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hey tora awesome update.I so loved it.The way u described all mysteries surrounding Abhay,his house & MP.I know tht boy was real but who was he?Wht Marian wrote in diary?Wht chand is hiding?Plz cont..
thank u😳r have done it without your help😊Originally posted by: lost_in_love
---edited---superbly written tora!!! 🤗love it...❤️.you have explained everything wonderfully with exact details..nd the errie feel all around...⭐️ lets see now...wat mystery is waiting for abhay!!! 😉 great job dear !!! 👍🏼
thanx mansa..glad u like it😊..things will get clearer soon...and piya will enter after one or two updates..Originally posted by: mandy1024
Brilliantly written Tora 👏 The way u had described the mansion n Abhay wandering on his own, I could literally imagine each n everything like it was happening before my eyes 👏 Brilliant ⭐️ This concept is superb! Amazing, I am loving it. Please unfold the mystery soon. So Chand is trying to help Abhay n Brijesh accept their legacy? 😃 Brilliant 😊 BTW how will Pia fit into this story? Waiting to see how Abhiya relation will progress too along with the main plot of course 😳
glad u like it dishu.😊Originally posted by: ..dishu..
wow tora. u sure are bulding up the mystery very nicely. great work.
thank uwahooo gr8 update⭐️😊👏...really suspence...continue soon plzzz nxt chapter😊
thank uOriginally posted by: DonIsback
awesome update
thanx megha..abhay is neither a wiccan nor a vampire..hmm...he will know some secrets after reading the diary,not all...Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
nice update
so is abhay a wiccan or a vampire???what's the boy's connection to abhay...is he some ghost?i think may be abhay might learn all his secrets after reading that diary...waitin for that...thanks for pm
Nice update..
The story is getting interesting..there is so much suspense & mysteries...
Continue soon
thanx for the pm
tc
Originally posted by: rashi.rose
Fantastic update:-):-)
Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
very nice up date ...suspense so much ...very nice story
thanx juhi..all the mysteries will be cleared soonOriginally posted by: -juhi-lily-
brillant update tora
so it was chand who called them...but wat actually is abhay???waiting for the mystry...continue soon thank u for pm😊
glad u are liking it juhi..Originally posted by: luckdiya
fabulous tora...its full of mystery...abhay is a caring bro😃
continue soon
thank uOriginally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm
😆u sound like piya...😆all your questions will be answered soon😊Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Ok. Who was that boy?
Who was Mariam?
What was chand thinking of?
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