Very beautiful os
Loved their chemistry and understanding of each other 💖
Very beautiful os
Loved their chemistry and understanding of each other 💖
me too absoultely loved the fire exchanges a t the end, couldnt asked for a better ending than this, loved reading this totally
Thanks for posting
apologies for late comments
Part 2
Magnificent update... amazingly written
the challenge was clearly accepted
of cos Maan excelled in what he does
Geet was indeed left in awe of Maan
she cannot help but admire Maan
that look and moment between them said it all
great that Geet realised
well she admitted to herself that she has feeling for him
Maan's thoughts were reasonable
at least Geet praised Maan
as expected Maan was praising Geet
enjoyed their banter
and play on words
they indirectly confess their feelings
not surprised with what he did
the kiss surely revealed everything
perfect end
looking forward to more stories from you
Originally posted by: aparna3011
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wonderful
geet is proud to see how maan present every thing in front of client who agree with each terms of khurana construction
geet some how manage to concentrate in discussion with client
maan get desire answer/ response when he says he play for win the challengesn took next step in their relation
Thank you Aparna!! I am glad you enjoyed this!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Thanks Taahir, I am glad you thought so!
Aww....geet so impressed by Maan once again....seeing him ...how he impresses the clients and gets things done his way.....his confidence....everything.....
I am sure he is confident in everything except geet's instance....
dont think he is not confident but excited....for sure....
geet too nervous about this....
but so so love the outcome of it...they both so deserve each other and finally act on their feelings....high time..
so glad geet took the first step in addressing this white elephant in the room...
Thanks Alamelu, there is nothing sexier than a man who knows what he is doing and goes about confidently doing it! :)
I am glad you enjoyed the end to this OS!
And I am glad Geet basically told Maan that she doesnt care about anything else but him and their feelings for each other when she told him let the fire burn everything else away!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Originally posted by: manjeet6
Very beautiful os
Loved their chemistry and understanding of each other 💖
Thank you Manjeet- For me Maaneet defined and set the benchmark for "chemistry" for a long long time, and still do - so if I was able to get that same chemistry through my words, I consider that a great success!!
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Originally posted by: heycookie
me too absoultely loved the fire exchanges a t the end, couldnt asked for a better ending than this, loved reading this totally
aw, thank you sooo much!!!! I am so glad you loved this, and thought this was a fitting end to this OS!!!
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Thanks for posting
apologies for late comments
Part 2
Magnificent update... amazingly written
the challenge was clearly accepted
of cos Maan excelled in what he does
Geet was indeed left in awe of Maan
she cannot help but admire Maan
that look and moment between them said it all
great that Geet realised
well she admitted to herself that she has feeling for him
Maan's thoughts were reasonable
at least Geet praised Maan
as expected Maan was praising Geet
enjoyed their banter
and play on words
they indirectly confess their feelings
not surprised with what he did
the kiss surely revealed everything
perfect end
looking forward to more stories from you
Hey please do not apologize for the late comments - I am just glad you read and left this comment for me!! :)
Yep, Geet is in awe of Maan - and can't stop herself from admiring him - I would admire him too!
I loved writing that play on words and the fire exchange - so glad that you guys enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!
Thanks, I am so happy to know you thought this was a perfect ending for this OS.
I'll surely write more as Maaneet has once again awakened the writer in me - hope you enjoy them!
They were ready to combust and they did. Both like playing with fire and both intend to fully burn. With each other of course.
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