DIL DEWANA (A FAN FICTION) - Page 11

hi it was nice i liked it but what nxt where is the update y do u take so long 2 update plz update soon

Hello 2 all well here is the next part of my fan fic:

RECAP:VEDAI ENDS AND MANSVI COMES HOME.

Arjun is with Mansvi

A: bhabi aap ka kehna bhi theek haiwaise yeh kaam ghar ke bhardhe loog karne wale thi per…..

M: per ??????? devarji………… kya baat hai??

A: bus kuch baat nahi! Aap intazar kigeye!

M: arjun batoo na!

A: ok ok bhi bata doon ?

M: haan na !kis baat ka intazar kar rahe ho ???

Then shaku calls Mansvi

M: aai ma!!!!arjun tum se mai baad me baat karte hon

A: no prob!!!

M: baatana zarror!!!!

Then Mansvi leaves

Arjun 2 himself

A: bhabi mujhe bhi intazar hai!!

Now in bhumi's room, Bhumi is folding her clothes then Arjun comes

A: hello Bhavri ji !!!!!!kya horaha hai????

B: Arjun aao na !!!kuch nahi bus kapre theek kar rahi thi !

A: aaj koi kaam toh nahi???

B: nahi toh kyon ????

A: aasi hi bhabi aur Suraj ja rahe hai toh mai suoch raha hon kae kahin bahar chele gane!!kya kehte ho??

B: waise mera bhi dil chah raha tha ke tumuhre saath kahin jano lakin aaj mujhe kaam hai

A: lakin tum ne bola….. tha na…. kai koi kaa nahi !!yeh bori baat hai Bhavri !!!!!!!!!

B: accha iss mai naraz hone ki ka baat chalte hai

A: sure!!!

B{laughing}: 100%

A: acch toh pehle hum Suraj aur Mansvi bhabi ko airport chorde ge pher bahar jae ge ok!!!!!!!!

B: accha baba jesa tum kaho!!!

A: that's better ……………..and get ready ok !!!!

Now Suraj and Mansvi are leaving and every one in the house is standing to see off s-m arjun is putting bags in the car …….then shaku 2 Mansvi

Sh: beta khayal rakh na !!!!!

M: maa aap bhi!!!

Now Mansvi 2 Mansen

M: papa plz take a very good care of ur self!!!

Man: u too beta!!!

Then all people say bye 2 s-m and then a-b & s-m sit in the car …………………..and off they went 2 airport

Now at the airport Arjun and Bhumi are leaving Suraj Mansvi in the terminal ,now Bhumi 2 Suraj

B: Suraj ji aap umari bhabi ka khayal rakhye ga!!! Aur jaldi aane ki koshish karye ga !!!

S: theek hai Bhumi !!!!

M: Bhumi tum bhi aapna khayal rakh na!!

Then Mansvi thinks that she has 2 talk 2 arjun about his marriage

M: arjun zara ek minute yahan aana!!

A: kya ????

Mansvi takes Arjun aside

A: kya bhabi !!!

M: tum kuch bata ne wale thee na!!

A: kya bhabi???? flight nikal jae ge!!

M: Arjun !!!! shadi …………lardki……………!!kuch yaad aaya!!!

A: ooooooooooooooohhh!!! Bhabi aap wapis aajo pher……..

M: nahi abhi …….!!!

A: ok ok !!! app uss ko jante hai bhabi!!!

M: mai jante hon !!!kon …..kon …kon??????????

A[in slow voice]: Bhumika

M: kya?????[happy expression] Arjun …….mai …mai buhat kush hon tumhare lea!!!!!! Bhumi jesi lardki tumhe buhat mush rakhe ge !!!! uss se acchi koi ho hi nahi sakti

Then Suraj called Mansvi

S: Mansvi chalo bhi aab kya hoa???

M: kuch nahi Suraj !!!!

Then Bhumi comes 2 hug Mansvi, Mansvi hugs her

M: Bhumi abh tum bhi jald humare ghar bahu ban kar aana

Bhumi [shocked]: bhabi aap ………………!!!!![shy]

Bhumi looks at Arjun

M: mujhe sub pata hai ……………..!!!

Bhumi becomes shy

Then Suraj comes

S: kya hoa????

M: chalo Suraj !! arjun bhumika bye

Both a-b: bye bhabi !!!bye!!!

Then Suraj Mansvi went away ,then Bhumi 2 arjun

B: toh tum ne bhabi ko bata hi diya!!!

A: such toh samne aana hi tha na!!

B: tum bhi

A: abh chale

B: sure!!!!

Then arjun and Bhumi went 2 a restaurant

B: woww!! Arjun buhat acchi jaga hai

A: accha kya kho gi????

B: mai…………

Then arjun's phone rang

A: Bhavri excuse me!!

B: accha !!!

Then yuv came into the same restaurant

He sat ,then he saw Bhumi alone he went

Y: hi

B: hello

Y: aap yahan?

B: woh mai ………………………

Y: never mind akhir hum pher mil gae

B[tensed]: hummm!

Y: well aap ko iss jaga ka kya khayal aaya this is my fav place

B: assi hi

To be continued hope u all like it well I am sorry again I posted ff very late, I am really really busy with my college well sorry again

Plz post comments about it !!!!!

Cheers

Sidra

hey sidra very very nice and well written 👏
and this yuv humesha beech main tapakta hai 😡

toooooooooooooooooo good sidra !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
👏
very well written... seriously yuv koi abhi tapakna tha 😡
waiting for next part eagerly 😃

nice part sidra 👏 👏 ..aur yeh yuv kya 24 ghante goenka's ki choukidari karta hai kya? har baar galat waqt pe entry karta hai 😡 .sidra jaldi jaldi update karti ja plzz.

hey gr8 update 👏
n' thanks alot

Veryyyyyyy nice sidra 👏 .But try to post soooooooooooooooon 😭

very nice sidra ,gr8 ff ,update it soon ,can't wait mow

It was nice continue the good work finally u updated

hey plz cont soon itz been more than 2 weeks since u last updated