DIL DEWANA (A FAN FICTION) - Page 13

Very nice but sad update.Post soon....

nice but it was a sad upodate i dont like sad updates

sweet but sad........i hope mansen agrees to get arjun married to bhoomi....ur update was 👏

hey sidra a very very very very nice update......ab bas mansen maan jaaye unki shaadi ke liye.......aur ye yuv ke bache ka kuvch karna padega.......always kabab main haddi.....

Hello 2 all thanx 4 those comments and I am sorry but I am really busy these days:

RECAP: engagement of Yuv and Bhumi held a-b r worried.

Bhumi sitting with Arjun, her head is on Arjun's shoulder, Bhumi has camed a little down Arjun is in deep thoughts

Now Arjun is thinking of the moment when Bhumi was ringed up by Yuv

B: Arjun ! mai kya karon?? Mai ……..

Bhumi sees Arjun in deep thoughts

B: Arjun !……………..Arjun

A: hummm!

B [crying]: Arjun mai kya karon ???

A: pata nahi Bhavri !! mujhe bhi kuch samjh nahi aa rahe ….kuch pata nahi hai kya karon kya na karon

B: Arjun toh kya hum dono alag …………………………………

A: nahi !

Looking at Bhumi

A: nahi Bhavri hume koi alag nahi kar sakta ….

B: Arjun aaj jo hoa us ka mai ne kabhi soucha bhi nahi tha !!

A: kis ne soucha tha kai tum os Yuvraj ki ho gao gi

B: Arjun Yuvraj ko maloom tha magar pher bhi os ne ……

Arjun is silent

B: Arjun mai tumhare bina nahi ge sakti

A tear rolls from her eyes looking towards Arjun silently….Arjun's love appears in his through a tear

B: nahi ek pal bhi reh sakti …

A: Bhavri

a-b hug ..Arjun wipes Bhumi's tears

A [in slow voice]: chalo Bhavri

Both come back 2 Goenka house , Bhumi goes 2 her room silently and Arjun goes 2 his room, Mansvi sees both of them she becomes sad

Bhumi in her room sits on the couch she think about the whole thing happened then she looks the engagement ring she cries and angrily puts off her ring she throws the ring it fells on area near bed….Mansvi comes in

Bhumi sees Mansvi but says not a single word Mansvi picks up the ring and sits beside Bhumi

M: kya hoa??

B: bhabi jo hona tha woh toh hogaya abh iss se bora kya ho sakta hai !

M: Bhumi mai tumhari halat sumjhe sakti hon

B: uncle ko issa karne ki kya zaroorat thi

M: pata nahi papa ko kya hogaya hai !

B: mai un ko apne babuji ki tarha sumjhte thi magar ……

M: Arjun kitna khush tha kai tumhari aur uski shaadi ki baat………..magar sub kuch bighar gaya

B: bhabi mujhe kis cheez ki saza mil rahi hai?? Iss ghar mai aane ki ya Arjun se pyar karne ki

M: Bhumi

B: haan bhabi …kuch pata nahi hai kai kya galti hoi hai mujhe se

M: koi galti nahi hoi hai tum kya apne aap ko …..

B [crying]: galti ho hai bhabi mere saath saath Arjun ko bhi sub kuch shena pare ga …… mai kuch bhi seeh sakti hon bhi per Arjun ko dukhe nahi dekh sakti…

Now in Arjun's room Shruti comes

S: bhaiya !!

A [slow voice]: aao Shruti !

S: sorry bhaiya !!

A: sorry?? Kyon??

S [crying]: I am really sorry mai ne he aap ki aur Bhumi ka ki shaadi ki khabar sona kar……..I am sorry bhaiya

A [holding Shruti's hand]: nahi Shruti tum ne toh woh kiya jo ek behan ko karna chaheye tha !!

S: bhaiya aap kitna pyar karte hai Bhumi di se aur dad ne … I don't know unhon ne issa kyon kiya??

A: papa ne jo kiya so kiya magar Yuvraj os ko toh sub pata tha magar pher bhi …. Mai osse nahi chordo ga … I will not leave him os ne meri Bhavri mujhe se chene hai …

S: bhaiya plz kise bhi kimat per Bhumi di ki shaadi Yuvraj se nahi hone chaheye …Bhumi di sirf mere bhabi bane chaheye

A: woh tumhari bhabi he bane ge….

Arjun leaves in anger…next day in the morning in shaku's room Mansvi comes

M: maa!

S: haan beta !!

M: maa ap se kuch baat karni thi

S: bolo

M: maa…aap ko pata tha kai ….kai

S: kai kya ??

M: kai Bhumi aur Yuv ki …..

S: haan pata tha….Mansen ne bataya tha

M: maa aap ne kuch bola kyon nahi ???

S: Mansvi mai ka bolti …. oon ho ne Bhumika ki shaadi tae kardi thi aur mai ne Mansen ko roka tha magar …..

M [worried]: maa aap nahi jante kya kogaya hai …… iss engagement se Bhumika ki he nahi balke Arjun ki bhi zindagi barbaad hogae hai

S [confused]: iss se Arjun ka kya taluq??

M: maa Arjun Bhumi ek doje se pyar karte hai

S [shocked]: kya ?? Mansvi yeh tum kya keh rahi ho ?? Arjun aur Bhumika….nahi

M [little crying]: haan maa yeh such hai … aap dono yeh theek nahi kiya ….

Mansvi leaves, shaku becomes very much worried

In office, Arjun is in his cabin he thinks about all he looked stressed after a moment he leaves his cabin……he goes 2 Yuv's cabin

Arjun brakes into Yuv's cabin, Yuv is talking on phone

Y: yeh kya batamizi hai Arjun ??!!

Arjun goes near Yuv and holds his from his collar

Y: how dare u ??? tumhari hemat kasie hoi

A: how dare u kai tum ne meri Bhavri mujhse cheen li..haaan?

Y: Arjun abh woh meri ho choki hai

A: shut up Yuvraj ….shut up !!! woh sirf meri hai ….

2 be continued …

hope u all like !!!

Plz post cooments about it

Sidra

👏 bohot dino baad hi sahi lekin aapne update to kiya...................poor A-B..........aage kya hoga??????

great ff 👏 but really sad 4 a-b,plz post da next part soon ,can't wait now

hey sidra nice update once again.....but feelin 😭 😭 sad for a-b and gussa for that idiot yuvraj 😡

it was a nice update but still that sadness is there so i feel not a very good update

hey where r u sidroobaba25 ,plz update ur ff