Maaneet OS - Elevator Encounters - Part 2 - COMPLETE - 26/3/24 - Pg 4 - Page 6

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Posted: 2 months ago
#51

Very beautiful os 

Loved their chemistry and understanding of each other 💖

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Posted: 2 months ago
#52

me too absoultely loved the fire exchanges a t the end, couldnt asked for a better ending than this, loved reading this totally

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Posted: 2 months ago
#53

Thanks for posting

apologies for late comments


Part 2

Magnificent update... amazingly written

the challenge was clearly accepted

of cos Maan excelled in what he does

Geet was indeed left in awe of Maan

she cannot help but admire Maan

that look and moment between them said it all

great that Geet realised

well she admitted to herself that she has feeling for him

Maan's thoughts were reasonable 

at least Geet praised Maan

as expected Maan was praising Geet

enjoyed their banter

and play on words 

they indirectly confess their feelings

not surprised with what he did

the kiss surely revealed everything


perfect end


looking forward to more stories from you 

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Posted: 2 months ago
#54

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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wonderful 

geet is proud to see how maan present every thing in front of client who agree with each terms of khurana construction

geet some how manage to concentrate in discussion with client

maan get desire answer/ response  when he says he play for win the challengesn took next step in their relation   

Thank you Aparna!!  I am glad you enjoyed this!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 2 months ago
#55

Originally posted by: taahir004

Ofcourse it was a great ending 

Thanks Taahir, I am glad you thought so!

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Posted: 2 months ago
#56

Originally posted by: Alamelu

Aww....geet so impressed by Maan once again....seeing him ...how he impresses the clients and gets things done his way.....his confidence....everything.....

I am sure he is confident in everything except geet's instance....

dont think he is not confident but excited....for sure....


geet too nervous about this....

but so so love the outcome of it...they both so deserve each other and finally act on their feelings....high time..

so glad geet took the first step in addressing this white elephant in the room...

Thanks Alamelu, there is nothing sexier than a man who knows what he is doing and goes about confidently doing it! :)

I am glad you enjoyed the end to this OS!

And I am glad Geet basically told Maan that she doesnt care about anything else but him and their feelings for each other when she told him let the fire burn everything else away!

Thanks for reading and commenting. 

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Posted: 2 months ago
#57

Originally posted by: manjeet6

Very beautiful os 

Loved their chemistry and understanding of each other 💖

Thank you Manjeet- For me Maaneet defined and set the benchmark for "chemistry" for a long long time, and still do - so if I was able to get that same chemistry through my words, I consider that a great success!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 2 months ago
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Originally posted by: heycookie

me too absoultely loved the fire exchanges a t the end, couldnt asked for a better ending than this, loved reading this totally

aw, thank you sooo much!!!! I am so glad you loved this, and thought this was a fitting end to this OS!!!

Thanks for reading and commenting. 

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Posted: 2 months ago
#59

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Thanks for posting

apologies for late comments


Part 2

Magnificent update... amazingly written

the challenge was clearly accepted

of cos Maan excelled in what he does

Geet was indeed left in awe of Maan

she cannot help but admire Maan

that look and moment between them said it all

great that Geet realised

well she admitted to herself that she has feeling for him

Maan's thoughts were reasonable 

at least Geet praised Maan

as expected Maan was praising Geet

enjoyed their banter

and play on words 

they indirectly confess their feelings

not surprised with what he did

the kiss surely revealed everything


perfect end


looking forward to more stories from you 


Hey please do not apologize for the late comments - I am just glad you read and left this comment for me!! :) 

Yep, Geet is in awe of Maan - and can't stop herself from admiring him - I would admire him too! smiley36

I loved writing that play on words and the fire exchange - so glad that you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

Thanks, I am so happy to know you thought this was a perfect ending for this OS.

I'll surely write more as Maaneet has once again awakened the writer in me - hope you enjoy them! 

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Posted: 2 months ago
#60

They were ready to combust and they did. Both like playing with fire and both intend to fully burn. With each other of course.