thanx shivy..u will come to know about mariam in the upcoming update...and some mysteries as to who abhay is will also be revealed😊Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
Wow amazing great update
Who was the boy n what legacy does abhay have to discoverWho is Mariam RodriguesThanks for the pm
glad u like itOriginally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia
an amazing and suspense full story thanks for pm
thanx..Originally posted by: trishnawaliya
nice part
thanx renu..things will clear up soon..piya will enter soon..after one or two updates..Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu
Mysterious update tora..watz up tat lill boy..n dat chamber?so many mysteries..m sure m gonna enjoy dis..wen vl pia enter?w8n 4 nxt update;)
thank uOriginally posted by: CrazyFanSuku
very nice up date thanks for pm
glad u like it dear..dat boy has a connection,u will know soon..and as for chand..ya he kows a lot..because he knew abhay and brisshy's parents wellOriginally posted by: cutesukirti1987
After going thru this update only words dat cum 2 my mind are:HELL MYSTERIOUS N MIND BLOWING!
Who was dat boy who got disappeared frm abhay's view? 😲 chand seems 2 know d mysteries from abhay n brijesh's past 😲
cntinue soon!!
awesome update..
thank u tanu..all mysteries will clear up soon..ya piya will come in soon..just let me develop abhay's story a littleSuberb update ⭐️ I liked that car scene where Abhay could see a boy. Looks like Mariam Rodrigues was Abhay's mother n now he's found her diary... this is very mysterious. Will Piya be entering soon? Thx for pm 😊
thanx anji...ya mystery bahut hain in this story...Originally posted by: anjali0111
amazing update!!!!!!!👏
it was very interesting ...who was that boy who came in front of the car???
the palace was described beautifully...secret passage n all..mystries start ho gayi.😆
btw are you from MP?😊
thanx dear..u will know what abhay is soon enough..awesome update
loved it
who was the boy?
Is abhay wiccan?
Who's diary was that?
too much suspence
cant wait 4 next part
wiil update today,i thinkOriginally posted by: pkyekrox
Cont soon!!
-Gauri
thanx romi..lolz i know it's all very mysterious..glad u like it..Superb update tora, but it's hell mysterious, my head is spining right now. Severeal questions are there, but I know u will not answer them now, waiting for the story for proceed further which will surely solve all mysteries slowly.
U described each and every scene brilliantly, abhay and brijesh bonding was shown amazingly.
Plz continue soon and thanks for the pm.
thanx primaOriginally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
Amazing update👏Eagerly waiting 2 noe wats in d diary..😃
thanx dear...mysteries will slowly clear up..Originally posted by: spn-abhay
hey that was an awwesum update👏
continue sooni wonder wat mysteries r w8ing 4 abhay😳sorry 4 late reply
wow..ayesha..your comment made me sooo happy..it's the first time i am seeing ur comment on any of my works😳glad u are enjoying it...and thanks for the suspense in ur comment too😆Originally posted by: matwamango
I feel bad coz this is the first chance i have gotten to read your FF. I am always so busy. Time really doesn't wait for anyone and there aren't enough hours in the day.
Ok this is how i felt about the FFI really enjoyed the way U have kept all the suspense so i decided i would give U some of my own.I thoroughly enjoyed everything you have written. Fantastic to the core. I can't wait to read more. I may not always reply but i will try to respond whenever i can.
thank u..will pm u the other ffs i am writing too..Originally posted by: vampireking
The ff is really nice :-)i will surely gone read from now ahmm btw is there any ff of yours where abhay is going to take revenge from piya to make feel bad to piya bro!is there any ?so pm me acctually i dont remember the name of the ss or ff
thanx roshni..i am glad u r liking it..Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
Lovely upd tora 👏
U described everything very brilliantly and u very good at building suspense .Really wondering wats the mystery , amazing jobPlease conti soon 😃
thanx shrish...i know there r a lot of mysteries..everything will come out with time😊Originally posted by: cuteshrishti
hey tora awesome update.I so loved it.The way u described all mysteries surrounding Abhay,his house & MP.I know tht boy was real but who was he?Wht Marian wrote in diary?Wht chand is hiding?Plz cont..
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