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Posted: 19 years ago

Here is the next part of my ff and thanx 4 those comments sorry of being late sorry again

RECAP: Yuv pop out b/w Arjun and Bhumi

Here v go:

Y: well aap ……u r really beautiful ……

B{tensed}: ji!………oh thanx

Y: aap mujhse …………………………………………………

Then Arjun comes

A: Yuvraj tum yahan

Y{in heart} : oooh no yeh kahan se aa gaya !!!

A: Yuv !!!!!!!!!!

Y: hi Arjun tum yaha kase????????

A: well Yuv this is supposed 2 be my seat on which u r sitting

Y: what …..yani tum aur bhumika …………

A: yeah…… Bhavri ne tum he bataya nahi ??????

Y[looking at Bhumi]: nahi

Now Yuv 2 bhumi

Y: tum ne mujhe baataya hi nahi??!!!

B: woh aap ne mujhe kuch kehne ka moka he nahi diya!!……waise bhi ka hota nahi

Y: haan!!

A: well Yuv u r most welcome 2 sit with us!!!!!!!!!!

Y: no thanx I sould be going

A: see u at office

S: sure……bhumika have a splendid evening !!!

B: thanx

Yuv left in anger as he usually does

A: toh kya khana hai

Bhumi is silent

A: hello

B: kya ??

A: kya???kahan khoi ho ????

B: kahin nahi

A[holding her hand]: kya baat hai ????

B: mai Yuvraj se mil kar hamesha aageb sa feel karte hon ………

A: kyun??

B: bus thori buri se feeling hoti hai !!!

A: haan …Yuvraj thora se alag hai …I mean woh hamesha tehri baat karta hai ………well he is kind of demented ………

Bhumi laughed

B: Arjun mai ne aab demented nahi kaha tha ….! Ha! Ha! Ha!

A: nahi seriously ………

B: chalo bus abh kuch order bhi karo …………………

A: ok then

Arjun give order…..

a-b had food, now Yuv is outside the hotel, he is bursting in anger now Yuv waited outside the hotel till then a-b came back Yuv hid himself behind a tree now a-b stood near the car

B: Arjun thanx it was very nice!!

A: bus thanx he kehna tha……that's not fair

B: fair???? toh kya?

A: may be a hug …………………

B: Arjun!!

A: kya tum ne kudh hi kaha tha mai ne bol dia

B: agar mai kahon na toh???????????

A: toh mai pher bhi hug karon ga ……

B: accha toh yeh lo!!!

Bhumi hugged Arjun, Yuv was in great anger

a-b left, Yuv also went 2 home

At Yuv's home, Yuv throwing all thing here and there…..

Y: I will kill that Arjun !!!!! mai usse mar dalon ga !!!

Then Devnatt enters

D: Yuvraj yeh sub kya hai???? Bolo??

Yuv is silent ………Devnatt again asked

D: Yuvraj …???

Y: dad mujhe shadi karni hai…

D: beta per itna udhum macha ne ki kya zarorat thi ?????

Y: aap Mansen uncle se baat karen..

D: why not beta !!mai abhi tumhari aur Shruti ki shadi ki baat karta hon

Y: nahi papa mai Bhumika se shadi karna chaheta hon!!!!!

D: kya ?????????????? yeh tum kya keh rahe ho yuraj????

Y: mai theek keh raha hon dad! Mujhe Bhumika se shadi karni hai

D{in Anger}: tum pagal to nahi ho gae ?? kya hoa hai tumhe

Y: haan haan haan mai pagal ho gaya hon !!!!!! papa mai Bhumika se shadi karo ga warna!!!!!!

D: Yuvraj!!!

Y: dad plz mujhe Bhumika hi chaheye plz dad plz !!

Devnatt thinks a lot ………then he answers Yuv

D: theek hai

Yuv becomes happy

D: mai Mansen se baat karon ga!!

Y: oh thanx dad u r the best !!!!!!

Then Devnatt calls Mansen…………

That's all friends It short but I hope u all like it well I had been really busy these days sorry again ……………

Be happy,

Sidra

Edited by sidroobaba25 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
its is great continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
finally an update...but u did a good job 👏 ...agli baar chota hi sahi lekin update jaldi kiya karo yaar..plzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
sidra dear.....awesome and beautifully written 👏 ......and this yuvraj 😡 😡

update soon......very good update
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Posted: 19 years ago

Hello 2 all well how r u all well here is the next part of my ff here v go:

RECAP: Yuv wants 2 marry Bhumi….

Now next morning Devnatt called Mansen

M: hello Devnatt how r u???

D: theek hon !….Mansen tum se kuch baat karni thi …….

M: bolo kya baat hai ??

D: Mansen woh …..woh …

M: kya ???

D: Mansen woh Yuv Bhumika se shadi karna chaheta hai !!….

M: what …..Devnatt tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai ???? yeh kya keh rahe ho tum ???????

D: haan Mansen mai theek keh raha hon Yuv Bhumika ko pasand karta hain!!!

M: Devnatt mai Bhumika ki shadi kai silsale mai kuch nahi kar sakta woh vasudev ki beti hai meri nahi ……!!!

D: haan per Yuv ………………………..

M: dekho Devnatt mai souch kar tumhe baton ga !!

D: theek hai Mansen !! magar plz souch samgh kar fesala karna !!!

M: rakhta hon!

D: ok bye

Mansen thinks a lot then …..now in the kitchen Bhumi baisa and shaku work

S: Bhumi zara sabzi mai nimak check kar lo…

B: ji !

Then Bhumi 2 shaku

B: ma ji Mansvi bhabi aur Suraj ji kaab aae ge ?????

S: haan beta kal baat hoi thi perso {day after tomorrow} aaga ee gea..!!

Baisa: haan Suraj aur Mansvi ki buhat kami mehsoos ho rahi hai !!

B: woh toh hain!!!

S: Bhumi tum kal kahan thi ???

Baisa: haan Mansvi ne tum se baat karni thi aur tum gayab thi !!!

B: woh bus bahar gai thi ….

S: theek hai

Then Arjun comes he stands outside the kitchen trying 2 call Bhumi finally after so much effort by Arjun ,Bhumi saw Arjun ……she comes out

A: kahan thi ??

B: yahi toh thi !!…..

A: arrae yar mai ne souch tum mere kamre mai tea le kar aao gi per ……….

B: per Arjun ji mujhe aur bhi buhat kaam hote hai mai aap ki tarha fazol kamon mai nahi lagi rehti!

A: yeh fazol kaam hai ???…….theek madam ……

B: tum bhi …..zara sa kuch kaho toh naraz ho jate ho !

A: toh asse baat karne ki zaroorat hi kya hai jo mujhe naraz kare!!!

Bhumi laughed

A: accha abh jaldi se hug karo aur mai office jaon …

B: Arjun …………………

A: hummmm…

B: tumhe sharam nahi aate .

A: nahi toh

B: ooof!

A: accha abh jaldi karo !!! iss se pehle koi aa gae

B: baad mai na!

A: kyun????

B: kyun ka matlub kay ????

A: plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

Bhumi laughs

B: Arjun tum bhi

A: come on

They hug ………………….

A: thanx aur mai chalta hon!!

B: shaam ko jaldi aana!!

A: oh ho…..Bhumika ji kya baat hai !!!

B: shut up aur jao!!

A: bye ,love u , see u and………….

B: and?

A: bye

Then Arjun leaves ,Bhumi also returns 2 the kitchen but Mansen saw Arjun and Bhumi together he became very very very angry ….then he thinks …and then he calls Devnatt ….

D: hello.

M: Devnatt mai Bhumika aur Yuv ki shadi kai liea razi hon…….

D: kya…..Mansen per tum ..???mai ….

M: woh mere dost ki beti hai aakir mai uss ka bhala hi chahon ga !!!!…..

D: per??

M: waise bhi Bhumika Yuvraj ko shayad pasand karte hai Yuvraj se accha lardka usse mil nahi sakta ……..!!

D: thanx Mansen tum ne mere dil ka buhat barda bojh ottar diya…

M: ok then….

D: Mansen tum ne bhumika se baat ki???

M: nahi !

D: toh phir ?? tum kaise ……..

M: mai janta hon kai Bhumika meri baat nahi taale gi ……..

D: magar….??

M: agar magar kuch nahi !!!

D: toh theek hai mai doo teen din mai shagun le kar ata hon aur tab he unn dono ki shadi ki baat paki kar duon ga!!! Is it ok

M: fine 2 me …….

D: ok then bye ….see u soon!

M: bye then….

Then Devnatt tells Yuv the news…

D: congrats soon Mansen maan gaya

Y: I knew it dad thanx

D: I am happy 4 u son !

Y: I am very very very happy ..

D: mujhe office ja na hai catch u later

Y: bye

Then Devnatt leaves

Y: abh Bhumika tum meri ho sirf meri….kasi aur ki nahi ……

Next morning in goenka group of industries, Mansen calls Devnatt in his cabin

M: Devnatt mai souch raha tha kai Bhumika aur Yuv ki shadi humre company ki anniversary kai din karon

D: that will be splendid!!!!

M: ok then toh group ki anniversary kal hain toh tayar rehna!!!

D: right

M: bye then

Now at home Mansen and shaku in room

M: mai Bhumika aur Yuvraj ki shadi ki bare mai souch raha hon!!

S: {shocked} kya ?????????yeh aap kya keh rahe hain??

M: Devnatt ne Bhumika ka haath manga hai !!

S: toh aap ne kya kaha??

M: mai ne haan keh diya!!

S: kya ?????????????????…..aap….aap issa kaise kar sakte hai???Bhumi se bina pouche …..

M: Bhumika mere dost ki beti hai uss kai bare mai fisala karne ka haq mera bhi hai!!

S: magar kya Bhumi

M: I am sure woh iss shadi se khush hoge !!

S: magar…………..

M: plz shakuntala abh bus bhi karo !!!

Then shaku thinks a lot

In the evening shaku goes in the dinning hall and talks 2 baisa about Bhumi's marriage …..

B: kya?? per Mansen ko iss baat ki kya soji???

S: yeh toh mujhe bhi pata nahi !!

Then Shruti comes

Shruti: kya pata nahi mama?

S: kuch nahi !!…baisa aap souch ye ga!!

B: theek hai!!

Then shaku leaves, now Shruti 2 baisa

Shruti: baisa mama kis bare mai baat kar rahe thi ???

B: kuch nahi bus Bhumika ki shadi kai bare mai !!……accha mujhe mandir jana hai

Shruti: ji

Baisa leaves Shruti becomes really happy

Shruti: iss ka matlub Bhumi di abh meri bhabi bamne wale hai!! wowwwwwwwwwww!!

Arjun comes back home he goes into his room and Bhumi comes with a cup of tea

A: aaye madam !!

B: kaise ho ??

A: tumhe dekh liya I am fit now

B: tea 4 u !

A: thanx

B: Arjun tum aaj kal buhat busy rehte ho kya baat hai??

A: Bhavri bus Goenka groups ki anniversary aane wale hai iss lia

B: kab??

A: kal iss lea buhat kaam tha I hope kal ka function accha hogaye

B: zaroor hoga

A: Suraj aur bhabi kab aa rahe hai??

B: kal….. hum dono unhe lane gaye ge

A: as u wish my lady

B: bus bus !! abh chai piyo aur khana kho aur ….

A: aur???aur kay Bhavri??

B: aur Arjun……

A: aur kya Bhavri??

B: aur soo jao!!

A: kya??

B: haan!!

A: that's so unromantic!

B: ok then bye

A: sono toh !

B: mujhe buhat kaam hai !!!! baad mai baat kareen

A: Bhavri !!!!!..I love u na isse nahi karte!

B: love 2 and bye

then Bhumi leaves and Shruti comes

S: hi bro!

A: hello ….kaise ho ??

S: theek !!! bhaiya kaisa chal raha hai pyar aap ka ??

A: chal he raha hai !!

S: I think kai intazar ka time khatum ho gaya hai!!

A: mutlab??

S: mutlab kai I think mama aur dad Bhumi di aur aap ki shadi ki baat kar rahe hai

A{with tons of happiness}: kya ?????? r u serious

S: yes bhaiya I am…….

A: oh Shruti tum ……tum ne meri zindagi mai khushi biker de hai …..thank u a lot!!!

S: bhaiya no need to thank !!!! mujhe Bhumi di jasi bhabi milne wali hai iss se zyada mujhe kuch nahi chaheye !!!!

A: mujhe bhi !!!!!! I love Bhavri too much !!!!!!!!!!!

To be continued……

Hope u all like it !!!!

Plz do post somments about it

Cheers

Sidra

Edited by sidroobaba25 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
is baar i am very happy 😛 itne jaldi update jo kiya,aise hi acche updates likhti raho....and this time the update was 👍🏼 👍🏼 .....
ab i think A-B will misunderstand that its their marriage and bhoomi will agree to get married thinking its arjun, am i right??
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Hey sidra nice part.Post very soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey sidra it was reaaly nice and superb....... 👏

dis yuvraj 😡 😡 and manssen too.....uff

but anyways the update was really beautiful and nice
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Posted: 18 years ago

Hello 2 all my fellows thanks 4 comments so today is ff day and I am posting mine.

RECAP: Mansen agrees on Bhumika's marriage with Yuv and their engagement is on Goenka groups anniversary.

Here we go:

Now its Goenka group anniversary and Arjun and Mansen are at home

M: Arjun aaj ka function best hona chahiye !!

A: why not papa! It will be !!

M: Arjun tum ja kar arrangements dekh lena!

A: ok papa …..

M: see u later

A: papa aaj Suraj aur Mansvi bhabi bhi aa rahe hain

M: haan toh tum ja kar le aana !! pher Suraj ko bhi ceremony per lai aana….ok I have 2 rush meri buhat important meeting hai!

A: yes dad

Now Arjun in Bhumi's room, Bhumi is wiping the mirror then she sees the reflection of Arjun ….

B: Arjun tum ????

A: kaisi ho ?

B: kyon mujhe kya hone laga ???

A: accha chodo …! Aaj mansvi bhabi sur Suraj ko lanne jana hai aur meri saath chal rahi ho!!

B: accha zabar dasti !!

A: ji !! abh chalo unki flight aane wali hogi

B: tyar hone do !

A: bus theek hai na …..chalo !!

B: Arjun mai …..

Then Arjun holds Bhumi's hand they go …..

At airport

Arjun shouts

A: Suraj !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

S: hi Arjun

s-a hug

S: kasie ho Arjun ????

A: kaise nazar aa raha hon??

B: namaste Suraj ji !!

S: arrae Bhumika !!! kasie ho??

B: theek …..Suraj ji Mansvi bhabi kahan hai?

A: haan Suraj bhabi kahan hai kahin unhe wahi chor nahi aae !!

S[laughing]: tum nahi sudhro ge !!

S: lo woh aa rahi hai!!

M: Arjun Bhumika !!

A: bhabi kahan thi aap ??

M: kuch nahi tum kasie ho ?

A: well still cool!

M: Arjun !!!!!!!!……….aur Bhumi tum ??

B: theek bhabi

A: abh bhabi ghar sub aap ka intazar kar rahi hain

S: chalo……….

They reach home

Baisa: Suraj tum logon ko hum sub ne buhat miss kiya

S:hum ne bhi …………………….maa papa kahan hain??

Shaku: Suraj unki meeting thi …tum un se aaj function per mil le na …..tumhe function kai bare mai toh yaad hai???

S: haan maa ….kasie bhol sakta hon

A: aur bhabi trip kaisa raha ??

M: buhat accha….buhat maza aaya ….maa ji mai aap sub logon kai lia gifts lai hon !

Shaku: beta iski kya zaroorat thi

S: nahi maa!! yeh toh buhat kaam hai iss ne toh aadeh se zayada waqt aap logon kai lia shopping karne mai laga di

M: Suraj !!!

A: bhabi that's not fair!

M: Arjun….

Then they laugh…Mansvi takes Arjun in her room

A: bhabi kya hai??

M: Arjun tum ne Bhumika wali baat kise se kahi ??

A: kahan?

M: Arjun .. tum ek number kai pagal ho !

A: bhabi kya karta Suraj nahi tha na iss liea office mei he busy raha…kyon aap ne Suraj se kaha??

M: nahi ….accha Arjun aaj mai thorda sa late hoge thi na

A: haan!! Kyon?

M: mai ne airport per ek jeweler se ring order ki thi

A: kis kai liea??

M: Arjun !! obviously tumhare liea!!

A: kyon ??

M: kyon kai devar ji aap ne Bhumika ko yeh ring pehna ni hai sumjhe!

A: oooooooooooh!! I see !! bhabi waise ek baat hai

M: kya ??

A: that u r gr8!!

M: bus bus maske baz …..Bhumika ko yeh ring sham ko pehna dina

A: ok

M: accha abh tayar ho gao kuch ganthe[hours] he reh gae hain function ko !

A: ok mai chalta hon

When Arjun goes toward the door he remembers the thing that Shruti said him

A: bhabi

M: haan?

A: mujhe lagta hai dad meri aur Bhumika ki shadi karwa ne ki souch rahe hain.

M:[with happiness] kya ?? Arjun are u sure ??

A: nahi not very but Shruti ne mujhe kaha kai us ne mama ko baisa se Bhumika ki shadi ki baat karte sona hai….

M: Arjun that's wonderful ! mai bhi aaj function se pehle Suraj se tum dono ki shadi ki baat karon gi !

A: that will be gr8 !! bhabi thanx a lot !accha mujhe jana hai see u !!

M: bye

Now Mansvi goes 2 Bhumi's room

M: mai ander aa sakti hon ?

B: bhabi aaye na

M: Bhumi mai tumhari liea ek dress lai thi ……mai chaheti hon kai tum aaj shaam ko yeh dress pehno

Mansvi take out a pink sari from the shopper

B: wow! Bhabi thank u !

M: ur welcome tum iss dress mai buhat sundar lago gi

M: accha toh tayar so jao !

B: ji !

Now at Devnatt's house

Yuv is getting ready and Devnatt too

Yuv wears his coat

D: beta aaj tumhari engagement hai and I am really happy !!

Y: dad it feels wonderful …mai jis se pyar karta hon uss se meri engagement hone wali hai …..i am waiting 4 that moment !

D: me too son !

Now in Goenka house every 1 is ready, Suraj and Mansvi are in their room getting ready

Suraj is in standing wearing his watch and Mansvi is in front of the mirror

S: Mansvi pata hai aaj ka sara function Arjun ne arrange kiya hai I hope it all goes well

M: it will !!!

Then Suraj comes near Mansvi and puts his arms around her neck

S: kya baat hai Mansvi buhat acchi lag rahe ho !!

M: accha ?

S: haan !

M: Suraj mujhe tum se kuch baat karni hai

S: bolo!

M: Suraj Arjun aur Bhumika ……

S: haan………..Arjun aur bhumika kya?

M: Suraj ….they ….they love each other !

S: kya ?

M: haan Suraj ! woh dono ek dosre ko buhat pyar karate hai !!

S[happy]: per kab se ??

M: jab se milae!!

S: toh abh aagee kya ?? maa se baat ki

M: nahi souch rahe hon mai he baat karon

S: u r right woh dono toh nahi kahe ge !

M: pata hai

S: waise Mansvi Bhumika aur Arjun kitne aache lage ge na!

M: haan!!

S: come on Mansvi we r getting late

Then all go 2 the venue of the function, it's a lawn decorated with lights there is also a stage present many people r invited now Suraj goes 2 Arjun

S: Arjun mujhe Mansvi ne sub bata diya

A: what ??

S: haan

A: suraj mai kuch galat toh nahi kar raha??

S: nahi …yeh kya keh rahe ho ???? pyar karna koi galti nahi hai!

A: thanx tum ne mera buhat hosala bhardha ya hai ….bhabi ne mujhe yeh ring di hai Bhavri ko pehna ne kai liea

Arjun shows the ring 2 suraj

S: toh ??? pehna do!

A: abhi mooka dekte he pehna du ga!

S: ok then

Bhumi wore the dress which Mansvi gave her she looked ravishing in pink sari

Mansen goes on the stage

Manen: ladies and gentle men can I have u attention plz!…Goenka groups …yeh naam hamesha se top per raha hai …aaj Goenka groups ki 68th anniversary hai ,yeh company mere papa ne shuru ki thi pher mai ne isse bardhaya aur abh is company ko mere dono bete Suraj aur Arjun control kare ge ….

All people claped

Manen: thank u …..Goenka group hamesha se he best rahi hai ,aur iss sub ka credit humare workers, shareholders aur sari administration ko jata hai ……hum sub ne iss ko asman thak gate dekha aur abh umeed kare ge kai iss he tarha yeh group hamesha top per rahe …

People clapped

Mansen: aaj hum aap logon kai saath mil ker khushya manai ge !!…..humare ek share holder aur admin member and very close friend of mine MR.DEVNATT apni ek khushi aap kai saath share karna chahete hain ……..i want 2 call Mr.Devnatt on stage

Devnatt comes on stage

Mansen: and Yuvraj

Yuv also comes

Mansen: I am pleased to announce kai mai apne dost vasudev ki beti BHUMIKA ki shadi YUVRAJ se paki karta hon

Arjun and Bhumika r very very very SHOCKED and so r Suraj and Mansvi …………..

Bhumi is standing with Mansvi & Shruti …..a tear from Bhumika's eye roll over her cheek …..Bhumi is tensed,she is silent all other people are clapping but Bhumi is silent

Arjun is also silent ,he also is crying Suraj, Shruti and Mansvi r worried

Suraj is standing with Arjun he puts his hand on Arjun's shoulder, Arjun is still silent

Mansen: I want Bhumika on stage

Yuv is smiling ….

Shaku says 2 mansvi

Shaku: beta Bhumi ko stage per lekar jao

Mansvi is worried she thinks in heart

"nahi maa mai aisa kis tarha karon in dono ki pyar ki mai sakshi thi aur mai he Arjun se uss ka pyar dur le gaon!!!! Aisa kyon hoa ???kyon"

Mansvi also cries and Shruti is depressed

Shaku: kya hoa ??

M[wiping her tears]: kuch nahi!

Shaku: beta usse wahan bola rahe hain gao !

Mansvi goes 2 Bhumi ……Bhumi is still silent she is only crying .. Mansvi comes she wipes Bhumi's tears …Mansvi holds Bhumi's arm and they go towards stage, Arjun stood still sad and worried

Now Bhumi is on the stage ,Yuv is happy ,Devnatt brings the rings

Mansen: Bhumika Yuvraj ko ring peh nao

Mansen gives the ring to Bhumi

Now Bhumi holds the ring and she sees Arjun who is crying another tear fell from Bhumi's eye both a-b r silent Yuvraj forwards his hand

Mansen: Bhumika!……………….Bhumika!

She looks Yuvraj then she looks Arjun

Mansen looks Bhumika and then 2 Arjun

Mansen 2 Bhumi

Mansen[kind of angry]: Bhumika ring pehnao !!!!

Bhumi listens 2 Mansen she slowly forwards her hand 2wards Yuv's had her hand shewer……

Mansen: pehnao!!!!!

Bhumi puts the ring in Yuv's fingure

Arjun cries ….Bhumi too + s-m, Shruti weeps a lot

D: Yuv beta abh Bhumika ko ring pehnao!!

Y: yes dad!

Mansen: Bhumika apna haath do !!

Bhumi looks at Yuv with anger…then she looks too Arjun with love with tears in her eyes

Yuv takes Bhumi's hand and puts the ring all people clap baisa and shaku are little worried too

Now Shruti in heart

"yeh sub Arjun kai saath he kyon hoa mera bhai kitna khush tha uss ki khushi ko kisi ki nazar la gae"

now Mansen 2 people: thank u all ! dinner will be served in a couple of minutes …

now Yuv 2 Bhumi

Y: well now u r mine !!

Bhumi looks Yuvraj in sadness and in anger, she runs away from Yuv , Bhumika goes 2 mansvi and Shruti………Arjun standing with Suraj "crying"

S: Arjun mai papa se baat karon ga !!

Arjun is silent he cries …… on the other hand Bhumi Mansvi and Shruti are alone , Bhumi hugs Mansvi and cries a lot

B: bhabi yeh mere saath kyon hoa ???? bhabi kyon???

M: bus Bhumi chup ho gao !!! plz stop crying

B: mai Arjun se buhat pyar karti hon mai uss kai bina mar gaon ge !!!!!!

Bhumi weeps a lot

Shruti[crying]: bhabi yeh dad ne theek nahi kiya un ko pouch na chaheye tha !!

M[crying]: pata nahi Arjun per kya beeth rahi hogi ????

Bhumi thinks about Arjun ….she runs …..Arjun is in the car parking he is sitting on the bonnet of the car looking on the ring which Mansvi gave him, Bhumika comes running

Arjun sees her they both stand still they both cry Bhumi comes running and hugs Arjun they both cry and cry and cry a lot ……………………………

To be continued

I hope u all like it plz post comments about it !

Sidra

Edited by sidroobaba25 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey sidra thanx for da update
nice update 👏

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