith and love that they will be soon...
waise humari halat bhi kuch aisi hi hai...restlessness at them going apart...signs of something bad hapennign and then faitha nd love for our writer to fight destiny to keep Maaneet together...
ek bechaini ruh ko chu jaati hai
tum nazdik nahi hot toh yeh dhadkan dar jaati hai
par khud pe hanste hain hum
jub unke ho gaye toh kyon dare hum
humein toh ek din ek hona hi hai
rab ne agar faisla nahi liya toh ab unhe bhi yeh karna hi hai
jo pehle hi mil chuke unhein ab kaisa dur rakhenge
aasman bhi jhuk jayega bas ab aise hum tumhare rahenge
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